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 Heaven to hell and back again  Poetry listing

And the departure from intimacy was painful,
And the pain was so great;
No reason one could set,
And the two souls departed.
Fate is cruel;
They try but the reunion is far away,
Regrets at the past commitments
Remain. Remain memoirs of the past day,
A wasted romance, two wasted lives.

And all through they fought a battle-
Families and friends, neighbours and society-
Always they were enemies subtle.
Grey present, dark future,
Apprehensions at the coming day:
You love just once, and one chance you get;
'Oh! I missed it!' and you say.
How sweet were they together,
At the Eden, in arms of each other,
A fusion of everything- heart and soul and world;
An ecstasy like no other.
Gone is everything, and nothing remains,
But remain the legacies of a forsaken love.
Where you faltered, and how far you've come!
Oh! Death is so appealing, and destiny bereaves-
The undying promises are now dead,
The everlasting company never lasted:
The once dead love has again arisen-
Oh! But 'tis too late!
Far away you’ve come and farther still are to go,
A long way with sun overhead.
Go on, look not back, for pain is there,
Go on and a virgin life will welcome you.
-20\8\97, Calcutta-43

 COMMENTS :

When I knew nothing of Milton I had once read about a book called Paradise Lost. Later I came to hear of Paradise Regained. If I were to rename this poem then I would get such a great company. Aristotle had talked of catharsis in relation with tragedy. There is much controversy as to what catharsis might mean, but one of the possible meanings is education. And inspiration. The death and doom of tragedy leaves us with utter pessimism but the ending fills us with hope. The ending might not always be happy indeed. It might even end in death (as in King Lear) but implicit in death is the notion of rebirth.

  A brush with life
  A day in adulthood
  A helpless follower
  A man draped in tattered clothes
  After dark
  An axe on Keats
  And can't I mould my future
  And how the dreams fall
  Being in love
  Bereft of success
  Between despair and hope
  Come back soon
  Devil and his counterpart
  Devour
  Engineers
  Epitaph
  Farewell
  Farewell from the circle of friends
  Fast moves the time
  Femina
  Finding Estella again
  Freedom came cheap
  From where to nowhere
  Fulfillment
  Harvest
  Heart in Everest
  Heaven to hell and back again
  HOME
  How he lies amid his ruins, and you smile
  How I missed the beauty
  I wonder
  Insomnia
  Kiss from a rose
  Land's end
  Leeches in my soul
  Letter from battlefield
  Looking back
  Losing everything
  Love and compromise
  Love in modern times
  Madonna
  My abode among the clouds
  My beloved
  Naga Sadhu goes digital
  Nevertheless I tried
  Ode
  On St. Valentine
  On visiting an old place
  Papa dear
  Rancour
  Reminiscences from my graveyard
  Stranger at the tavern
  Suspended animation
  Tears, idle tears
  Telephone call to my beloved
  Tell her I am dead
  Termination
  That passed, this also may
  The blissful illusion
  The breathless seashore
  The bride
  The Buddha smiled, but he died
  The cigarette butt, the mosquito blood
  The day after the crossing
  The desert princess
  The dipping sun
  The eve of St. Valentine
  The frozen wet damsel
  The last word
  The pen and the paper
  The phoenix
  The pimp
  The silence spoke so much
  The soldier's lament
  The tear left a trail
  The world beyond innocence
  They tell me I am mad
  Thoughts of tomorrow
  Titanic
  To hug her close or leave her alone
  Today I die
  Vain is the wish to be born again
  Vanished figure
  Walking through the streets of a country deprived
  When loss pains no more
  Where the grass in not painted green
  Which is better?
  You don't ask
  You see why I died

 

 

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