Never Again: Song fic for Ellie:
wow! Jami i loved it! that was great!! :) Good job ~Ellie


"Never Again" (1/1): *chuckles * Morbid works for me here, Jami. Hope Ellie liked this one!! Very nice work! ~Missy

Jami i just read "Never Again" and i wanna say i think you did an awesome job on that fic. The way you write it was good, the dialogue, the actions...everything fit so perfectly.

You should be seriously proud of this fic and i just wanted to tell you it absolutely rocks. i'm practically speechless here...
~Tasha

Favorite Mistake-Anti V-day fic:
*Nicole wipes the drool from her lips* A nekkid Shannon. What a more perfect way to celebrate Anti VDay. LOL. I loved this. hehe. *pictures Shannon having arrows sticking out of his butt* OH that is too cute. ~Nicole

<<"Listen
blondie, I may love you, but I sure as hell can beat the hell out of you
too. I am going to celebrate valentine's day the way it was meant to be
celebrated. I'm going to stalk you, shooting arrows at your butt." Jami
stomped off down the hallway.>>


Dude! I LOVE that right there LoL ~Carmie

Even Angels Fall

Chapter 3: Poor Angel. I hope she is ok. I dont say this very often, but 'that damn Jeff' has it in for Angel/Jaylynn. Love the Shannon/Angel storyline you have going too Jami. And Jeff using the mic....wish he'd use the mic more on Raw. But this is just as good as the real thing. Great job.
~nicole

"Even Angels Fall" (Resp. Pt.1-3): Nice to see you semi-realistically dealing with the problems these two would face, Jami. Keep going! ~Missy

Not So Angelic:


"Not So Angelic" (Resp. Pt.33-36): Ouch; I feel a wee bit sorry for Shane here. Some really good stuff, Jami. A very sweet and deserved conclusion!~Missy

Feedback for Never Again
Sorry it took me so long to reply. I thought this was a heartbreaking story. And I liked it. It made me think of things I wouldn't normally. I like how it shows although we love someone, they may not actually be good for us. Great work Jami.
~ Nicole ~
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Even Angels Fall

CHapter 5: WOW! I'm really liking 'suggestive' Jeff. That is like...OMG. I wish something like that would really happen on Raw. But still I can't stop talking about HBK being handcuffed and shirtless. And go Shane O-Mac. I was happy when he came out to save Angel...even though it should have been Shannon. I'll forgive you this time. LOL
~Nicole

Chapter 7:

*Giggle* Oh, too much nekkidness in one chapter! *G* That was so funny -
"I'm a huge fan!" *picks herself back up off the floor* Things to say to
Shane McMahon when you're nekkid... oh crap, there's those mental images
again... *G* I just know i'm going to be thinking about Shane H and his
Golden Gun all day... *big stoopid grin* Yeah, like that's a bad thing.
*G*

I think Shane's gone a bit over the top though. Just because you have a
fight with your girlfriend, doesn't mean that she's going to run straight
into the arms of another guy. He's turning into the preying mantis type,
and it's beginning to get scary...

Great chapter, we want more!!! *G*

Rakie

Chapter 12

Ahhhhh!! Eeee...what the frick's going on. That's like a love...square...damnit!! And frick!!! What happened to the stalker though? There's been absolutely nothing mentioned on him/her/it/them lately...just curious.

And way to make me feel sorry for everyone even slightly involved in the story. Dude, i was about to take pity on JayLynn's neighbor just for the amount of [suspected] traffic that'll go through there in the next while. But awww...poor Shane H...and Shane M....and JayLynn...and...ok so not Jeff really, but ya know 3 outta 4 ain't bad.

Now...just tell me what's going on and everything will be good. LoL
`Take Care`
-Tasha-

Chapter 8 feedback

Thank you Stephanie McMahon, the voice of reason! It's about time someone
pointed that out to Shane. I can't believe he's acting like this... he's
such a (...thinks of a polite word...) moron. Jaylynn would be better off
just leaving him for good... *crosses fingers*

Great chapter, Jami! I wanna know what happens next - is he really going to
chase her to North Carolina?? Geez, talk about obsessive... BTW, i think
i'm going to start working that into my conversations - everytime someone
annoys me i'm going to say 'That's it, I'm going to North Carolina!' *G*
More soon please!

Rakie
 

Gah the stalker dude's gonna take a picture and it'll all look wrong and BLAH!!! No...it was just innocent hair-dying!! Though now i must say i agree with Smurf-a-fied Hardy that McMahon may not be the best person for one Ms. Emerson. 'Cause i mean really...UNBALANCED BOY!

Now i'm not rootin' for Smurf boy [yet i'm sure] but he is ahead of McMahon in the popularity charts. LoL Doesn't that sound official?
~Tasha~
 

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! i love this chapter! And go Stephanie McMahon. I believe the saying goes: "Don't mess with me, i'm a McMahon damnit". LoL

And i can't wait until *SOMEONE* sorts Jeff, Shane M and Shane H out. And i'm glad JayLynn didn't forgive Shane M 'cause really UNBALANCED FREAK! He tried to choke her... the damn pscyhopath.

Now if only she could prove that Jeff was merely helpin' her with her hair. Frick...people are so sick minded today that innocent pictures seem so incriminating.
`Take Care`
-Tasha-
 

all this is from Missy

"Even Angels Fall" (Resp. Pt.4-16): Ahh, how shall Jeff ever manage to say what he means to say?! Nice work, Jami.

"Favorite Mistake" (1/1): This managed to be both funny and tender; a perfectly plausible reaction to this Valentine's Day stuff ;-). Nice, Jami.

"Gone" (1/1): I hope your friend like! Good work, Jami!

"Little Good byes" (1/1): A nice kiss-off fic, Jami.

"Maybe It Was Memphis" (1/1): Whee! Sap and Pam Tillis! ;-) . A very sweet songfic, Jami, hope it was appreciated!
 

Ch. 15

ARGHHHHHHH!!! The only person in the world more evil than Shane is you
Jami!! How dare you do this to us?? *breathes into paper bag* Okay. I'm
fine. *goes off to locate the next chapter* I'm soooo glad i didn't have
time to read this before the weekend, otherwise i really would have been
chasing you with my giant shoe... *G*
Rakie

Ch. 16

Jeff, get back here and tell us about Katrina!!! Dammit!! Oh crap, and now
Shane's going to get beat up... wait, since when was that a bad thing? *G*
Jeff so shouldn't do it though, because it's just going to make things worse
and worse and worse... although it's sweet that he cares... argh, too
conflicted! *L* More more more, i can't stand not knowing what's going to
happen! *G*
Rakie

ch. 17
Leave him! LEEEEEEEEAAAAVE HIM!! Argh, the suspense is killing me... i
hope it lasts... *G*

What is up with Jeff?? This is going beyond friendly concern. I really
REALLY hope that's all it is though, otherwise i might have to take my shoe
to him. I don't know if i want Jaylynn to forgive Shane or not (argh, and
after all that stuff i've been saying about him being evil), but i guess
they are quite cute together, and he does seem suitably sorry.... no no no
no no no NO NO NO NO!! Jaylynn needs to dump him because he's evil. Whew,
glad i got my head sorted out there. *G*

More more more more more! Please! *L*
Rakie

Ch. 18
Aww, they're friends again. Bless. I'm glad that Jeff isn't evil anymore,
although i'm beginning to suspect he has an ulterior motive here... maybe
i'm just cynical. *who me?* And that was funny, you - i mean Jaylynn -
dying Jeff's hair! I think that maybe you should keep your private little
fantasies to yourself... *G* Just j/k. That was really cool, although i
dread to think what Shane's going to think if he finds out... 'you have blue
hairdye under your nails, you've been seeing Jeff!!' *G*

Great chapter! More soon please! *L*

Rakie

Jeff...with...blue...hair! Me likes! lol. Part of me wants Jaylynn not to forgive and forget about what Shane M did, but the other parts wants her to. I kind of want her to be with Shane H, but I don't see that happening. *Throws a shoe at Jami* TELL US HOW HER STALKER IS ALREADY! lol. I'm calm now. hehehe..

Colleen

Ch. 19
Oh those naughty, naughty boys. How come Jeff didn't mention anything? This is hmmmm...very INTERESTING. Can I say I want MORE now. More please!! I think Jeff has this secret thing for Jaylynn now. Boy, I'm so jealous of her now, she's got both Shane's and probably Jeff. *pounds her head on the keyboard*
~Nicole~

I can't take this anymore, you guys are making me scream too much... the
people in my office think i'm nuts cause i keep banging my head on the
computer screen and going 'NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!!!'

What in the BLUE HELL??? Shane H and Jeff fighting over Jaylynn??? Why???
WHY???? I figured maybe Shane M would be jealous about the hair dying
session, but what's up with the other Shane? Oh dear, i can't handle
this... if anyone wants me i'll be at home hugging Tasha's Brian
Kendrick-in-a-box (so much better than a security blanket). *G*

More soon please, don't keep us hanging on here! *L*

Rakie

Ugrh! Why the hell are Shane H. and Jeff fighting over Jaylynn? Can't anyone be civil to anyone for more than 5 minutes? Geez........ *Throws a shoe at Jami* More chapters soon.....and one last thing.....no more making fun of me. LOL :o)

Colleen

ch.20

My betting is that it's Jeff doin the huggin. Argh, more cliffhangers! My
poor shattered nerves... *G*

All right, what the heck's going on? Can NO-ONE believe that Jaylynn and
Jeff are just friends?? Okay, so ignore the fact that even i don't believe
it, but never mind... *g* That was an ace chapter, i loved the
confrontation with Shane H... and eek, him getting her name wrong! Is there
ever a good time to do that? *L* They have got to sort this out, because i
still want them to get together. Life's not being fair right now! *sulk*
lol@y... idea for World Peace though - sounds like the sort of thing my
family come out with all the time. *G* My dad once had this fantastic idea
about solving all the problems of the world (and time, space and the
universe apparently) using just a bunch of carrots. I forget how it went
though...

Dammit, now i've lost my train of thought. *L* Great chapter Jami! I want
more! MORE! Don't make me start posting nekkid pictures of my Big Show!
*G*

Rakie

Oooooooooh this is great. But I wanna know who is embracing Jaylynn. Ok, its either gotta be Jeff or Shane O'Mac. Am I right? Hehehehe. This rumours site is interesting as well. Who comes and takes these piccys? I wanna know who Jaylynn's stalker is already. Oh the suspense of it all.
~Nicole~

Ch. 24
Stupid lying Shane!!! The roomkey's in her pocket!!! Lying lying lying Shane!!! BAH!!!! Evilness!!! *pointz and glares*

He's doing it. He's the freakin' psychopath!! Unbalanced indeed!! He erased the heart, got rid of the letter and photo and he had the access to the e-mail, he's psychotic, unbalanced and has something to prove to Shane [and apparently Jeff] when it comes to Katrina. Then he's also a possessive psycho who needs couseling!

Grrrr...and he's a liar! Can't forget that. Most psychopaths are chronic liars! *glares again*

Psychoness!!!!

i can't wait for chapter 25.~Tasha~



Ch. 25

GAHHH!! Ok, unless Shane-O gave JayLynn a scotch on the rocks, why was it emitting warmth? What kinda drink does Unbalanced Boy mix?

And alright, so he got the divorce papers signed...why do i doubt that? Is it possible since they're photocopied that he could've just put his signature over top and not signed the real ones? *hmph* i don't trust that Unbalanced Boy for a second! *hmph* Not anymore at least!

hee hee....Dude i've been gettin' the most kick-ass roles in stories lately. i got to tell off Shane O'Haire, now i'm huggin' walls. It rules to be me! hee hee hee...

Now if only JayLynn and Jeff could have a good conversation, he convinces JayLynn that Unbalanced Boy is...well...Unbalanced and then JayLynn goes and gets with Helms or somebody then...yeah...all would be well! :)

Oh and why wouldn't JayLynn tell Kali the truth? Hmmmmmmm? *gives you 'the' Look* ~tasha~
 

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