*WARNING* this fic involves rape, so if it will distress you, I suggest you do not read this.
Title: She disobeyed me
Author: Secret Art
E-mail: [email protected]
Date: 8th November 2003
Category: Dark Fic, Rape
Pairings: Sam/Makepeace
Spoilers: episode addition for Shades of Grey
Summary: Makepeace doesn’t like the way Sam’s been acting, so decides to teach her a lesson.
Feedback: can only make me better
Disclaimer: Stargate Sg-1 and its characters are the property of Stargate (II) Productions, Showtime/Viacom, MGM/UA, Double Secret Productions, and Gekko Productions. This story is for entertainment purposes only and no money exchanged hands. No copyright infringement is intended. The original characters, situations, and
story are the property of the author.
Author’s notes: I was thinking about how Makepeace and Sam acted in this episode and it got me thinking, and before I knew what was happening, this fic appeared. Oh and this is my first ever dark fic. It’s a bit longer than I thought it would be, but it gets better as it goes on, and also the ending wasn’t quite how I planned it, but oh well, I can only hope my next attempt is a bit better. I am sorry if this upsets anyone, or is inaccurate, but I am just going on the few things I have read on the subject, so it may not be very accurate.
She disobeyed me
By Secret Art
She disobeyed me, and now she was going to pay.
Makepeace stormed down the corridors of the SGC towards Major Carter’s quarters, informed by Doctor Fraiser that that was where she had gone after their post mission check up.
It had been a routine mission, visit the uninhabited planet where the malp had spotted a temple, check it out and then return. However the mission hadn’t quite gone as smoothly as planned, as he had specifically ordered his team not to enter the temple while he checked out the area. They had, and Major Carter had nearly brought the temple down on to them trying out some old abandoned piece of technology.
He wasn’t just mad at her though, Dr Jackson and the jaffa had also disobeyed his order, but he knew that he had no way to control them on his own. However Major Carter could control them, and he knew that the other two would not have gone into the alien temple unless she had let them.
They thought that he didn’t know about their little arrangement. It was quite annoying actually, but he suspected that that was the idea. Dr Jackson and the jaffa would always look to see if Major Carter agreed with the order before they actually agreed to it. This was the other reason why he was seeking her out, he knew that if he showed her how he reacted to her disobeying orders then maybe she would rub off on the others, and he would finally get the respect he deserved.
Rounding the corner, he could see the light on in her quarters, and checking up and down the corridor to make sure no one was around he knocked on her door.
"One minute" came the response from inside, and this made him angrier.
‘How dare she keep me waiting!’ he thought to himself, feeling himself getting madder and madder as the seconds went by, until by the time she opened the door he was almost murderous in his rage.
He had actually considered murder, off world of course so no one would know what really happened, but then he would have to kill of the other two as well, and he really did not like the idea of taking on the jaffa.
She only partially opened the door, looking at him with a confused, and almost surprised look on her face, as if she was trying to work out what he was doing visiting her quarters at this time of night, after all it was nearly midnight; a time he had picked as he knew that there would not be very many people about.
Barging straight into her quarters he slammed the door shut behind him. By this time she had backed away to the other side of the room, trying unsuccessfully to hide the terror in her eyes.
He slowly turned and locked the door, before moving towards her. Sam tried to move away but he leaped, grabbing her by her hands and slamming her into the wall.
"Trying to go somewhere are we Major?" he growled at her. Pulling her close to him, he kissed her hard on the mouth before slamming her back into the wall.
"Well?" he yelled.
"No sir" came her almost whispered response.
He was almost tempted to stop now, as he knew that she had already learnt her lesson, but she kneed him right between his legs, causing him to loosen his hold, and then tried to get past him.
He grabbed her just before she reached the door, his anger back to full strength and threw her to the floor, her head hitting the floor hard, stunning her for a moment.
"Guess I’m going to have to show you what happens to people who disobey my orders" he snarled.
She slowly tried to get back up, but he climbed on top of her, pinning her legs between his, and grabbing both her hands he held them above her head with one of his hands, whilst his other slowly began its exploration.
He started at her head, stroking her cheek almost lovingly, before trailing his fingers down her neck, and onto her breasts.
He stroked them through the t-shirt, before trailing down to her waist and putting his hand under her top, moving her bra out the way so he could feel her breasts without any clothing in his way.
He started with her left breast, dragging his nails over the sensitive skin, before grabbing the nipple and twisting hard.
Sam let out a scream, and he quickly stuck his hand over her mouth, and moving his mouth to her ear threatened her.
"You scream once more and I will make sure that you never scream ever again, understood?"
He felt her nod under his hand, and slowly moved his hand away from her mouth.
He moved to her other breast and repeated his actions, but this time all he could hear was her unsuccessfully trying to stifle a sob.
"That’s right, you are finally understand how things work, aren’t you?" he smiled, almost laughing when his only response was another unsuccessfully muffled sob.
He slowly moved his hand down her stomach, and started unbuttoning her trousers, looking her in the eyes the whole time, almost daring her to try and stop him.
Sam however could do nothing more then lie there, tears streaming down her face as he finally managed to undo the button and pull down the zip.
Putting his hand inside her knickers he was disappointed not to find her wet, most of the people he ‘taught a lesson’ found that their bodies responded to his actions, even if their minds didn’t want them to.
‘Oh well’ he thought, ‘it will just make it even more painful for her, and all the more enjoyable for me’.
He moved his hand over her curls, and slowly stuck a finger inside, grinning at her pained gasp.
He looked up at her, and spurred on by the terrified look on her face, stuck two more fingers in her, causing her to stifle a cry.
He quickly removed his fingers, and fiddled to unbutton his own trousers.
Finally succeeding in unbuttoned his trousers and pulled them down to his knees, taking his underwear with them, making sure not to move off her legs, as he didn’t want to be kicked again.
Pulling out his penis, he stroked it a few times before looking back at Sam.
"Time to party" he whispered as he slammed into her dry vagina, causing her to cry out.
He slapped her round the face with his free hand.
"Stay quiet!" he growled, as he started moving within her, causing her to stifle a scream every time he pushed forward.
He slammed into her over and over again whilst she looked at the ceiling, tears pouring down her cheeks, wishing that Jack had never left her and the SGC, that she had accepted Janet’s proposal to have a girl’s night in at her house, just wishing that this wasn’t happening.
Slamming into her one last time he came, pouring his hot seed into her, causing her to choke back a cry as he fell on top of her.
After what seemed like hours, but was probably only a few minutes, he moved his chest off her, satisfied that his Major would be loyal from now on.
Climbing off her, he pulled up his underwear and trousers, and walking to the door, he unlocked it before turning to face her, glad to see that she had not moved.
"I take it you won’t be disobeying anymore orders, Major?"
"No sir" she whispered, barely able to be heard over the sobs that still coursed through her body.
His response was to grin before turning and opening the door, walking through it and closing it without a backwards glance.
Slowly moving off the floor, her head still pounding from where she hit it, she could hear him whistling as he strolled down the corridors.
As she slowly moved into the bathroom, her whole body aching, she cursed whoever it was that decided Makepeace would be a good leader; but she also knew that his ‘lesson’ had worked, she wouldn’t be disobeying any more orders any time soon, no sir.
The End
Sequel: Payback