Title: Payback
Author: Secret Art
E-mail: [email protected]
Date: 21st August 2004
Category: Dark Fic – language, violence, torture, aftermath of rape.
Pairings: none
Spoilers: episode addition for Shades of Grey, takes place just after my fic ‘she disobeyed me’.
Summary: Teal’c finds out what Makepeace did to Sam, and decides a little revenge is in order.
Feedback: can only make me better
Disclaimer: Stargate SG-1 and its characters are the property of Stargate (II) Productions, Showtime/Viacom, MGM/UA, Double Secret Productions, and Gekko Productions. This story is for entertainment purposes only and no money exchanged hands. No copyright infringement is intended. The original characters, situations, and story are the property of the author.
Author’s note: This is a sequel to she disobeyed me, which you might want to read first. This fic involves violence, so if it upsets you, you might not want to read this, but then if you read ‘she disobeyed me’ you probably enjoy fic like this so read on.
Teal’c walked down the corridor towards Major Carter’s quarters. He was getting slightly concerned as she had arranged to meet up with him and Daniel Jackson for breakfast but had not shown up. Daniel Jackson was called away to a meeting, so Teal’c decided he would seek out Major Carter himself.
Knocking on her door, he could hear movement from inside
"Who’s there?" she asked through door.
"Major Carter it is I" He replied, concerned about his team mate’s behaviour.
"Teal’c, what do you want?" she asked, still not having opened the door.
"Major Carter, please open the door, I wish to talk with you" he almost pleaded, now very worried about what she was hiding from.
He heard the lock being turned, before Major Carter’s head peeped round the door.
She looked dreadful, her eyes were all red and puffy from crying, and she had a massive bruise on her cheek.
"How did you get that?" Teal’c asked, gently cupping her face to get a closer look at the injury.
She was about to protest that it was an accident, but one look at Teal’c and she realised that he wouldn’t have believed her, and wasn’t going to leave her alone until he found out the truth.
"You might as well come in" she sighed.
Walking through the door, he instinctively looked around, trying to work out what had happened to change Major Carter’s behaviour so drastically. He noted that her desk had been moved, and the room looked almost as if evidence of a struggle had hurriedly been cleared up. Looking at Major Carter he decided that a struggle probably had taken place, if the bruises on her wrists and face, along with her messed up clothes and limp were anything to go by.
"What happened?" he asked, well aware that Major Carter was not the type of person to talk about private things.
"Oh, I was just a bit clumsy" she insisted, but he simply looked straight at her, not moving, barely blinking and she knew that he was not leaving until he got at least a part answer.
"I disobeyed orders, and it was felt that I needed to be taught a lesson," she tried to stay composed and calm, but he could hear her voice breaking, and could see the tears threatening to escape.
He thought how strange it was that she refused to give any clue as to who it was, but then she was probably terrified of what would happen if she did, and they both knew who it was anyway.
"Makepeace!" he growled, and looking in her eyes, he saw acceptance for what he was going to do, they both knew the moment she said it that if he felt he was able to teach Sam a lesson then Teal’c should be able to teach him a lesson.
Turning round he almost sprinted out of the room, slamming the door shut as he went, and she knew that she should take offence, but it was simply his anger, he was trying to be nice by blocking her from the world, at least while she looked like that.
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Sat in his room a few minutes later, he pondered what the best way would be to get his revenge for the hurt that bastard caused Major Carter. He knew that it was a sign of weakness that he felt that angered, and that as first prime he had often used rape to show his superiority, but this was different, this was a place that did not accept rape, and normally it did not accept violence, and normally he was willing to comply with their rules, but this was different. Finally having chosen his method of revenge, he got up, and smiling to himself, headed off to find Makepeace.
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He found Makepeace in the gym, alone, working out with the weights.
He turned around, closing and locking the door behind him. Moving silently over to the security camera he turned it away from where Makepeace was still working out, oblivious to Teal’c.
Teal’c moved over to the equipment, picking out a skipping rope before stealthily slipping behind Makepeace, amazed at the fact that he had not detected his presence.
Waiting until Makepeace put down his weights Teal’c grabbed his arms, tying them to the heaviest weight, allowing him to move Makepeace if he wished, yet too heavy for Makepeace to lift.
Makepeace spun his head around to see Teal’c stood behind him, skipping rope ends in his hand.
"Jaffa" he spat, "I am ordering you to release me."
"You are in no position to be making demands Makepeace. I believe you have done enough damage already with your ‘orders’ and I am here to show you why you should not anger a ‘Jaffa.’ I believe you Tau’ri would call me your ‘conscience’."
"What the the fuck are you on about?"
Teal’c shook his head, rather amused by this Tau’ri’s stupidity. He moved over to the weights, picking them up one at a time until he was satisfied that he had found one of the right weight
He carried the weight over to Makepeace, waiting until the Colonel had stopped trying to wiggle his way out of the ropes before dropping the weight onto his shoulder, using his years of practise to ensure that he caused the maximum of pain with the minimum of damage.
"I always find it peculiar that the Tau’ri use so many different sizes of weight rather than just a few; however this is quite fortunate as it means I can increase or decrease the amount as I chose."
"When I am free I will call the General, tell him what has happened and then we shall see who has the power."
Teal’c moved back over to the weights, this time selecting a heavier one than the one still resting on Makepeace’s shoulder before picking it up and dropping it on his chest, smiling at the sound of a rib cracking.
"Comments like that will only serve to increase your pain." He moved back over to the pile of weights. "And if you do chose to tell people about this then I will have no choice but to tell people the reason why this occurred."
Makepeace opened his mouth, ready to make a come back but closed it again when Teal’c picked up one of the heaviest weights, instead going for a different tactic.
"How exactly are you going to explain my injuries?"
"How are you going to explain Major Carter’s?" He moved over with the weight. "You believed that by hurting Major Carter you would control us, however you are mistaken. If I find that you have injured Major Carter, or Daniel Jackson in any way then I will not be so forgiving." He dropped the weight on Makepeace’s leg, causing the Colonel to cry out as the bone broke.
Moving over to Makepeace’s shoulder Teal’c slowly began to remove the weights, first off the shoulder, then off the chest and finally off the leg before untying his hands.
The second his hands were free Makepeace went for the Jaffa, trying to punch him, only to find his fist caught in the strong hands of his torturer.
Slowly squeezing his hand, Teal’c grinned as the joints slowly gave out, the bones cracking under the pressure.
Releasing Makepeace’s hand, Teal’c strolled out, leaving the colonel nursing his broken bones, lesson learnt.
The End
Sequel: Payback 2