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NEW!! V.I.N.I.S.S.A.
Actually, I wrote this thrilling (to some people it's thrilling, but not to most, cos I'm just not good enough in writing this) short story about 8 months ago for my Year 12 English creative writing assessment. And now I'd like to share it with you guys.
This story isn't entirely true, but it is based on a true story that happened to my friend in Indonesia at the beginning of 2001. I don't know if you'll believe this superstitious thing, but I believe my pal's story, and in fact these incidents are common among us Indonesians. (But luckily it's never happened to me)
Anyway, you may find the ending weird because it doesn't seem to end the story. Hehe, to solve this, just go back to the beginning of the story and look at the date in the beginning of the 1st paragraph. Then look at the date in the 2nd paragraph, and it'll make sense. I had to do this because in the English assessment I was supposed to write around 700 words, while this story is about 1000 words already. (But actually, this was summarised. Before that, it was about 2000 words!!)
Deep Within the Heart
This is an original novel (hmmm... actually it's not yet a novel, cos it's still too short and unfinished) by me. It's about a girl who wanted to start a new life. She had a first love back in the past, but it turned out to be painful. So she told herself that she didn't need another companion, until two guys slowly attracted her attention...
Chapter 1: A New Beginning
Chapter 2: Trouble in the Morning
Chapter 3: The First Impression
Chapter 4: Lost
Chapter 5: The Day in the Mansion
Chapter 6: The Unknown Rivalry
To be continued...
Tell Me What You Think of My Novel and Short Story!!
Please take the POLL!! and/or e-mail me what you think of these written creations. Or you can write your opinion in the guestbook. I'll appreciate any comments and suggestions to help me improve my writing ability. But as for the novel, I might not change the story for any chapters that I already did. ^_^
