Now this is more like it. Plenty of substance without any long stories to deal with. This is the start of four pages. Many changes in these pages as to the way I drew it and colored it right down to the lettering. Speaking of which, anybody who wants to get the unique styles found in most SF lettering go to Blambot.com for more of these interesting fonts. Look at Gorilla Milkshake for the S'mores Force font.
Poor Hirschel. Chocolate bars don't fare very well in the desert.