Maria Jamito's 10th Grade Digital Portfolio EHS
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Table of Contents

section one
Personal Reflection of 10th grade
Community Service Reflection
School Involvement Reflection
List of Readings

section twoSites I Read

section three
Reflection on growth during 10th grade English
Biographical Narrative
Persuasive Essay
Analyzing a Short Story
Research Paper

reflection on growth during 10th grade english class

                Last year in English, whenever we wrote paragraphs and essays, it was always written with Jane Schaffer method. The method for a paragraph consists (in order) of a topic sentence, concrete detail, two commentaries, and a concluding sentence. This year, however, we were told to forget about it. Being so used to the method, I wasn�t sure exactly of how to make up my paragraphs and how long they should be. Nevertheless, I promptly stopped writing in that format, in fear of getting a worse grade than of what I�d get if I hadn�t written with the Schaffer method.
                Unlike my freshman year where I wasn�t used to the level of difficulty that came with Pre-AP English, I quickly grew accustomed to it my sophomore year. Coming back from a month-long summer break, I knew that of course, the work in Pre-AP English 10 was going to be a lot more strenuous than that of English 9. And it was; though there weren�t as many timed writes as last year, the process papers and research paper made up for it. Long nights of cramming and writing rough or final drafts proved to be uneventful. I found it to be a lot easier to do that last year, but just couldn�t do it anymore this year.
                Until this year, I hadn�t really thought about why they called process papers the way they did; they involved an actual process or steps in order to fulfill that assignment. I used to completely skip the rough drafts and go straight to writing the final draft. This didn�t help, because I wasn�t able to benefit from the evaluation of my peers, and I also wasn�t able to correct any mistakes on the rough draft so that I wouldn�t do the same for the final draft.
                This year, I learned how to identify different styles of writing such as diction or sentence structure. With this newly acquired knowledge, I was able to analyze various pieces of writing and write essays on them. Though I understood what the prompts for timed writes and essays were about, I had difficulty in figuring out how to put it down on paper. This is one of my weakness, and plan on fixing this in the future.

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