Example 16-21

 ( 16 ) 

At the meeting, he made a proposal. 

At the meeting, he made a proposal of adding two more production lines. 

At the meeting, he mentioned the possibility of adding two production lines.

At the meeting, the general manager mentioned the possibility of adding two production lines which would double the capacity of the plant.

  

( 17 )

The design of this house is based on three factors.

The design of this house is based on three factors including fund availability, land orientation, and client taste.

 For the design of this house, three factors which include fund availability, land orientation, and client taste are considered.

 For the design of this house, three factors are considered.

The one which receives the most attention is the fund availability.  The other two includes land orientation and client taste.

 The design of this house is basically dictated by the following three factors:

 fund availability, land orientation, and client taste.

　

 Three factors that must be considered for the design of this house include

fund availability, land orientation, and client taste.

　

 There are three factors that must be considered for the design of this house including

fund availability, land orientation, and client taste.

　

 The design of this house is based on the fund availability, the land orientation,

and the taste of the client.

 We believe that there are three factors that should be considered for the design of this house. They are fund availability, land orientation, and client taste.

 

( 18 )

 After three years of working on this research project,

he and his team have finally found the cause to that problem.

　

 Working together for three years,

finally, he and his team have found the cause to that problem.

 

He and his team have worked together for three years

to find the cause to that problem.

 

( 19 ) 

We know that he is a good engineer.

 We know that he is a good engineer and that he is a good manager as well. 

We are selecting Wang to be the new president because

we know that he is a good engineer and that he is a good manager as well.

　

We are selecting Wang to be the new president because

we know that he is a good engineer who knows the design of all products

and that he is a good manager who is respected by all employees.

 

( 20 )

 To elect a president, we need to consider the candidate's education, professionalism, and passion for the company.

 To elect a president who will lead the company with spirit, energy, and imagination,

 we need to consider the candidate's education, professionalism, and character.

　

In conclusion, to elect a president who will lead the company with spirit, energy, and imagination, we need to consider the candidate's education, professionalism, and character.

 

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