This was good Jami! Great Sequel! ~~Colleen (about My Best Friend)

That was an interesting story to say the least. Good work Jami! ~~Colleen (about Your Witness)

Great job on this short fic! I loved it! Very well written! I loved the way you ended it. ~~Krystal (about Your Witness)


I liked the last part between Rock and Lita. This was funny! Can't wait to read the next chapter. ~~Colleen (about Last Step Chapter 10)

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! This was good! ~~Colleen (about Saints and Angels)

Awesome songfic! Great job on it! ~~Krystal (about Saints and Angels)

Loved it! Excellent job! ~~Krystal (about Love At First Sight)

awesome song fic. Great job on it. Very well written. ~~Krystal (about I Turn To You) 

About Last Step:

I loved the step series. I would definitely read more
of your fics. ~Crystal

hey Jami, I LOVED THE ENTIRE STEP SERIES!!!! I WOULD LOVE IT IF U WROTE MORE!!!!!! ~Mila

Perfect ending Jamz!!!!!! ABSOLUTELY *PERFECT*!!!! And Destiny Skye Hardy is *such* a kewl name!! WoO!! OMG....that was just the most *adorable* chapter ever!! Awww...but now i'm sad!!! No more Step Series!!

You'd better believe i'll read another Series by you, and i can bet lile...10 billion to 1, everyone else you send stufff to will agree with me!! Awww...that was an *amazing* storry, to the end of an *amazing* series!! MAN...that was the best! And you're probably not goin' to believe this, but i'm cryin'...i don't really know why...hee hee...it think i just can't believe that's the end of the Step Series...man...but that was seriously, the *best* ending!!!

And lastly....YaY!!!! YOUR JAMI IS HAPPY!!! *does my happy dance* You finally let your character be happy!!!
`Take Care`
-Tasha-


P.S. Even though i'm not a fan of country music, i loved the Shania Twain song at the end! That was completely suited to the chapter!

Aww that was so sweet. Jeff asking Jami to marry him again and having their baby girl. Girl you know I would read anything you wrote you are a good writer. ~Lisa

That was so sweet ( tear..tear).Now I know it's the last of the "Steps" series. I loved the chapters.My absolute favorites were the whole Jeff/Jami deal.So I love for you to continue writing. ~Nicole

Hi Jami

I just wanted to tell you that I loved the step series. I look foward to reading more of your work. ~D

Jami, that was AWESOME!!!! That was a great way to end the story!!! You have to start another series! Personally, I love reading what you write! ~Christie

Hey, That was a brilliant ending and almost completely
unexpected. I would love it if you wrote another
series, you definetly have a talent for writing the
character relationships.

Write again soon. ~Natalie

About Angelic Beginnings Chapters 1 & 2:

OoO!! i love it!!! Very nicely put together. i like how you made this character have a background in wrestling and mentioned the WWE doing reference and source checks. Very nice indeed.

The team of "Sinfully Angelic" is absolutely too cute for words...i know it's probably not supposed to be cute, but it is!! ~lol~ i like the name Angela Jameson...very kewl...though wouldn't she make a better "Angel"? [kidding]

Again, i think it's good how you have your character completely new to the scene...and hasn't met much of anyone, 'cause you're really new...things like that...and that your new partner's really ethusiastic...that's realistic. Most dirt sheets on the WWE say how all teh wrestlers are only "looking out for #1" and don't help each other out and are all backstabbing and all that...[pfft...as if...the business wouldn't be alive today if that were true] and yeah..so i liked how you also made sure the first supporting character helpful!

i still think the two chapters ROCKED, and that the "Angel Series" is gonna kick some major ass!!! *grin*

And who's your boy gonna be? [Just a heads up that if you use Jeff people may think you're following too closely to the "Step Series"...just a suggestion...not to be pushy!!!! if you use Jeff i'm sure you'll be able to come up with enough new storylines to make it completely different and interesting!!]

In any event, i have total faith in you and this new series that'll it'll be absolutely great!!! And an author's as good as their stories!  [and since i'm sayin' taht means you're amazing!! So  ...hee hee hee]
`Take Care`
-Tasha-

Angel Series feedback on Chapter 3

i love the new chapter Jami!! Very realistic. It wasn't like: "This is Trish" and all of a sudden you were best friends, you didn't have JayLynn's fav. Diva there since she wa sout on injury [again...realistic...good...], and people were friendly and nice, but still gave *actual* advice...things that would help her and it was colleague-type advice...YaY!!

As for Chris' advice...it rings true no matter what, and someone would most likely say that, because it's the truest advice to give in that business. How he said it would probably also happen, because really, there's no way to say that nicely...it's like if someone makes a major error, there's no nice way to say: "You screwed up"...you know? i mean you can be tactful but it's still the same message, and to a new person, being completely straight forward is probably the approach most anyone would take.

But i liked Shane's response...again...fairly realistic. If you've been in the game awhile then sayin' "Don't drop the ball" isn't really advice as much as it's areminder that you already know, but to someone new it's like...they're new so they have the ball for hte first time and they'd be nervous as all hell...especially if they didn't have much TV under their belt.'

As i said, i loved the chapter, very kewl. And i'm really likin' the Angela girl. She's so kewl!! She's all like: "Meet this person...alright you said hi? Good...on to the next person..." ~lol~ And really, she was dead on when she said: "Meet the most beautiful men on earth" and excuse me, but i do believe there was a one Matt Hardy who won "Most Beautiful Man of the Month" in October of 2001 on...oh frick what magazine does that poll thingy...? People...? It's in the TTR archives...~lol~

Anyways...yeah..again...love the chapter...i can't wait until chapter four!! and i hope you do send it to the list...you know people on there would love it!!
`Take Care`
-Tasha-

Angel Series feedback on Chapter 4

i loved chapter 4. i loved how Angela's all like: "YeaH!! i love this job" and all nice off-screen then on-screen she's like: "I am *the* bitch...watch your back..." while you'r characters more evil off-screen than on-screen...mind you just about anyone'd be more evil than somenoe who says: "i want to use my God-given talent to compete against competant competitors" [no offence...that was just sickly sweet...man i'd punch someone if they said that to me...i realyl would...~lol~...]
~Tasha~

Feedback on the Strong Enough, Strong enough to be your man and You can't hide beautiful trio of songs fics;

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!

Jami Lynn Dunkin, if you don't send that to the lists *i* will!! Those song fics were *so* amazingly good, and they went together perfectly!!!! They were absolutely awesome!!

i liked how you took Amy's injury and worked it in wit the normal side-effects of being sidelined. [the self-esteem, the gainin' a bit of weight, the envy of her co-owrkers] and then how she might feel like drawing away from Matt and everyone else.

I absolutely loved it! Amazing! Absolutely and completely amazing! And i wasn't kidding about the list thing... <http://graphics.hotmail.com/emwink.gif>
`Take Care`
-Tasha-

Feedback for "The Fool" song fic

Man, i love that song!! As if anyone else knows that song! That was an amazing song fic! i absolutely loved it, and it fit *exactly* into the song, practically word for word...that's totally awesome! WoO!! Go Jami!

`Take Care`
-Tasha-


Feedback for "Am I the only thing you've done wrong" song fic

sorry, i just realized i had read this fic with i believe it was chapter 10 of the Angel Series when it came out, and i just thought i'd send feedback now...better late than never...

I liked this one, especially since i'm a fan of Paul Levesque and Steph, and think they're both pretty kewl. i could see the story you wrote actually happening in real life, and i think that's what made the story seem so good. The reality of it.

Awesome, awesome story...but if Paul Levesque acts like that, then when i get to the WWE with you, we're kickin' his butt! ~lol~
`Take Care`
-Tasha-
 

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