Hey everyone. This is the revised version of Chapter 7-When Lightning Strikes. This makes things a lot more realistic. Thanks to Val(Valerian1) this was all posible. Thanks bunches!
The majority of this is copied and pasted until Adam is on the phone with the dispatcher…
Auther’s Note(Recommended)-Okay a couple things. 1)Sorry for the wait…don’t blame me,blame anyone who has a really good fic that I’ve gotten wrapped in. :-D
2) And I’ve come up with a new brilliant beyond brilliant idea. I’ve decided to start writing a series, and I’m thinking of ‘Caring’ being the first story in the series. But nothing is official yet, but I do have some ideas, a lot of ideas. In the series,whether or not it starts with this story, I’ll be introducing new, original character, they’re from Ireland. Cecilia(Cimmy) inspired me, her original charecters/hockey players are Swedes(from Sweded.). I’ve already started to work on,what will be the 1st or 2nd story in the series, and it’s coming along really good. I’ll start typing that up soon.
3) ‘One Messed Up World’ is being put on more of a delay. But I have started a new chapter for it, but my new ideas for ‘Caring’/ the new series has sort of got me hyper.
There’s nothing else for now, please review and Enjoy!
Title- Caring
Author- Samantha aKa iluvguygermaine00
Chapter Title-Chapter 7:When Lightning Strikes
Series-Debating on whether or not this should be put in my series which has no name, yet.
Prequel to-If this is put into the series, it will be the prequel to ‘Cruise’-the name is being debated.
Thanks- Cecilia-for your inspriation for my series and your GREAT series. Also, thanks for all your help.
ALL of my reviewer-I Love You, guys/girls!
Story Recomendations of Chapter 7(like story(ies) of the week…sorta.)
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Cecilia’s Series, pen-name: Cimmy
Chelea’s All Locked In and All Locked In 2 pen-name-WeBuiltThisCityOnRockAndRoll
Jen’s Toilet Ring of Oz, Trick or Treating Isn’t Safe, and if she does a sequel
pen-name-Jen17
Kshyne99’s Summer Luvin’ pen-name Kshyne99
Kristine and Cecilia’s It’s Summer In My Heart under Kristine’s pen-name-Nygoldfish54
Well, that should keep you busy. I did that, ‘cause those are all some really great stories, and I fell in love with them.
Disclaimer:I don’t own the Ducks, Disney and Steven Brill do.I don’t own the people who played in the movies(like, varsity hockey players, cheerleaders, Bombay,Orion, you get the picture). I DO own Samantha, she’s mine.
Warning-None right now, that I know of…language,maybe.
Rating- Okay, I think right now it’s PG or PG-13, but I’m moving it up to R because of the last chapter(abuse and rape content), and things to come.
Enjoy!(Yes,I’m finally done with all that,)
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Samantha sat in the bleachers, doing her homework and watching the Ducks’ hockey practice.
Guy told her to go for 3 reasons.
1)Because she always did,
2)To know where she was,
and,
3)To keep her away from Varsity.
To Samantha, the new coach looked tough. She, personally, held a grudge against him. Coach Bombay was unable to convince him to let her sit with them at games, or anything that she’d down with Bombay as coach.
Samantha smiled to herself as she watched Julie block all the Ducks shots, even Guy’s.
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Practice was over. Samantha went outside to eet up with the Ducks. Adam was the first one out, he looked sort of depressed, but walked over to talk to her anyway.
“Hey Samantha.”
“Hi Adam. You did really good at practice, today.” Samantha smiled.
“Thanks.” He mumbled.
“What’s wrong?’
“I made Varsity.”
“And you’re sad, why?” Samantha looked confused.
“Nobody else did.”
“Oh, I see.” Samantha said. Adam was on of the only Ducks, let alone people, that she could carry a full conversation with. “So, how was your day at school?”
“Alright, yours?” Adam said while the others started to walk out.
“Hard. You’d think being the only kid in the classroom would make a a little easier. Wrong! I have so much homework, but I finished most of it…I think.” Samantha laughed making Adam smile. Her smile and laugh were one in a million. You couldn’t be mad at her after you saw her smile, and it was hard to tell her bad news if she was smiling.
“Yea. I have a lot of homework, too. I better get going. Bye.”
“Bye, Adam.” She said as he walked off.
Then Guy came up behind her and scared her, she jumped atleast 3 feet in the air.
“That wasn’t very nice!” she complained.
“Sorry.” Guy gaver her a puppy-dog face.
“You’re forgiven.” Samantha smiled.
“Good.” Guy smiled back.
“You did good at practice.”
“Thanks, it was hard. But I mad first line, so it was worth is.”
“Congrats.” Samantha said as they walked back to the dorms.
“I think we’re all going to get something to eat, you coming?”
“No, I don’t think so. I’m not really hungry and I have a lot of homework.”
“You sure? When was the last time you ate?”
Samantha sighed.It seemed like one of Guy’s most common asked questiones toward her. “Yes, I’m sure. And lunch,I think.”
“C’mon, you haven’t eaten since 12:30! It’s 5 now.” Guy insisted.
Samantha shook her head and shrugged. “I’m not hungry. I’m gonna go finish my homework. Talk to ya later, kay?”Samantha ran off not giving him time to answer.
“Whatever.” Guy mumbled.
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It had been a couple of weeks at Eden Hall. The Ducks had tied against the Blake Bears. Now, they ere invited to go out for dinner.
Samantha wasn’t invited, obviously. Guy told her to stay in her dorm. He had went to get her something to eat, earlier. A garden salad wit Italkian dressing. She was a vegetarian. Even though it was a Frieday, Guy told her that she’d better be sleeping by 9:30. He would be home by 11 probably and would come and check on her, he had a key to her dorm.
She obeyed. Ate her salad, did her homeworkd, then went to sleep.
But Guy never did come to check on her. He was too busy with operation: Brazillian Revenge. Then he rested up for the game at dawn. He totally forgot he even hada sister.
The game was at 6, Varsity was kicked out by 6:30. Samantha went to Guy and Adam’s dorm at 7, Adam was helping her with math.
Knock.
Adam opened the door, he looked tired. “Hey.” He yawned.
“You look tired. Did I wake you up?” Samantha said as she walked into the dorm. “Where’s Guy?”
“you sort of did, but that’s okay. I have practice at 8 anyways. Guy’s skating laps. At dinner, Varsity made JV pay the bill, then JV put Brazillian ants in Varsity’s rooms, then we had a game, Orion broke it up. Now the Ducks are skating laps.” Adam said in one breathe.
“You guys are so immature.” Samantha smiled. “Sorry for waking you up.”
“It’s okay. Let’s get to the math.”
Samantha was sitting on Adam’s bed as he got his stuff ready for hockey practice and helped her with math.
It was 7:30 when Adam was waling out and Guy was walking in. Samantha was finishing her math on Adam’s bed. If she had any problems, she could just ask Guy.
“Hey Guy!” Samantha said to a worn out Guy. He just sorta looked at her.
“Adam told me what happened.”
“Look, I’m really tired. So could you just shut-up?!” Guy snapped.
“Sorry.” Samantha whispered.
It was quiet for a few minutes. Samantha was getting her stuff ready to leave. “Uh, Guy?”
“What?” Guy snapped. He sounded angry.
“Nevermind.” Samantha mumbled.
Guy got up from his bed and cornered Samantha. He never acted this was before, it scared the hell out of her. “No! Not never mind, you’re going to tell me! You know why? Because you disturbed me!”
Samantha just stared, then looked down. This reminded her of the guy her mom once dated. “Sorry.” She mumbled.
“You know what? I’m so fuckin’ sick of you! You’re like and annoying little pyppy who follows everyone around! But nobody wants you around! Everybody is tired of seeing you! I’m tired of taking care of you! You drove everyone away! Dad and Connie! It’s your fault we broke up!” Guy was screaming at her. He was never like this. He had literally gone berserk. “I wish you were never born! Dad wouldn’t have left! Me and Connie would still be together. I would be a HAPPY only child. I’m sick of seeing you. You ruin everything! You’re a waste of space!You barely eer talk or eat! What’s the point of you being on this earth?! And why the fuck did you have to be my sister?!”
Samantha was so scared she was shaking. She had tears in her eyes, but she wouldn’t let them fall in fear of what Guy might do.
“Just leave! And I don’t want to see you anymore!” Guy yelled and walked back to his bed.
Samantha ran back to her dormroom and locked the door. She cried for an hour striaight. What Guy had said really hurt. She decided to leave. She remember a cliff that the Ducks went to have lunch at sometime. She’d walk there, it wasn’t too far, and make Guy a happy, only child.
She knew the Ducks had practice at 3 so she’d leave then.
When 3 came, she left. Leaving her 2 Duck jerseys, her first Ducks and the Ducks with the new logo, and a note that simply said ‘sorry’ on the front door.
Then she left, not telling anyone.
*
Guy came back from practice at 5. He looked at what was left at his door. “Shit.” He mumbled and walked in the door. “Hey Banks, did Samantha stop by.”
“Nope, sorry.” He shrugged.
So Guy took his key to Samantha’s room and ran down to her dorm.
Knock. “Samantha? Samantha Germaine?”
No one answer, so he unlocked the door to find an empty dorm.
He ran to everyone’s dorm and sked if they saw her, Connie and Julie last, but only Connie was there.
Knock. “Hey, have you seen Samantha?”
“Nope, why?’
“She’s missing.”
“Huh?”
“I think she ranaway.”
“Why would she do that?” Connie looked confused.
“ ‘Cause I yelled at her, pretty bad.”
“What did you do say that you hated her and you never wanted to see her again?” Connie said sarcastically.
Guy looked up with a serious face. “Yea.”
“Guy! What the hell were you thinking?”
“I don’t know, I guess I was just venting from Orion and Varsity. I didn’t mean any of it, Connie, I swear.”
“I know.”
“Help me find her, please?” Guy pleaded.
“I guess. But not for you, for her.”
“Alright, let’s get the others.”
The Ducks split into groups.
Guy,Connie, Julie, Adam and Portman looked one side of the town.
Jesse, Fulton, and Charlie on the other.
Averman, Dwayne and Golberg waited in her dorm.
Luis, Ken, and Russ searched the school and campus.
During their sear it started raning hard and lightning. All the groups, but Guy’s went back to her dorm.
Guy’s group was riding in Adam’s car. It was an SUV and fitted more people.
“Guy, I think we should go back and call some people. And then start searching again when it stops raining.” Portman suggested.
“No. We can’t leave her in the rain! Its not safe and she hates lightning.” Guy informed.
“Yea.” Julie agreed. “I remember one time when we ate lunch on that cliff and it started she was the first one to grab things and run to the car.” Julie smiled.
“Oh my god, Julie! That’s it! The cliff! Adam, go to the cliff!”
“Why would she be there?” Portman asked confused.
“Don’t you guys remember anything?! We were all once talking about our favorite placed and she said that the cliff was hers’ because it was a great place to watch the sunset and stargaze!” Connie said, really hyper.
“Oh yea! Good one, Con.” Adam smiled.
So, Adam drove to the cliff.
Samantha was there. He knees up against her chest, her arms wrapped around her ligs, sitting inched from the edge. She was soaking wet and shivering.
The 5 ran out of the car. Guy, Connie and Julie on one side, Portman on the other, and Adam behind her.
“Samantha!” Guy called.
She looked at him quicked, and turned her head back forward. “I thought you never wanted to see me again.” She said and inched closer to the edge.
“I didn’t mean anything that I said! I’m sorry! Really, really sorry! C’mon lets go home.”
“Why would you want an annoying puppy back?”
Julie looked at Guy. “You called her an annoying puppy?!”
Guy glared at Julie, then tlooked back at Samantah. “I’m sorry! Please just come home!”
Samantha looked at Guy. “Shouldn’t you be happy?”
“Why would I be happy? You’re inches away from death. I don’t want you to die!”
“I’m making you an only chick and helping you and Connie get back together!” Samantah said as she rested her head on her knees.
“You told her she was the reason we broke up?!” Connie yelled and hit Guy.
“Yea.” Guy looked down at his feet.
“Samantha, that’s not why we broke up! You had nothing to do with it. I love ya, hun. You’re llike my little sister. Guy was just blaming you. He didn’t mean anything he said! I promise!” Connie yelled out to Samantha, then turned to Guy. “You better be happy that I love that girl enough to know that we’re going to get her back home. Or else, I would throw you off this cliff! And you better be truly sorry, Guy Germaine!” Connie scoulded.
“I am Con, I’m truly sorry.” Guy looked at Connie sincerely.
“Samantha, can’t we do this inside? It’s cold and wet!” Portman called out.
“Then leave. I don’t care. Just go!” she called back.
“C’mon Samantha, you know you’re not going to do this! Your top 5 fears, remember? Losing Guy, losing the Ducks, hurting Guy or the Ducks, being along,especially in the dark, and dying! You’d be accomplishing all your fears! Losing Guy and the Ducks, hurt Guy and the Ducks, being alone, and dying! You don’t want to do that do you?” Adam yelled.
Samantha broke down crying. Adam was right. “What happens if it makes people happy?” she sniffed.
“It’s not going to! I’m sorry! I ddn’t mean anything, honsestly. I’m truly sorry! I wouldn’t come looking fo you would I? Please forgiveme. We can talk mor when we get back to the dorm!”
“Do you mean it?”
“All of it! I love you!”
“I love you too,Guy.” Samantha said as standed up. I was sort of difficult, her clothes weighed about half her weight.
The 5 others siled.
But just then a bolt of lightning striked, one part hit a tree branch over Samantha, the rest hit Samantha hit Samantha in the shoulder. Samantha was kncock unconcious and then the tree branch fell on top of her.
“Holy shit!” Portman screamed and jumped back.
Guy, Connie, Julie and Adam went running up to her. Portman was close enough.
“Don’t touch her or the branch, you could be electracuded. Wait a minute, I’ll go call and ambulace.” Adam said and ran to get his cell phone.
“Oh my god!” Julie covered her mouth. It looked really bad. That they could See, Samantha was bleeding from her forehead. They had figured out that at least one rib proke because the way the branch fell, it was farely big compared to Samantha. He head fell on a rock, which caused her forehead to bleed and the branch fell right on to of her rib cage.
‘Hello, 9-1-1 emergancy, how can I help you?”
“Uh, my friend’s sister was hit by lightning and then a tree branch fell on her. We’re on a cliff off of Park Hill.”
“Okay. Help will be there shortly.”
“Thanks you.” Adama told the dispatcher. “Someone is on their way.” Adam imformed the others.
“Thanks Adam.” Guy said.
Then Adam went to me his car. Julie, Connie and Portman waited in the car with Adam, while Guy stayed outside with Samantha.
“I’m sorry.” Guy whispered as the firemen arrived with EMTs not too far behind.
As Guy watched the firemen carefully remove the branch off Samantha, an EMT walked up to Guy.
“Are you related to her?” he asked.
“Yea. I’m her brother, Guy Germaine.”
“Okay, Guy. I’m going to ask you a couple of questions. What’s her name?”
“Samantha.”
“How old is she.”
“11.”
“When’s her birthday.”
“March 9th, ____”( I didn’t use years because I don’t have the story set in an actual year.)
“Is she allergic to any medications?”
Guy didn’t answer, he was watching the other 2 EMTs take her pulse and try to talk to Samantha.
“Guy, stay with me. She’ll be fine. Is she allergic to any medications?”
“No, I don’t think so.” Guy shook his head.
“Is she taking any medications?”
Guy shook his head no.
“Do you know the last time she ate?”
Guy shook his head again.
“Where are your parents?”
“Um, my mom lives in St. Paul.”
The EMT nodded then went to help the 2 others. They were stabilizing her spine, colaring her, and putting her on a strecher.
Then the medic arrived and helped the EMTs place Samantha into the ambulance. Thenthe EMT walked back over to Guy.
“Do you want to come with her?”
Guy nodded and followed the EMT into the ambulance. Adam followed the ambulance to the hospital.
Guy watched as the medic hook Samantha up to a heart machine like thing(I don’t know what it’s called, sorry.) Luckily she had a faint heart beat and CPR would not have to be performed. They strarted to cut her clothes off, to see how much damage there was. One EMT was feeling her body to see where the injuries were while another EMT started to bandage relevent injuries. Samantha was hooked up to an IV right before they got to the hospital where Guy,Adam, Connie, Julie, and Portman were told to go to the waiting room.
Adam gave Portman the keys to his car and dorm room to get Guy and himself dry clothes and tell the other Ducks. Adam stayed because besides Guy he was the closest to Samantha.
By the time the doctor came out all of the Ducks were there, Guy couldn’t get ahold of his Mom,, and it was 10:30.
“Is she okay?” Charlie asked.
“She’s still unconcious. She has a servere case of pnemonia(NA-MOAN-YA), a concusion, 2 broken ribs, 1 cracked rib, a broken ankle…” the list went on with big words describing the damage done by the lightning. Heart problems, mainly. She also had to get stitches on her head where her head hit and side of her stomach from where the branch it first.
“Can we see her?” Connie asked.
“I’m sorry, but at this time only immediate family is allowed. Guy?”
Guy nodded and followed the the doctor into the room where Samantha was.
“I’ll give you some time alone.” The doctor smiled and Guy just nodded.
“Hey.” He whispered and pulled a chair next to the bed and took a hold of Samantha’s hand. “I’m sorry. Really sorry, for everything.”
Guy sat there as if he was waiting for an answer, but all he got was beeping.
“I can’t believe this happened. We were fine, right? When you wake up I’m going to make this all up to you. You’re never going to be like this, I promise.”
Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep.
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What do you guys think of the revised version?
Oh, by the way, Chelsea, my computer doesn’t have spell check, I don’t know why, it’s gay like that.
I’m almost done with the next chapter, YAY! All I really have to do is type it up.
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