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| Chapter Three roswellachick 2003-10-13 "We've been working out and sparring for the past two hours and you don't get a single bruise but the second a table is put in your path, you trip and break something." --LOL soo sere tee jee s&d r soo cute "whisper several suggestions for the trip to Luna.If cats could blush, Luna would have been when Serena set her down. As it was, she refused to look at either Artemis or Darien..."--jejeje bad sere..."Damn you Serena." Luna muttered before running to catch up with her companion."--lol Izzy 2002-10-24 Cool story. I really like it. Please write more soon. And bring Jupiter in soon, she's my favorite. I think both the outers and the generals need to brought in also. venus smurf ([email protected]) 2002-10-22 Oh. My. Gosh. This was absolutely incredible. Where have you been hiding? This was amazing! You know, we're supposed to use these review thingies to help the authors become better writers. How, though, are we supposed to do that if the authors are so incredible that there isn't anything that needs improving? You're amazing (and I'm saying that in a non-stalkerish way). This story wasn't simply well-written--it's positively graceful! You catch the characters' thoughts and feelings so well, managing somehow to bring them to life. I am truly in awe of you. Please place me on your mailing list, because I desperately need the next chapter! MarsMoonStar 2002-10-13 eh hehehehehe COOLIZ! AngelsExist 2002-10-11 LOL!!! Poor Luna.. Update again soon! Vilranda 2002-10-10 Poor 'Rena. Beating herself up like that. It's all good girl!! lol. Your story is really cool! Write more! Keep writing, V Adyen 2002-10-10 I'm still reading this, but I'll save my comment until the next chapter... I want to see where this leads! Kirara 2002-10-10 cool story!!!what about sailor Uranuis(sp)Neptune and Pluto? is she going o find them to or are they just going to show up like they normally do? luv the story!byebye SlvrDrgn 2002-10-10 Great chapter. Poor Luna...no not really. Funny. Chapter Three: Section Two roswellachick 2003-10-13 dude luna come bb i know u're not clueless..."were alternately making him want to claw them and trade places with them."--lol tee jee that was kewl Lady of Pluto 2003-04-26 you said tell you about spelling mistakes, well when you respond to venus smurf, you put they'rr instead of they'll be. Just telling you. Zorra 2003-02-07 Hey nice story so far. I'll havet o finish the rest tomorrow but good work!! Venus Smurf 2002-10-29 Yes, you must definately go start the next chapter. If fact, why don't you quite everything else that you do with your life and just concentrate on writing? Nobody here is going to complain. As always, superb chapter. Very funny, and those little snippets with Luna and Artemis were adorable. I don't think I can possibly express just how much I love this fic. You're wonderful--you really are. Yay! Mina's coming back. She's my favorite, you know, though I like Raye and Serena, too. I also like the way you write them. You're simply hilarious. I'm so glad you might include the generals. They're great characters. This was incredible. I can't find the words to gush as well as I'd like, but know that I think you're amazing. Keep writing, because I need my Denial fix. I can't live without it, you see. S. L. Butterworth 2002-10-29 it's still good, and by the way, Serena and Darian together are enough to keep me reading with out the other scouts. Bring Back Jupiter, she's great! update soon! ~Fallen_Angel~ 2002-10-25 That was a great story! I hope the other scouts appear soon. CrimsonDraggon 2002-10-25 ooooh I'm really liking so far, hope you post more soon. ;) Adyen 2002-10-24 Ha! Sailor V makes a comeback? That would be something to read... Neophyte 2002-10-24 Hey! It's me again! Ah! I almost squeeked when I saw your mention in the last chapter. I feel so loved. Thank you bunches! Yet another great batch of chapters. You have no idea how much it cheered me up when I saw that you had updated. My day started out horribly, but you helped to change the ending. I like how you've started talking about Luna and Artemis. Not many people add them in, but it adds a lot to the story. Oh, and the whole broken toe issue was pure genius! The characters were written perfectly, I felt like I was actually watching the anime. BRAVO!!! I wondered if I could ask a favor of you. I'm thinking of writing a Sailor Moon fic myself (very AU), but I kinda wanted some people's opinions of the story ideas. If your interested in hearing them out, give me a shout and I'll send em your way, k? THANKIES!!! Your Loving Fan- Nathronoelei "Weaver of Dreams" P.S. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! neoqueen 2002-10-24 WoW I love this its written very nicely write again soon I like the way the cats are being tortured o and i'd like it if u could put the generals in .... but good DarkFairy 2002-10-24 Oooh!! Update soon!! Your fic rocks!! Serena is kick ass in it!! Write more!! RoCk On!! ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ SlvrDrgn 2002-10-24 Artemis just needs to admit to it. That's all...then maybe Luna will too...putting them through this much torture...shame on you...lol. Great chapter. Hope they find Mina soon. Maybe bringing Hercules into might make them act...just a thought. Umm...Oh crap I fotgot what I was going to say. Oh well. Chapter Three: Section Three roswellachick 2003-10-13 so r ya still playin w/the kitten?? dude I LOVE Anita Blake!--wasn't cer sin awesome + the whol asher thing *blush*...*wicked grin*...oh yea back 2 the story (jejeeje my monds in the gutter now --eep! *^__^* wow mina has her own agency & was a model!!-> she's really made sumtin of herself jejeje superiority complex-ha! tee artimis is an office hit! awwe that made luna sad *sniffle* so whats next? Lady of Pluto 2003-04-26 more spelling mistakes he he. Once, you put her instead of here (the scene where Mina finds Artemis), and then you put he instead of her(He had helped he lug everything into the house before leaving). Keep on writing. Sailor Midnight 2002-12-01 Wow...I love the fic. please write more...Bye Sailor Midnight Anonymous 2002-11-04 wow great tale wonderful wonderful wonderful Shinigami 2002-11-02 Pls bring in the Generals and make them good! *giggles* Liking the bit about Luna/Artemis! *snickering* Pls have some Serena/Darien thrown in the next chappie! Is Hotaru still alive? And what happened to Setsuna and Lita? And where is Amy? At least now Serena isn't alone anymore now that Darien and Raye are fighting with her? Will Serena ever tell her parents that the reason she was up so late is cuz the Negaverse youma have no sense of timing! Bluejello 2002-11-01 Absolutely incredible! I was just browsing through the section and stumbled across this. Glad I did!!! Oh, by the way you mentioned Alex stopping by twice in this chapter and it's just a little awkward.... I'm really not sure how to explain it. I'll be waiting for more!! S. L. Butterworth 2002-10-31 I really think that you should bring back Lita next, over ami anytime, she's kinda boring. I wonder what Lita's been up to over the last couple of years?? OH YAY! more Serena and Darian!! It's still great, keep it up, and update soon! Venus Smurf ([email protected]) 2002-10-31 Hmmm, yes, I loved what you did with Mina. Frankly, I love what you do with all of the characters. You're quite skilled, you know. Loved this chapter. (Obviously, or I wouldn't be reviewing). Thank you for keeping me updated; I know what a hassle it can be to e-mail everybody every time you post. You're far more reliable than I am, anyway. I hope you post again soon. This story is great. Adyen 2002-10-30 You doubled the Alex part. Otherwise, great chapter! MoonWonderer 2002-10-29 Fabulous story! :) Please continue, I want to know what happens next! :) Vilranda 2002-10-29 I'm glad they found Mina....life will get so much interesting from now on, now that she's back. Mina is Serena's "partner in crime" so to speak. Keep wroking on bringing the generals in, and maybe have the scouts and generals together again!! :) Can not wait for the next chappie!!! Keep writing, V Silver Dragonfly 2002-10-29 Very Intriguing. Lovin the lil Luna/Artimis tid bits ;) Mathais-8888 2002-10-29 Heh, I liked this. It is much more interesting than some of the other fics that I read. (No offense to them thought.) I can't wait till they find Mercury because she's my favorite characte. (Okay, maybe second favorite.) Chapter Three: Section Four roswellachick 2003-10-13 hm sounds like sere is a healthy eater...tee jee S+ grocery shoppin?-HA! dude princess bride rocks! hmm sere not bein clingy-intrestin "You love me, you know it." Artemis said jokingly and almost bit his tongue.Luna gave him a strange look, "Maybe."--jeje cuz its tru..."The white cat merely opened one eye and she could almost swear the thing was laughing at her."--jejej b/c he is..."you definitely have more dignity that that fellow..."--very tru so ami next?? then lits?? the n outer scouts?? & hotura...oh wait what 'bout the future? Bluejello 2002-11-12 No problem! I just thought you should know about the double scene thing. *shrugs* What kind of a reader would I be if I didn't tell you?! BTW, I swear this actually gets better with every chapter! I applaude you! Venus Smurf ([email protected]) 2002-11-12 I hate to sound like a throwback from the 80's (awful decade--never should have happened. What were we THINKING?!), but you ROCK!!! This story is quickly becoming one of my favorites. Every time I receive an e-mail alerting me to a new chapter, the excitement I feel almost causes me to stop breathing. I love your story line, I love your characters, and I love the way you're developing the plot. This chapter, specifically, was also wonderful. It was funny, well-written, and the hints at future events are intriguing. I can't wait for the next installment. Anonymous 2002-11-10 7 excellent as always!!!!!!! S. L. Butterworth 2002-11-10 I love it! I love it! I love it! Normally I don't really like the cats, but you make them really cool. It's REALLY good that you have made Serena less clingy, and more mature when it comes to Darian. But i still love all the mushy stuff too. And who is that mysterious couple I wonder?? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . I have no idea but I can't wait to find out. Keep it up, it's great, and UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! please? Dria ([email protected]) 2002-11-10 Good story line! I do believe this is the first I've seen like it...... so props on originality. I'm very curious to see what happens next.....maybe a little Jedite........ just a suggestion ^_^ Shinigami 2002-11-09 How come I never heard of the movies-Lady Hawke and the Last unicorn? I know the Princess Bride. Cuz I own the video. *whisltes* Attacks in London? Sounds like a problem... Brings back memories of the Sailor V manga... I never read them, but I would like to, problem, I cannot find the manga... Any ideas? *giggles* More dignity? Mina's right about Luna being more mature than Artemis... I dunno on who Diana is the most like. She seems to have her own personality... I like her. She's sweet...*whoops and cheers* Alright! Who's the General that's returning? Will Serena find the Outers? Cuz I think she's going to need all the senshi for this one. Especially if the enemy has relocated to London, England... And Luna's right about Mina's killing Artemis when she finds out the truth. But she'll recover eventually! Roben figures? They don't match the description of the villians in the anime and the manga... Except for Wiseman, but I strongly doubt he's in this, cuz when Serena refused to awaken the Inner senshi and Darien, she changed the timeline...Pls bring the Outer senshi in this... Dark Magician Girl 2002-11-09 Awwww this should be labeled as an official Luna and Artemis fic SOooOOOOOOOOO CUTE! hehe, no wonder Diana turns out to be so adorable, continue soon ^_^ Marni ([email protected]) 2002-11-09 This story is developing nicely, please post more. Adyen 2002-11-09 I *think* there's a small typo in the third paragraph, but it's ok. Otherwise, I loved this chapter and I hope to hear more from you! ^_^ Chapter Three: Section Five roswellachick 2003-10-13 "Damn. Why is it always two girls and a guy? Why can't it ever be two hot guys? Minus the girl?" --i must concer *wicked grin* yes! i'm glad that some1 finally acknowledge that they speak jap--thanx u "Fluffy?" the blonde managed to spit out in surprise before falling into the guy, Darien, sitting next to her, giggling helplessly. The other girl and the guy both seemed to be trying not to smile as Artemis stalked stiff legged to a corner and began to ignore them as only a cat could."-my sentiments exactly "Have you ever heard of the hero Sailor V?" She asked as she handed it to Mina."Yes, of course." Mina said, wondering what this was about."Give me a call if you ever meet her."--Dude this is brilent i love it--prob my fav part "Did they used to own him and were giving him to her? Was this some new program of the Human Society to help bring up adoption rates?"--lol i love ur 1 liners "Who's going to make stupid jokes and stop me from killing Serena if you don't get better?"--awe...Good. Because I love you too. Now get better fast so I can kill you."--i love ur humor..tee they're soo cute dude as glad as i am a/mina there it kinda makes me sadish, but hey they can teleport Zogeta 2003-09-25 Aww, Mina stays in London? Lady of Pluto 2003-04-26 Lots of spelling mistakes in this one. I would advise reading over it carefully and using spell check, because I honestly can't remember all of the mistakes. I 'm not trying to be mean or anything, just giving you what you asked for. MoonWonderer 2002-11-23 Fabulous! :) Please keep updating! :) PrInCeSsDrEaMyDrEaMs4eVeR4U 2002-11-20 hurry up and finish it up will ya .pleazzzzzzeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Venus Smurf 2002-11-19 I can only think of one word to describe this. Well, okay, I can think of half a million words, but only one that sums up all the others. STUNNING. This is, you know. Absolutely, completely, uncompromisingly stunning. This was more than just beautifully written. This was amazing. I know that I've said that more than once, but I can never get over just how incredible your writing style is. You capture the emotions, the thoughts, and definately the personalities of your characters. I can actually picture the scenes, picture the looks on their faces each time something happens. Like I said, stunning. Dreamstreet 4 ever 2002-11-18 This story is so cool keep up the good work very creative. Can't wait to see the next chapter. Bluejello 2002-11-15 Aha! I was waiting for Luna and Artemis to hook up! *happy dance* Those two are so cute together. So, who's the next scout to show? Amy or Lita? Adyen 2002-11-13 Heh... I know what you mean, but you do a good job at it anyways! ^_^ lazzykane 2002-11-13 now i'm very intreged about how you are going to find the other scouts and the genrals or are you going to use chad,ken,greg,and jamie or andrew(for mina)..i guess i will have to wait and see won't i??? well i will wait pationtly(yea right)to find out about your next adventure on this journey!!!! Ambre Wisniewski ([email protected]) 2002-11-13 Wow, this story is great! I can't believe I didn't review it before. Gomen Nasai. I'm really enjoying this different take on the characters. Now, can you hint to me who they are going to find next? S. L. Butterworth 2002-11-12 ooooooohhhhhhhhh, who's next?? who's next?? It's good that you decided to leave mina in london, it would over load the story if you had to include every scout in every chapter. YAY!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! update soon!!!!! it's great!! Silver Dragonfly 2002-11-12 Very sweet, a tad bit rushed perhaps on the lil Luna & Artimis bit.But not to bad. Sailor of Shadow 2002-11-12 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you absolutely CANNOT do this to me! WAHHHHHH MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE *puppy eyes* PLEASE! |