A Sneak Peek into that Religiously Controversial story that shook the Christians at Brookside High. All insiders are excerpts (or tiny pieces) of the story brought together to enable the reader to preview what the whole story has in store as far as content goes.
Rated R for sex and language.
Ratings: ****1/2
Co-written by: Tiana L.
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First, a quick summary:
High Intensity is about an outsider from an unknown planet called Zargon, who is sent by the King to destroy the earth. Quigox has little time to complete his mission but is distracted when he meets a human named Elizabeth. Because he failed, Archinov, King Ikashem's nephew, is sent as a replacement. He has exactly three days to finish what was started, and if he fails, the Zargon community must wait another thirty years to carry out the "secret plans" hidden behind the royal walls on the high mountain. Throughout the story, Hemin-ex, Quigox's sister, disobeys orders by stopping Archinov and helping her brother. A gorgeous temptress, she possesses a beauty unlike any other. As for Elizabeth -- she has a secret as well, but the plot doesn't thicken until this prequel ends! This incredible trilogy is packed with adventure, suspense, drama, love, and sexual drives that will cause the normal human being to go wild!
And now, the insider...
...Elizabeth hastily locked lips with Quigox again. In a passionate embrace, she began to undress Quigox, starting with his shirt. Then, she unbuttoned her blouse and threw it the same direction she tossed his. Nearly knocking down her bedside lamp, they ended up on her bed. Her bra was off now and chest bared. Quigox's hands began to explore her soft body, embarking from the neck and stroking her slowly down her chest to her tiny stomach. Elizabeth guided his hands to her firm breasts. "They won't bite," she whispered. He squeezed them at first. Clearly, he didn't know what they were doing. Moving at a very slow but sensual pace, Elizabeth unzipped her pants as Quigox slid them off of her long, bronzed legs. Sitting up, Elizabeth caressed his chest, which showed a slight change in color, yet she hadn't noticed. She ran her small fingers down his chest and stopped at the button of his old jeans. Removing his red boxers that was underneath, Elizabeth caught a glimpse of his large erect member, which was now adamant. Pulling him closer on top of her, Quigox kneeled with his legs on either side of her petite body. Bringing her face up to his, she whispered softly into his ear, "I want you here and now." He pressed closer, his chest against her breasts. A loud cry was released from the both of them as he began to penetrate. Somehow, there was a bond between them; an intensity that neither of them had felt before. Thus, they had found it as complete strangers...
...Three weeks had passed on and the members of the Zargon council were dismayed by Quigox's actions. He had three days to compose his mission. Ikashem was completely distraught. He had sent Archinov Xylemphloe in replacement for Quigox. "If he shan't carry out his task at hand, we cannot expand our alliance," Ikashem informed the frightened Archinov. "If he does not do this, he shall go down with the earth when it is destroyed," Archinov told. But the King of the Zargonians refused to listen. "Go and let them go in peace. " He laughed that same old evil laugh...
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...In a dark trench coat and dark sun glasses, Archinov walked gallantly on the New York sidewalks. From a distance, he noticed Quigox and Elizabeth, but before he could confront them, a woman in a red slinky, clingy dress with long dark hair, pale skin and one long, sharp earing in her right ear, walked towards him with an appealing look on her face. Brushing her hand against his, she passed him. Turning around, Archinov gazed into her eyes. "Follow," she whispered in a reverie voice. Her eyes glowed a passionate red, and she walked away, leaving him spellbound. Lifting his sun glasses, his eyes followed the flow of her hair as it bounced on her back when she turned the corner. With eyes glowing red like hers, Archinov sprinted around the corner and followed her into an alley...
...Leaning against a wall, the strange woman looked at him again. Then, her eyes flamed a hot red. Mindfully attracting him towards her, she pointed for his move to come closer. He swaggered slowly toward the beautiful temptress. He had no idea what was coming over him. He could no longer think or speak; all he could do was feel and touch. Placing his hands around her waist so firm and curvy, he slowly moved closer. Then, with a heavy breath, he kissed her. Over-powered by lust, he lifted her leg above his. Pushing him away, the romanesque paramour slapped his face and gave him a look of disgust. As she began to walk away, she laughed sinisterly as if her cruelty towards him was not enough...
Did that make your pulse race?
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