Example 11-15

( 11 )

This house is on the market for sale. 

This house has been on the market for ten months. 

This house which has been on the market for ten months

requires a lot of repairing. 

　

This house which has been on the market for ten months

requires a lot of repairing and remodeling.

　

 This house which requires a lot of repairing has been

 on the market for ten months.

　

( 12 )

The general manager made a decision yesterday.

Considering the great profit last year, the general manager made a decision yesterday

 to add two more production lines.

　

To increase the company's profit, the general manager made a decision yesterday

to add two more production lines.

　

 The general manager made a decision yesterday to increase the company's profit by adding two more production lines. 

The general manager who was hired last year made a decision yesterday. 

The general manager hired by the company last year made a decision yesterday.

Hired by the CEO last year, the general manager made a surprising decision yesterday. 

The general manager who was hired by the company last year

made an important decision yesterday.

 

( 13 )

The general manager made an important announcement yesterday. 

The general manager made an important announcement yesterday

that the company would invest twenty million dollars to add two more production lines.

　

 Yesterday the general manager made an important announcement

that the company would invest twenty million dollars to add two more production lines which could triple the company’s production capacity. 

   

 Through the public relation office the general manager made an important announcement yesterday that the company would invest two million dollars

to add two more production lines in three years.

 

( 14 ) 

 This promotional plan includes two key elements. 

This promotional plan proposed by the sales manager includes two key elements.

 This promotional plan, which is proposed by the sales manager,

includes two key elements.

　

 This promotional plan which is proposed by the sales manager and endorsed by the general manager includes two key elements.

　

 This promotional plan is proposed by the sales manager

who was hired last year by the general manager.

　

This promotional plan when it was first introduced last year

was well received by the customers.

　

This promotional plan is proposed by the sales manager

whom we consider the best manager in the company.

 

( 15 )

 This new product is the result of a three-year research project.

This new product is the result of

a three-year  research project and two million dollar investment.

　

Invented by the same technical team this new product is the result of

a three-year  research project and two million dollar investment. 

　

Winning all the major awards this new product is the result of

a three-year  research project and two million dollar investment.

　

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