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| Chapter Ten chapter ten: section one Venus Smurf 2004-05-18 NO! You're not going to let the bad guys get Sam, are you? I like him! I don't want him to die! Besides, wouldn't that bring Serena's parents into it? I thought she wasn't ready for that yet. Then again, she'd probably never be ready, so maybe it's a good thing that you're probably going to force the issue, ne? Oh, goody. Lita's back! I like her. She's one of my favorite senshi...probably because she's got Serena's innocence and Raye's temper. Great combination, that. You've given her a bar? Well, that's original. I don't think Lita's ever owned a bar before...and in Ireland. You're comment about the drunks is probably a massive understatement. Might've been worse if it was Germany though, right? I don't think even the Irish can compare to Oktoberfest! I'm glad you had Lita be the one to save Sam. She's pretty scary, but I'm sure she's just the one to inspire confidence in a little kid. Well thought out. Once again, brilliant writing of an action scene. You really are amazing, and I love all the little nuances you add to your fic. You're stunning. AfGhAnEyEz 2004-02-19 lolz man u made da monster take Sam all da way 2 Ireland dat cracked me up wut Lita said though GreAt roswellachick 2003-10-15 no not sammy!! " He was actually one of the few men in the world who made her feel small."--wow thats quit a compliment from lita..."Grabbing the claymore that Zak had bought her last Christmas..."--jejeje that explains theirrelationship in a sense "...envelope it. He sword, covered..."-->do u mean HER sword?? WAIT?? sam in scott??--boy those villians r stupid ^_^...jejeje Lady of Pluto ([email protected]) 2003-09-27 Is it Ireland or Scotland that she lives in? In the preview two chapters ago, you said Scotland, so I'm wondering which one it is. Any hoo, good work, and keep on writing!! Bluejello 2003-08-19 *blinks* Lita in Ireland... Right. Good idea, though! Just getting used to the thought of her in the land of shamrocks and beer. All right, using Sammy as bait maked sense. But why was he taken to Ireland? More than a little confused... Terenity Rose 2003-08-12 Great story. I love the story line. Keep up with the good writing. I can't wait until the next chapter. Kaji1 2003-08-11 HEY! miss me? lol, ok so not only has it been about a month since I've checked, BUT LOOK AT HOW MUCH U'VE UPDATED! I love it, and I think it's really great how u did the regular S/D moments, it kept it more human, moe emotional, than just with all fighting, or scoutlyness. Also the thing with Serena's bro, and bringing in Lita that way, GENIUS! seriously, I love it! I can't wait to read more from u, u'r absolutely amazing! supremely wonderful authoress skills...OK...now that i've kissed enough ass, I should go, but honestly, amzing work girl, keep it up. H&K Kaj. happygolucky111 2003-08-10 YES! ITS ABOUT TIME LITA WAS IN HERE! hee hee jkjk ooh but PLZ update soon! this chappie TOTALLY left me in suspense, and i want to know more! *nods like crazy* ^^ anyway, i hope the next chappie will b just as good *if not better* ^^ keep writing! firelightz 2003-08-09 I'm confused, how did sammy get to ireland? did I miss something. Please keep updating looneygirl 2003-08-09 oh, what a horrible place to stop! you had to do a cliffy, I so hate them *whines* ok, I'm better now, but you must update soon...please?? ^^ kalinda 2003-08-09 omg that was such a great chapter i cant wait for you to get out the next one SeleneA 2003-08-08 Good Job!! Please update soon, and include Neph plus the other two generals! Serenity55 2003-08-08 longer chapters, faster chapters! 'ats the way ta go!! aye matey, 'ats the way ta go!! good story creative. where r u goin' with the monsters? Sailor M. H 2003-08-08 I love this story so much! I hope that you continue. I give you -takes sheet off giant thingy in backround that appeared out of nowhere- THE GIANT CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIE OF APPROVAL! Now, I have to leave to restrain from stealing the cookie...byebye! lazzykane 2003-08-08 yeah i like her and the way you intro sammy in it too(sneaky but great)yes i would like more and i also like the way you have her owning a bar it makes since because i can see it now, being from her grandfatherand all.it suprise me though that zak isn't her boyfreind(but i can live with it,it's a good twist) now it will be interesting to see how serena will find out where her brother is at and with whom he's with..(bowing to you)as always i'll be waiting Marni 2003-08-08 Great way to introduce Lita! Ginny-Star 2003-08-08 Yay! Lita is here! And the puppy! I LOVE dogs! Lataz! Ginny-Star (^-^)/ Jedi Master Calriel 2003-08-07 I loved this chapter! I can very easily imagine Lita running a bar in Ireland. When is Nephrite going to come in? Who attacked the monster that had Sam? Was Sailor Moon? Or maybe one of the others? Oh, or could it have possibly been the Outers? Oh, so many possibilities! I guess I have to wait until you update. So update soon! Belle ([email protected]) 2003-08-07 OH MY GOD... THIS STORY IS SO GOOD. I'VE NEVER READ IT BEFORE BUT I STARTED READING IT AND I READ THE 23 CHAPTERS REAL FAST! THAT'S HOW HOOKED I AM! NOW I NEED MORE... MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! LOL IM CRAZY. NO BUT SERIOUSLY THIS IS A GREAT STORY... ROMANCE IS THE COOLEST THING AND I LOVE WHAT YOUR DOING WIHT THE SOUCTS AND GENERALS. TOTALLY LOVE RELATIONSHIP GOING ON WITH SERENA AND DARIEN... VERY VERY CUTE! I COULDN'T BELIEVE IT WAS SAM WITH LITA.. I READ THE WORDS SAM AND I DIDNT GET IT I THOUGHT IT WAS LIKE ANY OTHER CHARACTER AND THEN I WAS UHH DUH ITS SAAMY! I CAN'T GET USE TO THE SAM LOL. ANYWAYZ... UMM WHY AM I WRITING IN CAPITAL LETTERS... CAUSE TRYING TO PROVE HOW GREAT YOUR STORY IS! PLEASE TELL ME ASAP WHEN U WRITE ANOTHER STORY WHICH HOPEFULLY IS VERY VERY VERY SON! OK LOL ILL BE WRITING AGAIN LATER... YAY! BELLE Mercurial1 2003-08-07 Sewer thoughts? HA! I LIVE for Sewer thoughts! (stay in that mind frame!!) ^_~ ..ahem... *professional mode* Love the chapter! Love the fact that Sam is going to play (what appears to be) a larger than normal role! Love the fact that Lita is in the chapter (finally!!) and I can see her as a "Irish Lass" too! A little confused on the whole Sam to Ireland trip thing, but I'm confident that you'll explain in later chapters...speaking of which GET WRITING AND UPDATE SOON! (if I knew how to make that in bigger font, I would! ) seriously, excellent chapter, yet oddly short(hmm, my only complain) Keep writitng! Miko633 2003-08-07 I've been reading this story from the start and just never reviewed. I have a bad habit of doing that but the main reason I do is because cause I didn't deem teh story good enough for my review. However that was not the case with this story. I was just lazy, lol. Anyways I want to apologise for not reviewing before now. I also want to compliment you on your amazing nack of story telling. This chapter was a bit of a twist with Sammy ending up in Ireland with Lita. I hadn't expected you to do that. i can't wait for the next chapter to see how the senshi will find Lita and Sam. I also want to see if Lita will remember anythign about being a senshi because of the youma. Can't wait for the next chapter, write more soon! ~Miko~ Lil-PrincessK 2003-08-07 Heh heh, I wish this happened ALL the time! I read 22 this morning, reviewed, and lo and behold, there's another chapter! Well, that was a nice treat, but I won't be all selfish and get mad when 24 isn't up by 5pm ^_^. The Lita chapter rocked! But I can't help wondering who Zak is and why he's MARRIED... hm. I dunno. BenRG 2003-08-07 Ah yes, that is Lita all right. She doesn't like bullies and she doesn't like people who pick on smaller people, even if said bully is a monster from hell. Well, it should be interesting to see what happens when Serena catches up with her. Maybe, just maybe, she is /meant/ to have that claymore. After all, we never did find out what Lita's talisman of power was in Super-S. BenRG's Rating: 7/10 Didaskaleinophobia 2003-08-07 Sorry 'bout that, but I'm curious. Iknow, I know. Curiousity killed the cat. Well you wanna know somethang. I'm not a cat so there. Yay! Lita's finally here. Hehe. And she's in Ireland as well. I love that go all Irish Lasses. The next chapter has the other scouts? Are the other generals alive? You still haven't answered that. Will Serena and Darien find out that Rini is their daughter? Are the scouts going to go to the future still? Is the final battle going to be against wiseman like in the anime? This was great and hope you update soon. |