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| Chapter Six kalinda 2003-07-22 14Signed omg this is such a great chapter i couldnt believe it when rini turned out to be the evil one o i just cant wait to read the rest this is such a great story Lady of Pluto 2003-04-26 14Signed Oh Holy Mother of God! What a surprise! I never thought that that was a possibility! Each chapter wows me even more. Keep on writing well. Venus Smurf 2003-04-15 14Signed Wow. FANTASTIC plot twist! Rini's working for the bad guys? Even more, Helios is, too? However did you think that one up? You truly are amazing. Before I gush anymore, though, I want to apologize for taking so long to review. My computer's been all screwy lately, and I haven't been able to access the Internet half the time. I apologize from the depths of my heart. Okay, back to the gushing! Now, I know I've said this before, but I have to tell you that you've astounded me yet again. Your story takes so many clever twists and turns that I can never anticipate what you're going to come up with next. I love that about your stories! Your mind is so wonderfully complex, and I can never understand how you come up with some of these things. Bravo! And, hey, I'm all for the Lita teasers! I'm so glad that she'll be making an appearance soon! And please don't go hide in a corner-not unless that corner happens to have a computer you can use to keep typing! happygolucky111 2003-04-05 14Signed cool! cant wait for the next chapter! Lil-PrincessK 2003-04-05 14Signed OOh. I like the Rini/Helios thing you got going here! Ok, I will javer to go and read 15 later... but I am sure it will be every bit as good as this one! BenRG 2003-04-02 14Signed Oh! So, Zoicite is really a bad guy. Why am I not surprised? The /real/ surprise is the revelation of who is ultimately behind the attacks: a future version of Rini and Helios. :-S I hate temporal paradoxes. Anyway, this could be interesting because, as far as I can tell, Serena hasn't met Rini in this timeline, so all she will see is an enemy. Interesting. This battle will be violent, but it won't be particularly original or difficult. Rubeus is, by a long margin, the least effective enemy that Sailor Moon ever encountered, and he had to go a /long/ way to beat Nephrite in that area. What will be interesting is the /aftermath/. What will happen when identities are revealed all round? BenRG's Rating 8/10 (bonus point for originality) jupitergreen12 2003-04-01 14Signed Hi I just started reading your story and I really like it so far... I can't wait to read the next chapter :) Lauren 2003-04-01 14 Anonymous love the story. can't wait till the next chapter comes out. princessserenadreamsforever ([email protected]) 2003-04-01 14 Anonymous hey great story but short and hey where am I?! one more thing why is Rini going to be villin me think itz better if a made up person is villin well lol great update sON! SJ 2003-04-01 14 Anonymous see look I'm reviewing!! now you hold up your end of the bargin and write another chapter ;D Adyen 2003-04-01 14 Anonymous o.O That's a surprise... Never would have thought you're still continuing with the R arc, especially since you implied she's been fighting for years now. Chapter Six: Section Two MoonWonderer 2003-04-20 15Signed Aw... Zoicite and Ami!! :) Is he going to ask her before or after she finds out about their memories?!?!? What will she say?!?! Does he ever recover his memories?!?! Great chapter, Oh Amazing Writer Person You! :) Codie 2003-04-17 15Signed wow, Rubeus thinks, I never thought it possible. *shrugs* oh well. Theres one thing you could do to make this better, get the next chapter up. Other than that, Its awesome. One question...you are planning on putting Jupiter in this right?? Venus Smurf 2003-04-15 15 SignedHey, what are you talking about? Shoe emergencies count as real emergencies! Don't mock the shoes, lady! Perfect characterizations, by the way. That whole 'talking a mile a minute' was great. Mina really does do that, doesn't she? Beautifully done, as always. I don't know about you, but I'm hoping that professor of yours gets sick a lot. Does that make me a horrible person? Aw, I don't care. As long as you get more chapters finished, I'll be as horrible as I need to! PrInCeSsDrEaMyDrEaMs4eVeR4U 2003-04-11 15Signed hiya yes i did review on 13th chap and 14th chap. oh watever anywys itz good as always but one more thing definitely not evil rini cuz if u do the whole story will be altered.and maybe ya no wut i mean i hope lol oh i hav math test today and man do i hate math i am in high school if i havnt told yet i just got in 9th grade in sept and man is it hard we hav to do lot of essays, tests, quizes, homeworks and etc... i like junior high 7th and 8th grade better cuz that was fun. i also loved my elementary prom cuz it was my first time. and then loved 8th grade graduation and 5th grade too cuz we sang like 8 songs for 5th grade graduation and u no wut the teacher in charge said when we were rehearsing singing she said and i quote "Great Voice Girls Keep It Up, And Boys Your Voice stinks or sucks i think is wut she said" anywys it was a great compliment though. we all teased the boyes afterwards and it was so funny lol i no am boring so i'll just say g2g bye make the next one faster. bye Silver Dragonfly 2003-04-08 15Signed Intrigued on finding out how the girls are going to deal with the General issue as it seems the poor guys are striped/cleansed of whatever hold Beryl had on them(if you're going that route that is) Keep up the good work. Sailor C 2003-04-07 15Signed Great story! Can't wait to read more! ^__^ Kaji 2003-04-07 15Signed I loved it, it was soo good... the romance and the vilians ah! oh u are amazing...i hope u know that^^...Ok I wrote a review about 2 minutes ago... and it kind of evaporated...ugh...I'll make up for it next time... Lotza Luv Kaj. happygolucky111 2003-04-05 15Signed cute story so far! i hope that rubeus doesnt get too pissed tho. im still waiting for jupiter! ^_^ Lil-PrincessK 2003-04-05 15Signed OOh! I liked this chapter too! Thank your professor for the cancelled class for me! Adrial 2003-04-05 15Signed Hmm...I'm sitting here trying to find a way to tell you how much I like this story...Hmm... A LOT A LOT A LOT A LOT A LOT A LOT A LOT A LOT! Everything about seems real (minus the teleportation, evil crystal making and talking felines abilities). Were you serious about taking a month to upload? You can't POSSIBLY do that to me! But if you must... |