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| Chapter Two roswellachick 2003-10-13 wow its been 4 yrs--they're what 18 right? "the four years of a normal life that she had given them, that was worth any amount of coldness to her."--wow that ruely is sere LOL thsts so rei's fire...""Well, I think I've annoyed just about everything in the universe now." Serena said quietly, staring at the fire in awe."-LOL! wow what a wonderful summer 4 sere yea i think u should cont Shadow Dragon 2003-05-01 some spelling mistakes...but good! Nutty Colada 2003-01-07 MORE MORE MORE ...and more I will get ^_^heheheh to the next chap! Sailor C 2002-09-29 This is a really good story so far and I can't wait to see what happens next! ^__^ Chelle - Chan 2002-09-29 Very good! Continue : D AngelsExist 2002-09-29 interesting... continue firelightz ([email protected]) 2002-09-28 I really like this story and am very happy that you chose to extend it into actually approaching the scouts. I think that you should have her approach them all, so please contiue with the story!! :) Miko633 2002-09-28 I agree with everyone else who said that you should continue this story. It's well written and well thought out! I am enjoying the storyline as well. I hope that you will continue the story and post more soon!!!!! Till then ~Miko~ SlvrDrgn 2002-09-28 Yes, contiune. We have no idea if Pyro is going to open the pen, and then the other scouts haven't even gotten the pens that they are entitled to. You just can't leave it there. Marni ([email protected]) 2002-09-28 Please continue! You have the makings for a very interesting story. Serenity Bliss 2002-09-28 One of the most organized stories ever. It keeps me wanting more.... Chapter Two: Section Two roswellachick 2003-10-13 "She finally forced herself to admit that she was lonely. She would never admit it out loud, but she wanted all those things that she had said she could live without, the friends, the family."--*sniffle* poor rei "Mars walked over to Serena and hit her on the head."What took you so long, Meatball Head?" Serena stared at her in shock for a moment before tackling her and giving Mars a hug."--tee jee the esence of mars & sere gr who r the bad guys?!?! Nutty Colada 2003-01-07 Love it, love it, love it!!!! Venus Smurf ([email protected]) 2002-10-22 Oops. I know I already reviewed, but I forgot to add my own little wish list to your pantheon of characters. You said you might be willing to include the generals. Was this comment meant for the forces of good or the forces of evil? I have my own suspicions, but I'm hoping they'll be good guys. Still, I'm not at all averse to bad-generals. As long as they're included, I don't care what side they fight for. I simply maintain the opinion that of all the enemies in this series, the generals are, perhaps, the most intersting. I sincerely hope you include them. MarsMoonStar 2002-10-04 okay well since you got Mars I think a general would be good... for every senshi you awaken you could awaken a general right after. anyways Cool fic Mandy 2002-10-03 Wow, that's a good story. Can't wait til the other scouts awaken and the generals too. Write more soon, okay? Thanks :) VegaKatt 2002-10-02 I really like your story and can't for more. I think you should bring Saturn into the story. Lilly 2002-10-02 Hope you countine this story it rocks. SlvrDrgn 2002-10-02 Yes, please please please continue. I really want to know what happens, with them all. Umm...as to who to bring in...no clue, which ever would make the story better at this moment. Anyway great chapter. Marni ([email protected]) 2002-10-02 Great story! Uranus might be fun to bring in next. If you include the Generals, please do something different than the usual "The Inners don't remember, and want to destroy them", having the Generals not remember would be a change. Adyen 2002-10-01 I would suggest, logically if you're basing off the orignal series, and only if you want to add any outer senshi, Pluto or Saturn. You can justify that Uranus and Neptune died fighting Mistress 9 or something like that, and that when M9 died, Saturn was released and saved by Pluto, etc, etc... |