This revision of the script continues to move some things around. I've replaced an 8 page section from the back that Art had loosly scripted and incorporated that loose script into how the kids got in trouble with the time cops, setting them up for Kevin's script.

The whole flow looks like this: Please pardon my lack of skillz. I was rushing.

There is a very serious problem with the ending at the borderline between Mango Chris and Jason/Chris H. The script can form a loop. I'm going to talk to both of them to see if we can fix it.

This continues to look better and when I get some initial art, I will link to it here.

Later

Patrick Lewis.

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