The reviews listed here are based on a differant chapter system than what I currently have set up on this site.  What I have done, is take the reviews, and split them up according to the chapter they coincide with on this site.  I know, sounds confusing but I'm sure you'll get it.

Also, Kitsun Moonstar sent me this awsome little pic for getting 500 reviews. 
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Chapter one

Kail Ceannai 2003-11-28
Update! Update! Update! 

Bunny Moon 2003-11-07
what happens next? really good! the end! 

roswellachick 2003-10-13
"she didn't think she could survive having her hopes and dreams crushed again, couldn't survive feeling his arms around her only to have him pulled away again."--wow thats intense
"She had changed so much, finally showing the strength that had only been hinted at before."--thats what it sounds like
"He was just beginning to realize how special she was to him and the thought that he might lose her...he didn't want to think about it."--so it is love...*sigh*
"Darien was torn between holding her and attempting to kill this man."--tee jee he wants 2 protect her
"Serena, look at me. Believe me, when I say that I would rather risk my life a thousand times to be able to stand by your side than be forever safe and parted from you."--wow i want some1 2 tell me that
duude this is an awesome 'what if' story

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neptunestears   2003-09-25
thanks for the review!
I like this so far, there were a few confusing things I dont et like if they have no memory of usagi (Im using japanese names ^^;) then how did mamoru know her when he bumped into her? Well Im sure its continuiously great you have a lot of reviews!! ^^ good work.

Phantasy Star 2003-05-04
Great chapter!

Nutty Colada   2003-01-07
Wow! This is Great ^_^
I wanna read more!

PrInCeSsDrEaMyDrEaMs4eVeR4U 2002-12-17
hey Denial can you read my story and tell me what you think it's title is "Yay,YAy Let's PArty" please i really need the opinions from my favorite authors thanks and everyone who reads this please don't hesitaTE to review i ti really need your opinions. THANKS ALOT Oh and Please finish the story i've been wating for three months now for you to updated it but all i got was one chaptewr pleaseeeeeeeeeeee

S. L. Butterworth 2002-10-10
hey i really love this story, i haven't read anything like this before, congratulations! I can't wait to see which scout you bring back next, keep going, and update soon!

Neo-Crystal  2002-09-15
This is an awsome story! You should keep writing!

Whiro 2002-09-14
good, i liked it, continue!
~Whiro~ (too lazy to log in)

soap  2002-09-14
grrrrrrrrreat story!! can't wait for the next chapter!!

SlvrDrgn 2002-09-14
Wondeful chapter. Can't wait to see how it is going to go with Rei.

Fushigi Hime 2002-09-14
I hope that you plan on writing more. This is a great story, and if you do decide to leave it as is, that's fine, but if you add more chapters, that would be great!! Keep up the great work, and I hope to see another chapter, that is if you are planning to write another!

Ja,
Fushigi Hime

Shiama 2002-09-14
Right another chp.!! it's good!

Arabella Silverbell 2002-09-13
wow. i'm amazed. this is really, really well written! continue!

catasa ([email protected])  2002-09-13
I love it it is agreat story. Im just hopinng that you continue with it, that meabe this will not be the end

Lady CC Kagehoshi 2002-09-13
Very nice story. MMOORREE!

up&down 2002-09-13 
Wow. I am suprisingly satisfied. No offense intended, but for a moment there I thought the story was developing too quickly. Thankfully, I was wrong. The story did not leave any questions lingering (of course, I wonder what is going on with the scouts but they weren't the focus of the story) Thank you for that. If this was intended as a one-shot, it is one of the best I have read. It could go into more chapters if that's what you intended, but it doesn't have to. It can be left on its own. Awesome. I would like to read more stories by you if you can fit it into your college schedule (this is a hint by the way). This one was lovely, great, wonderful,...(you can fill in the blank more if you'd like 0_^) ja ne:)

Toya_Kins ([email protected])  2002-09-13
This was a really great story and you must make another chapter^_^

sailorruss 2002-09-13
ooooo. interesting. continue puhlease.

firelightz 2002-09-13
I'm very impressed by this story! I like the twist where Serena doesn't allow Luna to reawaken the scouts. It certainly causes Serena to grow up in a hurry. I can't wait to see if the story continues!

Brandy  2002-09-13
more, please. you have me hooked!

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