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| Chapter Four ImmortalFantasy 2003-01-22 And yet another great chapter!(I've been reading, but my mom always seems to tell me to get off the computer when i read this story... She ain't home right now though.. hehehe) Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter! I just love good S/D stories! And yours is definatly one of them! Random Reader 2003-01-12 This is the fic that got me obsessed with Sailor Moon all over again. I truly hope you continue since they took SM off the air hereabouts. It's like getting to watch new episodes all over again for me...yeah...I know, that sounds kinda a geeky, but I'm a pretty wicked shade of loser and I've been checking to see if the next chapter has been poster. I hope that it is soon! Happy writing, Random Reader thaiger 2003-01-06 great story! you're such a talented writer. i hope you update soon. :) Kaji 2003-01-03 Hey I really enjoyed u'r story, it was serious and even teary at some moments and made me laugh out loud at others ^^ I hope u write more soon I can't wait to find out what happens, although I will test my patience while I wait ^^...anywho, like everyone else I'm dying to know who the next scout to appear will be...but don't worry I won't ask seeing as u don't really know u'rself ^^ i was just wondering since from what I can tell in u'r replies u'r bringing the Generals back, are u also bringing the Outers and Rini back? Plus u've also got my curiosity picked about these baddies. Using my questionable powers of deduction I'm assuming that it's Allan and Ann(the 'my love' gave it away ^^), but I'm wondering about this third person with red hair....sounds like trouble to me... Well I suppose I've rambled long enough, I hope to see more out soon, but if not, then, well, my patience will have to endure ^^ Kaji. tima 2003-01-03 Awesome, ure story is simply awesome! Update quickly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u have a great writing style!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A. Kitana 2002-12-30 Hmmm... well, this fic is rather evil isn't it? How are other fic writers supposed to top something like this? In some parts I think it's better than the show! Everything is well organized, the characters are all strikingly well represented, I think one of your reviewers brought up the perfect word to describe all of this... stunning! Can't wait for more! *crosses fingers for coin toss on Ami* Silver Dragonfly 2002-12-11 Hmm Looking good so far, and I'll have to reread that scene (perhaps on Christmas break after finals) and I'll see if I can come up with something. ^.^ Sailor of Shadow 2002-12-11 YAY YAY YAY ohhhhh double stuffed mint oreos......brb......*munch munch* okay, I really love this chapter,you are creating such a wonderful story, please write more very soon *munch Munch* Cookie? Arigato! PrInCeSsDrEaMyDrEaMs4eVeR4U 2002-12-10 hey, lol well i am just saying that because i love sailormoon and cardcaptor, dbz a little, digimon, poken and some of the other animes. do u know a cartoon named captain planet. i loved that cartoon and what about johnny quest. i really loved these cartoons i still do. Venus Smurf 2002-12-05 'Picture it'? Of course, I can picture it! Haven't you realized yet that I'm obsessed with this story? I might be teased later for this, but hearing that you'd posted a new chapter absolutely made my day! Very sad chapter, though. I loved it, of course, but it was sad. Poor Serena. I feel awful for her (and yes, I realize she's just a made-up character. Just because she's not real doesn't mean I can't feel bad, does it?) I'm glad she has Darien to cheer her up. I must say that a quiet Serena is hightly unusual. Most people think that she tells everyone everything, but you and I know better. You've just made this quality a little more pronounced. I like the change. This Serena is just as interesting, because you managed to retain that fun-loving quality we all adore about her, but you also included this 'keeps her own council' thing. It's a nice balance, I think. Can't wait for the next chapter, though don't be too disappointed if I don't review right away. I'm going away for six weeks, but I really do want to read the next posting. I love this story! (millyvanilly) 2002-12-04 ooh! this is really great! i can't really think of much else to say, except to watch your grammar; sometimes you leave out little words. but the story is incredible!!!! you have such a talent! please keep writing!!!! MoonWonderer 2002-12-03 Yea! More story! :) I liked this chapter. It was nice of you to go more in depth into Serena and Darien's lives and thoughts. Please continue! :) Codie 2002-12-03 Oh you have to put the next chapter up plz. Pretty plz! I usually stick to stories that are based more about my favorite characters but this was tempting and so now I need to know what happens next. Ambre Wisniewski ([email protected]) 2002-12-03 Well hello again. Another great chapter. You're very welcome for the review. And no, I won't kill you for not telling me exactly who will be the next scout/senshi to be found. Hey, a little tidbit, I found out that the Sailor Moon and Sailor Moon R seasons are being brought out uncut and in their original form here by ADV in the fall of next year. Hmmm, maybe the Stars season won't be too far behind. Anyway, keep up the great work. BenRG 2002-12-02 Well, this is a fascinating and unique story. The storyline has been done before, and a lot of the plot twists have been done before, but it has never been put together in such a great way! Please keep updating because I'm getting to enjoy it a lot. My vote for the next scout is Lita. I think that Ami will be the hardest to find, as she is the quiet one. Just find a great restaurant or maybe a street fight, and there you will find Lita Kino. However, convincing the most hard-willed of the Inner Scouts could be difficult. I would like to see some more of the /details/ of battles. I would say that Serena has probably reached her 'Super' form, even without the presence of the Grail, so she can use Moon Heart Spiral, Rainbow Moon Heartbreak and all of her previous moves except the Moon Wand. Mabye Darien is now a Tuxedo Mask/Moonlight Knight hybrid. I always preferred the MK form myself. :-D BenRG's Rating: 8/10 Shinigami 2002-12-01 Damn! I forgot to review the last chappie! And now I have problems with my computer, so I cannot review my fav fanfics! Hopefully this works, or there'll be hell to pay.. So Mina's back... Will all the Generals return? Pls have 4 of them return. Cuz the Inner sneshi needs them. I know Rei and Mina are alone... I dunno about Lita and Ami... Sere met up with her lil' bro... Well at least she's getting her life back on track... She's been alone for too long, now she has Darien. Does she remember the Silver Millennium completely? Does she know that the Generals were Darien's guards once? S. L. Butterworth 2002-12-01 another fabulous chapter!!! My weakness for S/D romance must make me fall to the floor, groveling, screaming "more! more! I beg you please more!" Anywho, it's better if you don't tell me who's going to come back next anyway, I will appreciate it much more. It's still really well written, and I can't wait to till the next chapter! Keep it up, and update soon!! Random Reader 2002-12-01 This story got me into Sailor Moon all over again! It's really great and I look forward to your updates! ~Random Reader silver wolf 2002-12-01 Hi sweet story. can't wait for the next part to come out. So um if they can't find Amy or Lita in Japan where did they go? know just wondering. I'm going to guess that Amy went to Germany but for Lita i have no clue. So am i right? Please hurry up or i'm going to go insane wondering what will happen next!!! Adyen 2002-12-01 No comment. Well, ok, I do have comments, and all of them are positive! ^_^ Well... actually, still no comments. I just don't know what to say! Umm... Keep up the good work? ^^;;; SlvrDrgn 2002-12-01 Love the way that you are taking the stroy. Can't wait to read more. Get the kitties together and then seperate them...poor things. Wonder what is going to happen next. Keep up the good work. ~Silvra Marni ([email protected]) 2002-12-01 I'm glad to see more of this story posted! lazzykane 2002-12-01 well interesting turn of events but i like it we really need to know about the family..now i;m strapped in and hanging on for the next adventure(now roll the dice and the winner is?????)i really have to be(what;s that word;; oh yeah)patient!!!keep on writing and i will keep reading |
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