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 A brush with life  Poetry listing
The crying baby in the mother’s lap
Looked ahead at the world at large-
The kite held by thread, and the
Eternal flight of a bird at large-
And wondered- Ah! The difference!
Up on his stumbling feet, he stood, and, ran
Into an open field with benevolent nature around;
The ecstasy of freedom welcomed him with open arms
Each day and the year round.
Oh! He could run now, he could go anywhere he wished,
He could sing now, and do anything he wished.
He was free as the kite; just chains held him bound
Ah! And free he was when he could not walk!

COMMENTS :

Locke, the English philosopher, had defined the mind of a new born baby as absolutely blank- tabula rasa. Indians would like to put it a little differently- the dough of a potter (in the sense that in the beginning it is shapeless, and then it can be shaped into anything; also emblematic of fickleness), or the frog of the well (koopa-manduka. In the sense that the experience of frog in a well is really narrow, thinking that the well is all the world; quite comparable with the child a little after being born). Both comparisons are quite traditional and very effective. The new-born child first lies on its backs, then it learns to sit down, then it learns to walk on all fours and then learns to stumble- finally it learns to walk, an with each step its world increases. On the first day of its outing, and the first day of its school, suddenly the world has increased in a leap- the world is much larger, and it houses many more people, many of them like me. The world keeps increasing with its learning experiences- until it reaches a plateau (for most people). Thus Tess, of Thomas Hardy, lived and died within a fifty kilometre radius; Robinson Crusoe and Moll Flanders had seen much more of the world. And they were all once the new born babe. Says Shakespeare:

   All the world’s a stage,
   And all the men and women merely players:
   They have their exits and their entrances;
   And one man in his time plays many parts,
   His acts being seven ages. At first the infant,
   Mewling and puking in the nurse’s arms.
   And then the whining school-boy, with the satchel,
   And shining morning face, creeping like snail
   Unwilling to school.

By the end of the poem, the child is at the threshold- leaving the nurse’s arms, it is now poised to take the satchel on its back.

  A brush with life
  A day in adulthood
  A helpless follower
  A man draped in tattered clothes
  After dark
  An axe on Keats
  And can't I mould my future
  And how the dreams fall
  Being in love
  Bereft of success
  Between despair and hope
  Come back soon
  Devil and his counterpart
  Devour
  Engineers
  Epitaph
  Farewell
  Farewell from the circle of friends
  Fast moves the time
  Femina
  Finding Estella again
  Freedom came cheap
  From where to nowhere
  Fulfillment
  Harvest
  Heart in Everest
  Heaven to hell and back again
  HOME
  How he lies amid his ruins, and you smile
  How I missed the beauty
  I wonder
  Insomnia
  Kiss from a rose
  Land's end
  Leeches in my soul
  Letter from battlefield
  Looking back
  Losing everything
  Love and compromise
  Love in modern times
  Madonna
  My abode among the clouds
  My beloved
  Naga Sadhu goes digital
  Nevertheless I tried
  Ode
  On St. Valentine
  On visiting an old place
  Papa dear
  Rancour
  Reminiscences from my graveyard
  Stranger at the tavern
  Suspended animation
  Tears, idle tears
  Telephone call to my beloved
  Tell her I am dead
  Termination
  That passed, this also may
  The blissful illusion
  The breathless seashore
  The bride
  The Buddha smiled, but he died
  The cigarette butt, the mosquito blood
  The day after the crossing
  The desert princess
  The dipping sun
  The eve of St. Valentine
  The frozen wet damsel
  The last word
  The pen and the paper
  The phoenix
  The pimp
  The silence spoke so much
  The soldier's lament
  The tear left a trail
  The world beyond innocence
  They tell me I am mad
  Thoughts of tomorrow
  Titanic
  To hug her close or leave her alone
  Today I die
  Vain is the wish to be born again
  Vanished figure
  Walking through the streets of a country deprived
  When loss pains no more
  Where the grass in not painted green
  Which is better?
  You don't ask
  You see why I died

 

 

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