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 The soldier's lament  Poetry listing

He lay immobile
Beside a demoralised wounded horse,
Blood on his head and a broken limb-
He lay dying, and mumbling ‘Alas’!
And there were more-
Some in pieces more than one;
They won, and what they won!
Lost life, lost limb, lost eye and what more!

The moon was silent, the leaves whispered,
The chilling breeze wheezing past,
The hot blood gushed and cold tears swept-
"Ah! For all that’s done what’s in my hand?
Yes, the flag flutters still,
The post buried deep in my friend’s heart.
Keep fluttering; for you we laid out lives,
For you I close my eyes;
But sunshine blessed you in our company yesterday,
We leave you alone under the blinking moon."
-5\11\97,Calcutta-63

COMMENTS :

It must be impressed that this poem was composed before my introduction to literature and before any knowledge of the war poets. War has always seemed foolish, meaningless, especially those waged for reasons of patriotism. It does not need much education to know that there are better ways to resolve an issue, however contentious. Still the flag flutters high, and what is funny, as an emblem of civilization. Ironic is this instance of symbolism since one cannot see how a bloody flag could symbolize civilisation. One also wonders what comes first- humanity or civilization? The argument will rage on, but unfortunately blood will keep flowing.

Compare: Letter from the battlefield

  A brush with life
  A day in adulthood
  A helpless follower
  A man draped in tattered clothes
  After dark
  An axe on Keats
  And can't I mould my future
  And how the dreams fall
  Being in love
  Bereft of success
  Between despair and hope
  Come back soon
  Devil and his counterpart
  Devour
  Engineers
  Epitaph
  Farewell
  Farewell from the circle of friends
  Fast moves the time
  Femina
  Finding Estella again
  Freedom came cheap
  From where to nowhere
  Fulfillment
  Harvest
  Heart in Everest
  Heaven to hell and back again
  HOME
  How he lies amid his ruins, and you smile
  How I missed the beauty
  I wonder
  Insomnia
  Kiss from a rose
  Land's end
  Leeches in my soul
  Letter from battlefield
  Looking back
  Losing everything
  Love and compromise
  Love in modern times
  Madonna
  My abode among the clouds
  My beloved
  Naga Sadhu goes digital
  Nevertheless I tried
  Ode
  On St. Valentine
  On visiting an old place
  Papa dear
  Rancour
  Reminiscences from my graveyard
  Stranger at the tavern
  Suspended animation
  Tears, idle tears
  Telephone call to my beloved
  Tell her I am dead
  Termination
  That passed, this also may
  The blissful illusion
  The breathless seashore
  The bride
  The Buddha smiled, but he died
  The cigarette butt, the mosquito blood
  The day after the crossing
  The desert princess
  The dipping sun
  The eve of St. Valentine
  The frozen wet damsel
  The last word
  The pen and the paper
  The phoenix
  The pimp
  The silence spoke so much
  The soldier's lament
  The tear left a trail
  The world beyond innocence
  They tell me I am mad
  Thoughts of tomorrow
  Titanic
  To hug her close or leave her alone
  Today I die
  Vain is the wish to be born again
  Vanished figure
  Walking through the streets of a country deprived
  When loss pains no more
  Where the grass in not painted green
  Which is better?
  You don't ask
  You see why I died

 

 

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