I liked this page. Mind you all these first pages took me forever. For some reason I just kept telling myself that I could just make it in the computer. So practically all I had on the original paper was the characters and the van. That steering wheel on panel eight was made in the computer. The city was on another sheet of paper and shrunk. You get the idea, you're smart people. Last page of this story. I know it doesn't explaing everything (or anything), but it is funny. And that's all S'mores Force is supposed to be (although I'd like it to be a multibillion dollar world class phenomenon, but that's just me).