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| Anderson, Sherwood. Winesburg, Ohio. 2nd ed. New York: Viking, 1960. | |||||||||||||||
| So far this study has led me to no shortage of jaw-dropping moments. My jaw in particular tends to come unhinged upon discovering I've re-invented the wheel. In the case of Winesburg, its focal point on George Willard as the lightning rod for the hopes, dreams, and innermost thoughts of his townspeople--well, it got to me. It so happens that the dedication at the beginning of my first novel is to anyone I've ever met who shared something special with me, anyone who suffered loneliness of one kind or another and searched for hope in others like themselves, like me. And that's exactly what Anderson's characters do throughout his novel, struggle to express themselves and pin their hopes on someone they hope will understand. This novel doesn't by any means have a monopoly on "grotesques," or lonely people, but Anderson does seem to understand the real importance of this, and doesn't try to whitewash his characters' needs, or force-fit them into any contrived plot. Originally written in 1919, I can see how this has heavily influenced later writers, particularly Ray Bradbury, who has made no secret of his Martian Chronicles being something of a Winesburg on Mars, though certainly imbued with Bradbury's own style. Carson McCullers' Heart is a Lonely Hunter certainly draws from it, though her style seems drab now after reading Anderson's fireside storytelling. This novel commits, but gets away with, a great many no-no's of my personal school of fiction. Though the narrator has no real identity, he does tell us, as though sitting next to the reader, a great many details about the characters that normally I would insist must be told through action or depicted visually, or spoken in characters' thoughts or dialogue. But Anderson gets away with it because the details are all carefully crafted to give us a clear idea--though sometimes limited to caricature--of the characters as they are in life, with a certain beauty hidden by their daily drudgery. His oral storytelling may seem to jump back and forth in time and give asides haphazardly, but the details are always vital and come at just the right time. Unlike in Gladys Swan's Carnival for the Gods, which I've accused of including too many of its characters' stray (and pointless) thoughts, Anderson has the economy of Mark Twain, seeming to casually offer a story that in actuality is finely crafted. Unlike Twain, however, the narrative voice has fewer obvious idiosyncrasies, other than sounding mature and Midwestern. This novel really makes a case for the limitations of plot in storytelling. There is no plot, only a collection of short stories, or epiphanies, leading to a final one that provides closure. Characters and settings are shared amongst the stories, as well as imagery: |
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| Over and over he turned the matter in his mind. Hours passed and he began to think it must be time for another day to come. At four o'clock he pulled the covers up about his neck and tried to sleep. When he became drowsy and closed his eyes, he raised a hand and with it groped about in the darkness. "I have missed something. I have missed something Kate Swift was trying to tell me," he muttered sleepily. Then he slept and in all Winesburg he was the last soul on that winter night to go to sleep (166). | |||||||||||||||
| This passage best represents the struggle carried on by characters throughout the book, all of whom seem to be restlessly groping in the dark for something, some truth. And those that have obtained a personal truth, either cannot express it or spend their lives running from it. Though I prefer a plot for my own novel--one sprung from the characters and not merely superimposed, or inflicted on them--a plot really is no more than an arrangement for epiphanies. In Winesburg, each chapter involves a character's epiphany, each one unique and leading to a greater, overall understanding--or at least appreciation--of life. The only villain present is a kind of void, a neglect or ignorance of expression. As I believe it is in real life, each of the characters has something valuable to say, but struggles terribly with whether to or how to express themselves. Each person is a poet, or novelist, or artist, if only they can find the courage and aptitude to bridge the gap between themselves and others. Why more novels don't openly admit their motivations is beyond my understanding. Perhaps it's fear. Whatever the case, Anderson apparently felt no shame in delivering this wonderful book. We all must feel terribly lonely at times, more often than is healthy, even (and perhaps moreso) in the case of married couples. Being the social creatures we are, isn't that our universal dilemma? To approach or to push away? So many novels I've read seem to involve this as their underlying problem, only to neglect it or polish it into appearing something different. What I admire most about this novel is its stubborn refusal to put on airs or act indifferent to its characters' real plight. These aren't just grotesques depicted in the novel, these are ordinary people. We all can be reduced to grotesques--caricatures--in the hands of a storyteller. Likewise, loneliness can be transmuted into good vs. evil, or whatever other conflict writers prefer their fiction to involve. Loneliness is complex, and conflicting needs of security vs. growth typically play a role. Anderson, apparently without much reading in the way of psychology, had a very natural grasp of our motivations, our troubles, our conflicts. (Many of his characters have come to associate pain or frustration with things that they should love, such as Louise Bentley learning to dislike being kissed, since it is her husband's way of making her quiet.) There is no easy way in life to find security. To have any kind of happiness we're always having to take some measure of risk, whether that be asking a girl out, attempting to communicate something meaningful, moving to a land of opportunity, and so on. Surrender to a fear of failure is a sure way of bringing on too much loneliness; it's too likely to separate us from those people who would be our best company. This is best summed up in one of the novel's more poetic moments: |
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| In her room in the shabby old hotel the sick wife of the hotel keeper began to weep and, putting her hands to her face, rocked back and forth. The words of her one friend, Doctor Reefy, rang in her ears. "Love is like a wind stirring the grass beneath trees on a black night," he had said. "You must not try to make love definite. It is the divine accident of life. If you try to be definite and sure about it and to live beneath the trees, where soft night winds blow, the long hot day of disappointment comes swiftly and the gritty dust from passing wagons gathers upon lips inflamed and made tender by kisses" (223). | |||||||||||||||
| The majority of Anderson's characters are sensitive, introspective people who have nearly or completely given up. The pain of failure has kept them from taking further chances, and the precious little hope left to them is invested primarily in those younger than themselves. In one case, an unnamed alcoholic takes sympathy on a neglected five-year-old girl, revealing to her something beyond her reckoning: | |||||||||||||||
| The shoulders of the stranger shook violently, and when he tried to roll a cigarette the paper fell from his trembling fingers. He grew angry and scolded. "They think it's easy to be a woman, to be loved, but I know better," he declared. Again he turned to the child. "I understand," he cried. "Perhaps of all men I alone understand." His glance again wandered away to the darkened street. "I know about her, although she has never crossed my path, " he said softly. "I know about her struggles and her defeats. It is because of her defeats that she is to me the lovely one. Out of her defeats has been born a new quality in woman. I have a name for it. I call it Tandy. I made up the name when I was a true dreamer and before my body became vile. It is the quality of being strong to be loved. It is something men need from women and that they do not get" (145). |
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| People need a thick skin to survive their failures, to be able to move on and learn from their mistakes. Most of the novel's characters do not have that extra layer of skin, the courage to go on trying. But they hold out some slip hope, and they try to warn others of the danger. (If ever I find myself with a daughter, I'll try to name her Tandy.) After having read this I would like to round up anyone responsible for teaching English classes in my junior and senior high years, and summarily fire them. I can actually remember a great many books on our reading lists, even the ones I did not read, and nowhere do I remember seeing Winesburg. This is exactly the kind of book I know would have had an effect on me during those years, and I can't believe it isn't taught more. Given its universal appeal, its naturalness to read, its brevity, its Midwestern way of dealing with tough-to-confront issues without resorting to overly explicit language, one would think this would be a natural for required reading, particularly for adolescents. This is easily going on my "worship" shelf, where I put the few books I would not want to live without. |
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