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| Chapter Eight Lady of Pluto 2003-09-27 You really are spreading the Senshi around the world, aren'tcha? Any hoo, I really love your story, and I would relate to Venus Smurf's stories. Keep on writing! Lil-PrincessK 2003-07-12 Aw, porr Lita doesn't get to cook... **llightbulb** She can cook for ME! I'm always open for good food! Yea, I'm brilliant... LoL. I enjoyed this, and the Darien/Serena fluff was adorable! So I'm waiting for your next chapter, k? lazzykane 2003-07-11 well i see that things are heating up.and your teaser definly has my interest going..and your are still alive i was beginning to wander. but i will not bug you(yeah right) ok ok i'll control the impulse. as always i'll wait(foot tapping)see you soon i hope (lita owns a bar?mind boggling) happygolucky111 2003-07-11 yes u totally updated! *dances in glee* ive been DYING for u to update! yes yes yes yes yes yes yes...! anyway, now that i KNOW that jupiter is comin in, life is grand! this chappie really put insight in on sm. like the whole serena ami private conversation. ya im kinda hoping that when they find lita and awaken her, that they throw a huge, and i mean HUGE, rebirthing party. ^_^ keep writing! plz plz update soon! also, plz put the other generals in? Jabba1 2003-07-11 hey great chapter and i loved the discussion between ami and serena. oh and just so thatyou know its ma'am. lol keep up the good work. Linda_ishtar 2003-07-11 18 Anonymous Hey! please update soon!! this chapter was too short after waiting for so long...:P...we want more!!...well I do, hehe :D great fic !! SJ 2003-07-11 don't you DARE make us wait so long for the next chapter! BenRG 2003-07-11 I guess this chapter was something of a filler. That isn't neccessarily a bad thing, as some questions surrounding Ami's reawakening needed to be addressed. However, I'm glad to see that we are catching up with Lita next time. It is quite likely that there will be a considerable battle around Lita's pub when Rubius /tries/ to interfere. Here's looking forward to the first fight between Sailor Moon and Wicked Lady ;-) BenRG's Rating: 7/10 Chapter Eight: Section Two Silver Dragonfly 2003-07-22 Fun Fun Fun Fun. ^.^ Now the question is is Ami going to explain everything on her own, or is she going to call in backup in perhaps the form of her princess & prince. ^.^** Keep up the fantab work and I claim innocnence in all muse work. ;) Jedi Master Calriel 2003-07-21 Hey! Loved the last two chapters! Absolutely loved them! Are the other generals going to appear soon? Where have they been all this time? And are the scouts going to search for them? Is there going to be romance between the scouts and the generals, apart from Amy and Zoicite? Even if the scouts decide not to search for them, is Darien? I mean, they are his generals. And when is Jupiter going to appear? Is she going to be in the same situation as Amy, in love with Nephlite? Or is it Nephrite? I don't know, just please, if you have a heart, UPDATE! By the way, in case you were wondering, this is Rose Black under a different name. Bluejello 2003-07-21 Wow, did I actually inspire that last chapter?? *blush* Aw..! I love all the lovey-ness between Darien and Serena. As well as Zoicite and Ami. Otherwise, I'm just watching and waiting for more! Jabba1 2003-07-21 not a bad fight scene, it was quite the surprise, for i was excpecting more taking. lets hope that things work out for ami and zoicite. are the other generals joining zoicite too? i hope so. keep it up. abby lazzykane 2003-07-21 well i understand but this is good but i want lita well (sigh) i'll wait..this should be a great explaintion though... as your devoted fan :) happygolucky111 2003-07-21 ooh, i cant wait for lita! yay! and i really hope that u put in a rebirthing party when lita comes in. please? and can u have zoicite learn bout his past soon? ^^ thankx, keep writing! Charlyne 2003-07-21 Wow, great story! I wish I had found it sooner. Can't wait to see what happens next. Sorceress Usagi 2003-07-21 This story is TOTALLY KuKuKachu! Luv that wurd! SailaMoon 2003-07-21 Love the story! It is great. Please keep your word and update soon! I think you should have Lita meet Nephlite before the other scouts discover her, it will put a more twist to the plot! UPDATE SOON:-) BenRG 2003-07-21 Hey! Ami wins a fight all on her own! Thanks for that, as they often (unfairly) characterise Sailor Mercury as the weakest of the scouts. BTW: If you want some believable-sounding R-season attacks for the scouts, don't be afraid to ask. I've got a whole book of ideas in that area ;-) Something tells me that Ami is going to have an interesting time explaining all this to Zoicite. More importantly, how will /he/ react to the truth about his past? BenRG's Rating: 7/10 Sailor Phoenix 2003-07-21 please keep updating this is a really great story! AbsoluteNutters 2003-07-21 OH MY GOD! I am so sorry I never reviewed after whenever it was the last time I did! I never reviewed when signed in, and that has caused me to review a good story, but then forget what it's called or where it is! But a very big 'FAB' for all the chapters you have written in my absence. Lataz! Ginny-Star JerseyGirl03 2003-07-20 Very interesting. Please update soon. Lil-PrincessK 2003-07-20 OMG! UPDATE! **squeals with joy, then stops, realizing that she sounds like a pig on a chopping block** Ew. Anyway, I totally love Zoicite's antics on the pgone. That is so cute how Ami just cannot get mad at him and stay it! Chapter Eight: Section Three happygolucky111 2003-07-27 yes! hee hee this story is rockin my socks off! ^_^ ya i CANNOT wait for the next chappie! and like u said how each person's chappie's keep doubling, thats awesome! 16 chappies for lita, comin up! anyway, wow thats odd. ya good luck for the rebirthing party thing. u dont have to do it ya know. just a suggestion! heres another- ^^* ya if u do put one in, how bout putting it in at the end? like, we beat the negaverse, lets jump and sing and dance and all. anyway, keep writing! Sorceress Usagi 2003-07-26 excellent! I'm so glad you updated! kalinda 2003-07-25 do i just love the ending its just so sweet i cant wait till lita is found and the rest of the scouts k keep writing kali Ginny-Star 2003-07-24 I'm so embarrassed! I used my co-writing account to review your last chaper! (I was AbsoluteNutters) My friend thinks I'm wierd. Neh. But I'm back on my own account and I'm sure you recall the name? Wonderful chapter, and I love the tension in your chapter. Lataz! Ginny-Star (^-^)/ C06 aka Lady Artemis 2003-07-24 love it! update asap! best sm story with the scouts i've ever seen. keep it up. ^_^ Adyen 2003-07-24 Aw... It is a beautiful chapter. Not too high on the 'waff' scale, but enough that it's nice to read. Deny ([email protected]) 2003-07-24 Hey, loved the new chapter I was hoping that would happen. So is Zoi going to join the team Hope so. seems like they are going to need all the help they can get. see ya soon Jabba1 2003-07-24 good i like long storys, and i love quick updates, which you are doing well on cudos to you. this was a great chapter, keep up the good work. abby Marni ([email protected]) 2003-07-24 I love how this story is getting deeper with each chapter! Will the other Generals make an appearance? Jedi Master Calriel 2003-07-23 Maybe I shouldn't ask so many questions if I don't want you to just confuse me with the answers. This was a great chapter by the way. Just one question though, and it's not about your story. You know the Doom and Gloom Girls? Or whatever those furry demons in bikinis were? Did the Scouts ever kill them or did they just cease to exist after Beryl and Metalica died? I know they did kill Venus, Mercury, Mars, and Jupiter, but did they ever die themselves? Just a random thought that popped into my head. Please update soon! Chapter Eight: Section Four Lady of Pluto 2003-09-27 Coolio!! What a touching chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! FireSenshi2 2003-08-05 You'll have to update soon! Bluejello 2003-08-04 Woo hoo! Yay Zoicite! *melts into a puddle* What a sweetie... Ok, I'm done swooning. Awesome! Sorry I haven't been reviewing sooner. Mena1 2003-08-03 don't stop. this is great story JerseyGirl03 2003-07-30 Is Rubeus going to die? WHen is Lita coming? Is there going to be another update soon? Are the other generals alive? Mercurial1 2003-07-29 AWESOME as always! Keep updating soon! and you'll have to answer me this question... Since this takes place after Beryl, so therefore Rini/chibiusa was never introduced to the sailor scouts right? Or do they know about her? UPDATE SOON! Deny 2003-07-29 Hey, cool can't wait see how the rest of the fic turns out. so who's next? Lita, Mal, Jed,Neph can't wait to find out and for the real battle to began loved the new chappie BenRG 2003-07-29 So this is definately going to have at least a few good generals in it. Okay. I think I've said before that I prefer Chad and the others to the generals for the contemporary Inners, but this is your story. I loved your description of Zoicite regaining his memory. Your interpretation of his relationship with Amy was good too. I wonder if Rubeus knows more than we suspect. However, it doesn't matter. The Black Poison Crystal absorbs energy and, without the Silver Imperium Crystal to back her up, Wicked Lady is going to be drained dry very quickly. She certainly won't be in much of a state to face Serena at this rate. BenRG's Rating: 7/10 Chibi J 2003-07-29 I recently found this story and I must say that I have been enjoying it thouroughly. Although, your prediction of the length of chapters for Lita is a bit frightening *grins*. And what if that trend were to continue and you bring in the outers! Although, I'm sure it would prove for a fun read. It would be nice to see a little Serena/Darien and maybe the whole group, down time. Maybe a picnic in the park...but that could be bad. After all, park=monster attack. happygolucky111 2003-07-29 awesome chapter! im glad that zoicite wasnt bad... it woulda been nasty. ooh, i hope that the others find their knights too! Jabba1 2003-07-29 another great chapter, i am looking forward to lita joining the group, as well as the other generals. it should be funny to see rei and jedeite interact. the two of them are usually so funny in other stories. keep up the good work. abby Jedi Master Calriel 2003-07-28 Great chapter! I loved it! And finally we're going to get to Lita! Are the Outers going to show up? Oh, and thanks for the confirmation on my theory. I may write a Sailor Moon fic and I wanted to know that I knew all of the facts. Lil-PrincessK 2003-07-28 Aw, that was so sweet! Now we need to make more fluff for the rest of the girls! They need it! An Lita! Ack, we need more, period! Good story. Ginny-Star 2003-07-28 Great as always! So now Zoicite is back with his memories... and the others will follow... Lataz! Ginny-Star (^-^)/ |