| The reviews listed here are based on a differant chapter system than what I currently have set up on this site. What I have done, is take the reviews, and split them up according to the chapter they coincide with on this site. I know, sounds confusing but I'm sure you'll get it. |
 |
| Chapter Seven PrInCeSsDrEaMyDrEaMs4eVeR4U 2003-05-07 ok i guess and sorry havnt hads time to review any of the stories or rather even update my own story. lol ok itz good chap now i g2g 2 read the other chap. Gizelle 2003-04-30 Poor Zoicite! This is a wonderful piece, please continue it. This is such a creative idea, I hope you carry it to the end, and it's really interesting how it's playing out right now. Thanx for the update, and keep them coming! Bluejello 2003-04-29 Ouch. Poor Ami... So, does Zoicite remember? I must know!! Venus Smurf 2003-04-29 *Wails* But I don't want the story to go faster! If it does, you'll finish that much swifter, and nobody want this story to end! I loved your idea with Amy, though. It was absolutely perfect, though now I'm gonna spend the rest of the day wondering if she's going to forgive Zoicite and how she'll react to him when she sees him. Update soon, please! This was amazing! Silver Dragonfly 2003-04-28 Leave it to Ames.. at least she was able to pussle thorugh it on her own. Personally I hope the generals stay good.. after all Endy could use his guard back... I mean how good can it be for him to be the only male surrouned by 9 female senshi in incredibly short skirts all the time... BenRG 2003-04-28 Isn't it strange that it is /Amy/, the sensible one, who has to go through the emotional turmoil? This could yet get very, very ugly for her. Oddly enough, I've always believed that she is the one most easily hurt. The flashback was well-written. Putting in too much detail is an easy trap to fall for. Instead, you show well how sudden and powerful an experience it can be. Pantin' for more... BenRG's Rating: 7/10 Megumi 2003-04-27 Hey! Sorry I didn't review every chapter, I can't ever think of anything to say for everyone of them. But I love this story! Don't feel too bad about the waiting for chapters thing I do the same thing, and writers block just makes it worse. Well keep up the good work! MoonWonderer 2003-04-26 Good chapter! :) Oh poor Ami having to find out that way with no warning at all. What is she going to do about Zoicite? She still loves him, doesn't she? PLease continue soon! :) Codie 2003-04-26 Poor Ami, being betrayed would suck, speacially if your in love with the guy. Great chapter, really well done. Please Ya gotta update again, soon! PRETTY PLEASE!! happygolucky111 2003-04-26 ooh, i cant wait for jupiter! ya, this was a REALLY awesome chapter! poor mercury tho, what an awful way to find out about her past! but its really good. too bad we didnt find anything out bout zoicite tho! graa its a pain waitin' forever for your new chapter to come out tho. but hey, who am i to complain when i keep all of my reviewer people waitin for me to put another chap. up? anyway, please put some jealousy in between some of the scouts. or, some romantic kinda mushy gushy stuff. thankx! Chapter Seven: Section Two JerseyGirl03 2003-07-01 Excellent chapter. Please update soon. I love this story Jabba 2003-06-25 please update soon. abby Steven 2003-06-23 This is really good. I like. I like alot. Keep up the good work and bring Lita soon. Adios Sailor of Shadow 2003-06-02 Okay Okay I know I've been a bad bad person and haven't R and R'd in a while but I just wanted to let you know I've caught up on all your chapters and I still think this is a wonderful, great, fantastic, story and that you should definitly write more really really soon.. Sailor of Shadow Usagi Tsukino 2003-05-18 That was soo good. Would you mind if you could write the chapters a little longer? Kaji 2003-05-08 HEY! long time, me no review :P sorry i have this really bad habit of not always checking for updates...i'm a big dork like that :P THIS STORY IS SO AMAZING! or have I already told u that? lol, no really it's wonderful, and i like how u diversified the way Ami found out about her past...very cool...I missed the lack of Darien/Serena mushyness...but my friends say I'm getting to be too big of a softy, so it was probably better this way ;) anywho, that's pretty much it for now (oh wait! I loved the last bit of this chapter! so ami-ish teehee!) ahem...sorry...*blush* ya ok...i better go before I explode with mushy-gross-ness k? Keep writting u'r absolutely Fantastic story I can't wait to read more! Kisses. Kaj. lazzykane 2003-05-07 well this is a good but i do feel sorry for amy..i think that she should ask him even if she doesn't like the answer. well i'm still waiting as always PrInCeSsDrEaMyDrEaMs4eVeR4U 2003-05-07 oh man tat sucks r they still evil especially zoicite. does he love amy for real? I WANA SOME ANSWERS ITZ GOOD KINDA OF SAD TOO I THINK ANYWYS SEE YAA LATER ALIGATOR AND UPDAT E SOONER Venus Smurf 2003-05-06 Nice. I loved the way you focused (or had Amy focus) on Zoicite's dimple. It's a great way to show that Amy can't really hold a grudge against him, even after all he's done to her in the past. It's too bad that some of my own characters aren't that wise or that forgiving! Serena's surprisingly mature about this, as well. Me, I'd have just forced Amy to join with the group again-even if I had to hog-tie her and drag her back to Japan where she belongs. I'm glad, though, that Serena is clever and compassionate enough to let Amy work this out for herself. It may be the only way any of them will ever get past everything. Thank you, too, for ending the story on a light note. That joke with Amy's computer was so true to character, and I loved it. Still, I also have to express my heart-felt awe over the more emotive portions of this chapter, as well. You're truly wonderful, my friend. Yay! I have it in writing that this story is going to be long! Thank you, thank you, thank you! I adore long stories (as long as I'm not the one trying to write them, that is). I'm going to hold you to it, though. That promise is all that's keeping me from going insane. Which story are you talking about in your reply, though? ('So, did you decide if she was going to forgive him? I know what I want to happen but occasionally those things don't work out the way I want.') If it's yours, then I DEFINATELY want Amy to forgive Zoicite. Duh! They're too cute to keep apart, past deaths and murders or not. There's that whole 'Fate' thing, too, of course. Even the best authors (or the worst, depending on how you look at it) can't fight Fate! Gotta have Amy and Zoicite together. Yep, definitely. If it's mine, then yes, Mina will go running back to Malachite at some point or another. Well, not exactly RUNNING back. He'll have to drag her by the hair to get her home, frankly, and even that's not going to happen for a very long time. Still, I, too, promise to give a happy ending. As with Amy and Zoicite, Fate has interfered for my own versions of Mina and Mal. That, and I don't do sad endings. I love reading fics without them, of course, but I can't write it myself. It'd just bug me too much. And, hey, don't worry about upping the rating or not upping the rating. We'd stick around no matter what you put in this story! Just do us all a favor, and don't remove the creepy factor, all right? That's part of this story, too, and we all enjoy it. Just-no clowns. *Shudders, crawls into corner and folds herself into fetal position* I don't like clowns. They're WAY beyond creepy. Very funny, very sweet. I'm sorry that it took me so long to review, but it couldn't be helped. Hopefully, though, I won't need so much time before I can read the beautiful chapters that I'm sure will soon be coming! And, yes, that was a hint. I'm not very subtle, am I? Nice crack about the sheep, by the way. You're a very funny person, did you realize that? Keep it up-I adore your twisted little sense of humor. EEsh. I just wrote an entire page for a review. That's gotta be some kind of record, right? If this were for anybody but you�� Phantasy Star 2003-05-04 Sounds good so far... I want a little focus on Serena and Darien please :) Random Reader 2003-05-04 Denial-san, Sorry I haevn't reviewed in a while, once again, I blame school. I'm glad to see you've updated...it's certainly a welcome break from studying. In any case, I did come up with a question. Why the mix of character spellings? Darien is the American version, but Ami and Rei are of a Japanese variety. You probably answered this several chapters ago and I just missed it, but I thought it couldn't hurt to ask. Hope to see another update soon! :-D Happy writing, Random Reader Rose Black ([email protected]) 2003-05-02 I love it! It is excellent! I can't wait for the next chapter! Are you going to let Zoicite get his memories back? Is Darien going to confront him and give them to him? So many questions, and no answers! It's infuriating! You must update soon! Rose BenRG 2003-05-02 That was a nice little touch. Amy is the most gentle and probably the most vulnerable of the Senshi. She is also pretty smart and is generally fair-minded about things, so she will never carry a grudge. Now, we have to ask what is going on with Zoicite. Is he a good guy or a bad guy. I'll tell the truth: I don't like Inner/General romances. I prefer the girls to find someone new. ;-) BenRG's Rating: 7/10 Silver Dragonfly 2003-05-01 LOL! I can't wait to read it. I mean the poor guy has to have some way of dealing with seeing Sere in such a short skirt all of the time...*ponders*... maybe he was brutally hunted/cornered by Haruka at one point... *GRINZ* Keep up the good work and I'm glad I could be a bit of inspiration. ^.^ Lil-PrincessK 2003-05-01 Heh heh heh. Ami and her computer: together as one forever! Can't wait for a new chapter! Sele 2003-05-01 NO! How can you stop there!?!?!?!? This has become my favorite fic, I love it! Mercurial 2003-05-01 YAY! AMI'S Back! Alright..now let's find Lita...and the question remainds, are the generals alive, and if so...are they good? OH!! and what about that ring? And Rini? and...and...you better get writing! Bluejello 2003-05-01 Get Ami to ask point blank?! Oh... that could be interesting. *evil laugh* Alright then. So, will we be meeting Lita again in the near future? Or will that be a while yet?? Shadow Dragon 2003-05-01 so beautiful (*sobsob*) well, ur a REALLY good writer please update ASAP! Lady of Pluto 2003-05-01 I love it when authors acknowledge people when they review. Any hoo, great story that just keeps on going well. EtrnalRhapsodi 2003-05-01 Hey keep it up! I like it ^_- happygolucky111 2003-05-01 hmm. i would give u a suggestion on what the bar should b called, but i havent the faintest idea what you mean. if u mean like a bar like where u get a drink, then it should b called something like moonlight drink or something like that. but if its a bar, well, wasnt her passion always to become a famous cook? hmm. ya, the chap was really awesome! im really glad that ami is back, adn i cant WAIT for Chapter Seven: Section Three Lil-PrincessK 2003-07-12 Aw, porr Lita doesn't get to cook... **llightbulb** She can cook for ME! I'm always open for good food! Yea, I'm brilliant... LoL. I enjoyed this, and the Darien/Serena fluff was adorable! So I'm waiting for your next chapter, k? lazzykane 2003-07-11 well i see that things are heating up.and your teaser definly has my interest going..and your are still alive i was beginning to wander. but i will not bug you(yeah right) ok ok i'll control the impulse. as always i'll wait(foot tapping)see you soon i hope (lita owns a bar?mind boggling) happygolucky111 2003-07-11 yes u totally updated! *dances in glee* ive been DYING for u to update! yes yes yes yes yes yes yes...! anyway, now that i KNOW that jupiter is comin in, life is grand! this chappie really put insight in on sm. like the whole serena ami private conversation. ya im kinda hoping that when they find lita and awaken her, that they throw a huge, and i mean HUGE, rebirthing party. ^_^ keep writing! plz plz update soon! also, plz put the other generals in? Jabba1 2003-07-11 hey great chapter and i loved the discussion between ami and serena. oh and just so thatyou know its ma'am. lol keep up the good work. Linda_ishtar 2003-07-11 Hey! please update soon!! this chapter was too short after waiting for so long...:P...we want more!!...well I do, hehe :D great fic !! SJ 2003-07-11 don't you DARE make us wait so long for the next chapter! BenRG 2003-07-11 I guess this chapter was something of a filler. That isn't neccessarily a bad thing, as some questions surrounding Ami's reawakening needed to be addressed. However, I'm glad to see that we are catching up with Lita next time. It is quite likely that there will be a considerable battle around Lita's pub when Rubius /tries/ to interfere. Here's looking forward to the first fight between Sailor Moon and Wicked Lady ;-) BenRG's Rating: 7/10 |