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Updated 27-Dec-2001   

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 Letter from battlefield  Poetry listing

It is very peaceful here,
Only little spurts of bullets now and then,
Sometimes it would glow at night,
And sometimes shrieks would arise.
It is strange how this strife tears nature apart-
And just if you could see the beauty in which I lie:
Sunrise is the same as in my good old country,
The cry of the robin is the same as in my garden,
It's only the added muffled sigh.
You see, we are men, brave soldiers at that-
How can we cry?
Our hearts are irons, our fingers are steel that pulls the trigger,
Our tears should not flow as blood-
Blood comes free!
But tears do flow when dears die,
The same fellows who laughed the evening before
Now lies in death sore;
The same fellow who ran with us, ate with us,
Spent the nights and days with us
Is now dead as his life a bullet tore.
And each morning they would send weapons more,
Thirsty we lie as like water the blood flows.

Yes, the night is peaceful now.
And a starry night it is.
The beautiful sun would come up soon
And I would be busy till the moon.
Let me share moments few with you-
Tell me, does the sun rise the same for you?
Dear, does each day bring something new?
It's all the same here each day,
Sights of gore abound, marvels are few.
And the heart aches as so far it lies from you.


C all me back, say you long for me,
Say you count the days until the mission is over-
Dear, don't count, for this will never end.
So, call me to you, tell me that you are not well;
Without you, so far away, I am so unwell.
Oh! I am sore with the sight of shells,
With you lies my heaven, and I am in hell.
-9\1\99,Calcutta-63

COMMENTS :

The war poets were a group, and not a school, of poets who wrote poems about their experiences, around the First World War, and also the second. Thus, when, in English literature, one uses the term ‘war poetry’, he is making a specific and certain reference to that disorganised (disorganised because they did not form any formal club to write poetry- the poets and their poetry were as disparate and separate as any random group of people could be- their only common point was their poetry which mainly featured their experiences, mostly sad and traumatic). Literally speaking there have been war poets in all ages, especially bellicose ones. Technically it would be wrong to say that the Iliad is a war poem, but all the same it is mainly a poem (epic, essentially and technically, is a poem) about war; so too is the Aeneid. The common feature in all these poems is the gruesomeness of war. In poems like Iliad and Aeneid, there is a subtle glorification of war, which is not surprising since they are the products of societies which held war in high esteem, and which was quite a way of life in their societies. But still they show the premium on human life and its dignity- and war is the perpetual enemy of man. War is a ravisher of civilization, the product of human endeavour, and symbol of its identity. War is the origin of untold miseries for the affected majority. Patriotism, touching sometimes jingoism and chauvinism, has sometimes rescued war from its evil connotations, but not for long. War is the moment of insanity- it is a highly unstable situation and cannot sustain itself for long- sanity must return or there shall be chaos, this time permanent. Hence the bad name of war- love (remember, everything’s fair in love and war), honour (remember Romeo and Juliet) and all the glossy medals have been too impotent to extenuate it. Thus it was that Wilfred Owen, perhaps the greatest of the war poets, said in a preface:

"This book is not about heroes. English Poetry is not yet fit to speak of them.
Nor is it about deeds, or lands, or anything about glory, honour, might, majesty, dominion, or power, except War.
Above all I am not concerned about Poetry.
My subject is War and the pity of War.
The Poetry is in the pity
."

This poem too is about the pity of war. More than that it shows the soldier fighting in the lap of nature, as a human. He is a husband, a father, he has a home- he is just like you an me. Yet he is taking part, compelled by higher powers, in an insanity- perhaps for you and me- yet he is not insane. He is just impotent. And yet the beauty of the nature around him is mocking him on his face- and bringing tears to his eyes, tears of yearning, desire and nostalgia. Above all the poem shows a man stuck in an impossible situation wanting to turn back to sanity and be the husband and father that he is.

One of the noticeable things among the poems written by the war poets is their total devotion to the happenings on the war field. This heavy indulgence on the gruesomeness is really unfortunate, for human life is nowhere isolated. One wonders if this is really deliberate, because if it is, it is really a point to wonder about. In the extreme loneliness of the front, thoughts of family should be foremost in the mind. This is quite a reflex mental action- in times of agony and trauma we tend to think of better times, or dream of better days to come. A crying baby is shown his favourite doll, a depressed friend is taken to the theatre, and that is how mental alleviation comes. Flanders, the place where the heaviest fighting took place in the World Wars, is one of the most beautiful places on earth. The fields look wonderful with the disarrayed sprawl of wild blood red poppies and blue cornflowers. It is not just rotten flesh. So, in such surroundings it is but natural that one’s heart should to his home. After all, home is where heart is. We leave the heart behind when we go to war. That is how we can press the iron-trigger- only a heartless person can kill another. So is it not natural that one should find ones heart back when he is not killing- like at this moment when the soldier is writing his letter from the battlefield?

NOTE: The influence of war poets in acknowledged.

Compare: The soldier's lament

  A brush with life
  A day in adulthood
  A helpless follower
  A man draped in tattered clothes
  After dark
  An axe on Keats
  And can't I mould my future
  And how the dreams fall
  Being in love
  Bereft of success
  Between despair and hope
  Come back soon
  Devil and his counterpart
  Devour
  Engineers
  Epitaph
  Farewell
  Farewell from the circle of friends
  Fast moves the time
  Femina
  Finding Estella again
  Freedom came cheap
  From where to nowhere
  Fulfillment
  Harvest
  Heart in Everest
  Heaven to hell and back again
  HOME
  How he lies amid his ruins, and you smile
  How I missed the beauty
  I wonder
  Insomnia
  Kiss from a rose
  Land's end
  Leeches in my soul
  Letter from battlefield
  Looking back
  Losing everything
  Love and compromise
  Love in modern times
  Madonna
  My abode among the clouds
  My beloved
  Naga Sadhu goes digital
  Nevertheless I tried
  Ode
  On St. Valentine
  On visiting an old place
  Papa dear
  Rancour
  Reminiscences from my graveyard
  Stranger at the tavern
  Suspended animation
  Tears, idle tears
  Telephone call to my beloved
  Tell her I am dead
  Termination
  That passed, this also may
  The blissful illusion
  The breathless seashore
  The bride
  The Buddha smiled, but he died
  The cigarette butt, the mosquito blood
  The day after the crossing
  The desert princess
  The dipping sun
  The eve of St. Valentine
  The frozen wet damsel
  The last word
  The pen and the paper
  The phoenix
  The pimp
  The silence spoke so much
  The soldier's lament
  The tear left a trail
  The world beyond innocence
  They tell me I am mad
  Thoughts of tomorrow
  Titanic
  To hug her close or leave her alone
  Today I die
  Vain is the wish to be born again
  Vanished figure
  Walking through the streets of a country deprived
  When loss pains no more
  Where the grass in not painted green
  Which is better?
  You don't ask
  You see why I died

 

 

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