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Updated 27-Dec-2001   

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Yes, heartaches have I had many,
Deprived of hordes of wild beauty,
Forever beyond the reach of desperate hands-
No, the nightingale didn’t cry and fill
My ears with drowsy numbness-
That lunatic lovelorn, years ago dreamt,
O, not of beauties such as to perplex me,
But of some pitch black bird!
Oh! And the mismatched epithet 'lover Keats'-
What of love did he know-?
The frantic cries of Isabella,
Feeding her basil with tears?
The exotic Lamia dying on her marriage night?
Some unspoken words that were best left buried
In his chest, out of sight?
What of love he knew, I ask
When he never wrote of peers?
Dealt in fantasies of unhurried
Arcadia, in the long buried past?
He mistook intellectual illusions for
Stirrings in his heart.
Hallucinating, trauma induced,
He mistook himself for Romeo
And played his tragic part.
-6\8\99,Calcutta-63

COMMENTS : 

Keats is always the favourite with students of poetry. The biggest reason is probably that he was the most romantic, in the popular sense of the word. There is always an element of sensuousness in his poetry- sensuous in both senses (firstly, pertaining to the senses. Secondly, pertaining to sex), sometimes bordering on saccharine. The surprising fact about Keats is that people should be so much besotted to his poetry because of its love content- and if you carefully examine his poems you will find that there is no love to be found. Even if we exclude his personal life from consideration (almost an impossibility in Keats criticism) and take his poems at their own merit, we find a form of love that is very insubstantial, we find the lovers not quite human and even the quality of love borders on extremity. Thus, in Lamia we have a supernatural female falling in love with a human male; in Isabella we have the most grotesque love-story of all literature; in La Belle Dame Sans Merci we have another human-supernatural match; in Eve of St. Agnes we have a prototype of the Romeo-Juliet story in a setting that is not quite conductive to love with nebulous horizons; we have some odes where the speaker of the poem falls in love with some deity, etc. Everywhere we either have grotesque lovers or grotesque stories- he quite seems to have forgotten that love is the most human of all emotions. His poetry is devoid of humanity in this sense. Comparing his love poetry with that of Donne, Browning and Yeats we find what love in human context means- the only form of love that is comprehensible to us- and which is missing in Keats.

[This is only a personal observation]

  A brush with life
  A day in adulthood
  A helpless follower
  A man draped in tattered clothes
  After dark
  An axe on Keats
  And can't I mould my future
  And how the dreams fall
  Being in love
  Bereft of success
  Between despair and hope
  Come back soon
  Devil and his counterpart
  Devour
  Engineers
  Epitaph
  Farewell
  Farewell from the circle of friends
  Fast moves the time
  Femina
  Finding Estella again
  Freedom came cheap
  From where to nowhere
  Fulfillment
  Harvest
  Heart in Everest
  Heaven to hell and back again
  HOME
  How he lies amid his ruins, and you smile
  How I missed the beauty
  I wonder
  Insomnia
  Kiss from a rose
  Land's end
  Leeches in my soul
  Letter from battlefield
  Looking back
  Losing everything
  Love and compromise
  Love in modern times
  Madonna
  My abode among the clouds
  My beloved
  Naga Sadhu goes digital
  Nevertheless I tried
  Ode
  On St. Valentine
  On visiting an old place
  Papa dear
  Rancour
  Reminiscences from my graveyard
  Stranger at the tavern
  Suspended animation
  Tears, idle tears
  Telephone call to my beloved
  Tell her I am dead
  Termination
  That passed, this also may
  The blissful illusion
  The breathless seashore
  The bride
  The Buddha smiled, but he died
  The cigarette butt, the mosquito blood
  The day after the crossing
  The desert princess
  The dipping sun
  The eve of St. Valentine
  The frozen wet damsel
  The last word
  The pen and the paper
  The phoenix
  The pimp
  The silence spoke so much
  The soldier's lament
  The tear left a trail
  The world beyond innocence
  They tell me I am mad
  Thoughts of tomorrow
  Titanic
  To hug her close or leave her alone
  Today I die
  Vain is the wish to be born again
  Vanished figure
  Walking through the streets of a country deprived
  When loss pains no more
  Where the grass in not painted green
  Which is better?
  You don't ask
  You see why I died

 

 

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