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  • To fully understand school uniform policies, we chose an excerpt from a high school planner that describes the school?s dress code in detail. The major claim of the text is that "no students shall dress in a manner, which presents a clear and present danger to the student?s health or safety, or in a manner which causes an interference with schoolwork." The evidence that was used to back up the major claim is stated with a list of clothing that is inappropriate for students to wear. Students who wear hats, sunglasses, sweatbands, tank tops, halter-tops, mesh shirts, or bare midriffs are considered a violation to the school?s dress code and are not appropriate attire. Also, the planner states that any article of clothing exhibiting violence, drugs, alcohol, or any other means of vulgarity is inappropriate. Girls? skirts are to be no longer than the fingertips when extended alongside the skirt and the neck opening of a shirt should be no more than two inches larger than the neck. The straps of a tank top can be no less than two inches. The purpose of these restrictions is to keep students concentrated on their studies rather than being distracted by revealing, flashy, or vulgar dress.

    Throughout this text there are several rhetorical elements that are used. The imagery that the school presents is what would appear to be an Abercrombie & Fitch advertisement. According to the article, everyone should dress in a particular way that meets the standards of the high school's dress code and from this an image is perceived: a very preppy student body. Another image that is present is the phrase "clear and present danger" (planner). This phrase is a figure of speech that has a negative connotation to anyone reading the text. In this case, it is describing clothing that could appear to be a threat to the students? safety. The main ideograph presented in this text is the word "safety." The word "safety" appeals to parents as well as school administrators who wish to provide the best learning environment for their students. The text is trying to portray a message of safety implying that unrestricted articles of clothing are seen as dangerous.



    The major claim of our second text, "Manual on School Uniforms", is that "the adoption of school uniform policies can promote school safety, improve discipline, and enhance the learning environment" (US Department of Education). School uniform policies should be adopted in all schools either on a mandatory or voluntary basis. In order to make the uniform policy successful there are several guidelines that must be implemented. These guidelines include: parental involvement, protection of students? rights of expression, determining whether or not to make uniforms mandatory, the option of whether or not to have an "opt out" provision, not requiring students to wear a message, assist families that need financial help, and finally treat school uniforms as part of an overall safety program.

    There are several pieces of evidence supporting the author?s major claim. Much of the evidence that the author pointed out was specific statistics dealing with the issue of school uniforms. In Long Beach California uniforms became mandatory in all elementary and middle schools and the overall school crime decreased 36%, fights decreased 51%, sex offenses decreased 74%, weapons offenses decreased 50%, assault and battery offenses decreased 34%, and vandalism decreased 18%. In Seattle Washington "the demeanor of the school has improved 98%, truancy and tardies are down, and they have not reported one incidence of theft" (US Department of Education). In Richmond Virginia the benefits of the uniform program have been improved behavior, increase in attendance, and higher student achievement. In Memphis Tennessee the tone of the school has changed because there is not the competitiveness over clothes anymore. In Baltimore Maryland there has been a new sense of seriousness about work due to uniforms and in Norfolk Virginia there has been several improvements in students? behavior. Finally, in Phoenix Arizona there is an "overall improvement in the school climate and a greater focus on positive behavior" (US Department of Education).

    Throughout the article there were many rhetorical elements used. One example of this was shown in the ideographs of the text. hese ideographs had negative connotations such as gangs, theft, violence, peer pressure, life threatening, intruders, disruption, and weapons. These negative words were used in order to grab the attention of parents and school officials and to try to convince them that adopting a school uniform policy will be very beneficial to their school. The negative ideographs would make people think that schools are in a bad situation and that school uniforms might be the answer to the problem. In addition, one metaphor is stated about how "adopting a school uniform policy can promote school safety" (US Department of Education). The author continues to stress the idea that school uniforms will make the school a safer and better place to learn in, therefore causing people to want to adopt the policy. A second metaphor is the idea of the "disadvantaged students." The author referred to the families that would need financial help as being "disadvantaged." This causes the reader to look at these people much differently because of how the author describes them.



    According to our third analytical reading, the article, "Do They Reduce Violence?Or Just Make Us Feel Better?," by Paliokas and Rist, produces certain claims on the negative side of school uniforms. The first claim is that wearing uniforms does not reduce violence in public schools. Evidence supporting this claim includes several distinct points, such as "a uniform policy penalizes all students instead of focusing on the small percentage of kids causing the problems" (Paliokas and Rist). Children are also not likely to change their destructive behavior just because they are wearing uniforms, so violence will resurface quickly despite the presence of a mandatory dress code. One principal Norman Issacs states, "students need to learn to make choices and decisions based on internal values, rather than functioning with arbitrary rules that set the limits for them." Lastly, "uniforms would eliminate a warning system provided by the way a student dresses, which lets teachers and administrators identify and rescue students who might need help" (Paliokas and Rist).

    The next claim says that the reduction of violence in schools due to uniforms is incomplete and misleading. There are also several points of evidence focused on this claim. All of testimonies, surveys, and high hopes of the positive effects of uniforms are based on personal experiences in schools. There are no documented results or proven records of reduction in the acts of violence, just an insufficient body of evidence.

    In addition to this claim, evidence from Long Beach school district in California is presented. This district experienced success with a uniform policy; however, some aspects are quite misleading. This was the first school district in the country to adopt a mandatory public school uniform policy in grades K-8. First, without a careful assessment of the data from Long Beach over time and the elimination of competing explanations for why reductions of violence have taken place, the data has to remain suspicious. Another problem is that the data was only from grades K-8 and did not include high school evidence. Further, other factors could have contributed to the decrease in violence including: increased parental involvement with their children and in the activities of the school, the trend of violence was at its peak and ready to decline, or it could have been a case of the "Hawthorne Effect," where the short-term attention to and visibility of the problem created an immediate downturn in violence (Paliokas and Rist).

    The last claim states that a jump to the uniform bandwagon is sometimes too readily taken without thoughtful consideration of the possible consequences. There is certain evidence supporting this significant claim as well. The euphoria of early results comes from the tendency to overstate possible benefits and overlook potential costs. The adoption of a school uniform policy may not be as easy or as sustainable as the enthusiasm for the idea might suggest. Making policy decisions based on incompletely verified information or personal opinions is dangerous because we do not know what is not proven.

    There are a couple of ideographs used throughout this article that appeal to readers. The word "bandwagon" means that everyone is doing it and naturally if one is not participating then they are not cool. President Clinton jumped on the uniform bandwagon promoting the policy to the country. Also, "trend" suggests that uniforms be seen as a public school fad that other school districts want to adopt to cure school violence. In addition to the ideographs, visual imagery is provided of a parochial school uniform to resolve violence. "The perception of the Catholic schools is that they are safe, secure, and orderly learning environments" (Paliokas and Rist). Lastly the narrative of the article indicates that school uniforms should be carefully considered based on all possible negative and positive results. Additionally, uniforms are not the cure-all for violence in schools.


    The first two texts that we analyzed contained several similarities within their arguments. Both texts describe a safer and more productive learning environment due to strict school dress codes. Although these texts are in favor of a particular dress code, the first does not require an actual uniform to be worn, but rather a uniformed look. This differs from the second text, which encouraged head-to-toe uniforms. The third text had a completely different outlook. The authors believed that school uniforms would not be a cure-all for violence, but rather a security blanket for parents and school officials.

    The rhetorical elements from all of the articles differed. The first article used calming, alerting words to describe a safe school environment, whereas the second text utilized harsh words and phrases to describe an environment without uniforms. The third artifact used words from pop culture, such as "bandwagon" and "trend," when describing the negative aspects of uniforms.

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