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Broadcast: August 17, 2003

A u t h o r ' s N o t e s    .  .  .
    Here is a little fable about being good, although the characters in this story aren't always that good. Since the story was going to be about a garden in winter, I couldn't help but throw in a little magic.
    I liked the idea of a winter garden but I wasn't all that pleased with the way the story came out. That's the way it goes sometimes. What do you think?
    Read on!

THE WINTER GARDEN

    Long ago there lived an old man and an old woman in a small cottage beside a lonely forest road. During the summer, travelers would often stop by for directions or a drink of cool water from their well. The old woman liked to bake pies for the travelers and the old man sometimes did a little cobbler work if a traveler need his shoes repaired. And so they were able to earn a few gold coins from their trade. They certainly didn't have much but they got by as best they could.
    But in the winter, the old man and the old woman spent their time quietly looking forward to the warmer days. And during this particular winter, the vegetables from their small summer garden were feeble and few and not nearly enough to sustain them till spring. It was a good thing no one traveled the forest road for the old man and the old woman wouldn't have enough food to share with a visitor.
    And then one cold evening they heard a knock on the door. When the old man opened the door, he saw before him a very wealthy gentleman decked out in a warm beautiful coat, fine boots and a cap of thick rabbit fur.
    "You are welcomed to our humble home," the old man said, bowing deeply.
    "Do come in, do come in," the old woman said. "Stand next to the fireplace and warm yourself, sir."
    And so the man did.
    He was rather odd in a way the old woman and the old man couldn't quite place. His beard was frosted with snow and his face was pale white against the dark fur of his coat and cap.
    "Won't you dine with us?" the old woman asked. "We don't have much but you are welcomed to share in our meal."
    As the strange man dipped a crust of bread in the thin soup prepared by the old woman, it was the old man who started thinking of a plan. He couldn't help but notice the bags of gold coins tied securely about the man's waist. And he couldn't help but notice that the man was getting sleepy.
    It wasn't long before they all retired to bed. The old man and the old woman gave up their bed for the guest and still the strange man said nothing. Sleeping on a bench next to the fire, the old man waited until he was sure his guest was fast asleep. Then he spoke softly to the old woman.
    "Did you see those bags of gold coins?" he asked.
    "Are you thinking of taking them?"
    "Don't be silly. He would miss an entire bag. But several coins? From each bag? He would never miss those."
    "Well," the old woman said, "he is rather strange but we have no right to those coins. That would be stealing."
    "Leave it me," the old man said. "We need the money and he has plenty."
    As quiet as a stone in the path, the old man opened each bag and took out several coins. He closed the bags exactly as he had found them and left no trace of this thievery.
    Now, the old woman was troubled. She lay in the dark thinking about what had happened. She knew it wasn't right but there were so many coins, yet, it wasn't their money. It was stealing. She was very troubled.
    In the morning, everyone in the house awoke at the same time. The old woman prepared a simple breakfast for the stranger and when all the food had been consumed, the odd man buttoned up his warm, beautiful coat and opened the door. Outside, the wind was blowing the snow in a thousand different directions and the weather seemed as fierce as any the old man or the old woman had ever seen. They couldn't turn him out into that storm. But if he stayed longer, the man might realize that he was missing some coins.
    Finally the old man could take no more.
    "See here," he said, "the weather is deadly out there. You mustn't leave. It could certainly be your death if you went into that storm."
    The traveler closed the door and sat at the table, placing his bags of gold coins before him. Slowly he opened each bag and dumped out the money. He counted the coins, one by one, while the old man trembled before him, afraid of what the stranger would do when he realized some were missing.
    After the last bag of coins was counted, the traveler looked up at the old man. At long last he spoke.
    "All the coins are here," he said slowly. "I was sure you had taken some."
    "Oh, no," the old man said. "I would never do that."
    "You are not telling me the truth," the stranger said. "You are lying to me."
    By now the old man was very scared. The storm outside the cottage was roaring with new fury and it felt as if the entire house would be blown to pieces.
    "But . . . but  . . . but . . . all your coins are there, sir," the old man said. "Did you not say so yourself?"
    "I do not understand," the stranger said. He was coming even stranger and even more mysterious himself with each passing moment. "But I have been sent here to test you. Some of the travelers who stopped by your cottage have come away with less than that they started with."
    "Is that right?" the old woman asked the old man.
    He looked at her with guilt in his eyes; guilt the stranger did not notice.
    "If I may," the old woman said. "We are just poor people living the best we can in a small cottage at the edge of lonely forest road. We mean no harm. As I'm sure you know, it has been a hard winter and we have very little to share. But we did share with you."
    "That you did," the stranger said. "That you did. And because of that, I have been instructed to give you this."
    The stranger pulled out a small pouch and dropped it on the table.
    "Seeds," he said. "Magic seeds for planting a winter garden. You had every chance to steal from me but yet all my coins are here. This is your reward for being honest."
    By now, the old man was beside himself with fear. The magic seeds for a winter garden was exactly what they needed but what about the coins he took? What about the gold coins that he had slipped from the bags as the stranger slept.
    Just that quickly, the storm stopped and the sun came out. The snow was still deep and cold, but it was passable now and the traveler was immediately up and out the door.
    As soon as he was out of sight, the old woman picked up the magic seeds and dashed outside. She planted them in the frozen snow and moments later, stalks began appearing in the winter garden.
    By now, the old man was just catching up to her.
    "I don't understand," he said. "I took the gold coins but yet they were there in the morning."
    His wife smiled at him as she stood in front of their winter garden.
    "After you were asleep," she said, "I returned the coins to the bags. I knew it was wrong and this amazing garden proves it. We shall set aside some of the harvest for seeds and never again want for food during the winter."
    And there was plenty of food at the small cottage, even during the coldest months of the year. And the old man never again took anything that wasn't his.
 

The End

S e c on d s   T h o u g h t s . . .
    Were the old man and the old woman being honest? Hm, I'd say not. This story is a little unusual because their dishonesty is rewarded in the end.
    Has that ever happened to you? What kind of story would you write about a dishonest act that helps you? Well, there are many stories in this world that hinge on a dishonest act, I'm sorry to say. I hope we all can learn something about honesty every day. I know I certainly try to learn.

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