DIGGING DEEP:
MRS. COY-GONFA'S
TIPS FOR WRITING THE RESEARCH PAPER

JUST THE FACTS

A research paper is an extensive, formal composition which gives information gathered from a variety of outside sources. Its preparation is extensive and requires several weeks of work and planning in order to dig for information, examine the facts, limit the topic, compile and organize the information, before typing the paper, and citing all source material, in order to prove the paper's thesis. Its ultimate purpose is to inform. It is a learning experience for the writer as well as the reader, because in its preparation the researcher will become the expert.

The Seven Steps in Writing a Research Paper
  1. Select and limit the topic
  2. Prepare a working bibliography on 3x5 source cards
  3. Prepare a preliminary outline
  4. Read and take notes on 4x6 cards
  5. Assemble note cards and write the final outline
  6. Write or type the first draft
  7. Edit, revise and type the final draft with parenthetical citations and a works cited page

1. Select and Limit the Topic

Since you will be spending a lot of time on this product, you owe it to yourself to (within the confines of the assignment) choose a topic of interest to you, one that will also be of interest to your reader. Don't sabotage yourself by choosing a topic that is boring to you. It will make it difficult for you to commit to the topic and since boredom is contagious, you may bore your reader (a cardinal sin) as well.

The subject must lend itself to research. This is very important. A research paper topic must be one on which there is considerable information readily available in print and non-print sources. Therefore, your autobiography would not be a suitable subject for research because you could not look up material on the subject. Even a famous person's biography is unacceptable because his/her complete life has likely already been published in one book. You would then rely too heavily on one source, which is not the "name of the game", because a research paper involves several sources. Ask yourself, are there a variety of sources on this topic and is the information readily available. Often if the topic is too recent or current, it will be hard to find information.

Then make sure your topic is not too broad or too big to be adequately covered in the required pages of the paper. It is better to dig deep than to go broad and create a body of research that is superficial in scope.

That said, these very important questions arise: what should you write about and how do you limit your topic???
*First, use resource materials to find a general subject. (such as themes in Alice Walker's novels )
*Next, limit the general subject to a suitable topic and size. (for example Alice Walker's novels The Color Purple and Possessing the Secret of Joy both deal thematically with the abuse of women)
*Then, consider your purpose (to inform), your audience (your teacher) and tone (or attitude towards the topic).
*After all of this thinking, think some more. Make a list of three or four research questions about the topic. Examples include: How can you define the topic? What groups make up the topic? What are the topic's parts and how do they fit together?
*After lengthy but necessary onsideration Come up with a thesis or purpose statement. This of course is key. It is after all the governing principle for the whole paper. If you do not nail it, your paper will suffer horribly (and so will your grade). This paper is more than just a report of facts. It requires an understanding and interpretation of those facts which you reveal in order to prove your thesis. You might end the process with a thesis like this one: Alice Walker reveals in her novels The Color Purple and Possessing the Secret of Joy that the physical, psychological and sexual abuse of women may emotionally cripple the victims.


2. Prepare a Working Bibliography on 3x5 Source Cards

With limited topic in mind and a pack of 3X5 index cards in hand, it is now time to search the field for available information on your topic. At the library, you might search the card catalog, the Readers' Guide to Periodical Literature or Info Trac, the internet, reference books and video tapes. There is a lot of information out there. However, everything you find may not be reliable. It is necessary to evaluate your sources. Make sure you can trust the authors. Are they or are they not respected, experts on the topic? Popular magazines for example, may not be as reliable as U.S. News and World Report or the Washington Post. Further more, any one can have a web page on the internet, even me. Ask yourself is the information RELEVANT, does it relate directly to the topic? Is the source RELIABLE, can I trust the author to be trustworthy, accurate and objective? Is the information RECENT? For example, scientific developments may have changed what was once considered to be true. Is the information REPRESENTATIVE? If there is controversy regarding your thesis, you need to find sources with opinions as well as information on both sides of the question, so that you can fairly and ethically report both.
Now that you have made your evaluations, it is time to make bibliography cards for each source of information that you THINK you may find useful. Doing so now will save you time later. It will help you when putting it all together and citing your sources, to know where each piece of information that you actually used came from. Each card should be filled out completely with all of the information that you will later include on your works cited page. Start by numbering each source card in the upper right hand corner. Then in the body of the card include the following:
*Book: author, title of book, volume number if applicable, city of publication, publisher, copyright date.
*Anthology or compilation: all of the above plus the editor, abbreviated ed. and the article title.
*Magazine: except for the editor, all of the above plus volume number, and page numbers
*Newspaper: all of the above plus section and or edition (if the paper for example is published both morning and evening)
*Web page: author if given, title of home page and/or linked page, date created plus date accessed by you, and the full http address.
*Television show: name of program, name of episode, call letters of the television station, and exact date of broadcast.
*Interview: Name of person interviewed, type of interview (personal, telephone, internet chat) and date of interview.
 
3. Prepare a Preliminary Outline

The preliminary outline is not an outline of your final paper. It is instead a guide for your use in reading and note taking. Obviously you can not take notes on everything. What would result is a paper too big or too broad. The preliminary outline helps to focus your reading. It represents the topics and natural divisions you THINK you will cover in your paper. You may later find that some topics need to be dropped all together and others added, that something you believed to be true, you can't prove. Therefore look on the preliminary outline as a tool that will guide your research and keep your note taking focused. It should be simple in form and look something like this:

Topic: Alice Walker and The Abuse of Women

Thesis: In The Color Purple and Possessing the Secret of Joy, Alice Walker reveals that the physical, psychological and sexual abuse of women often cripples the victim emotionally.

I. Physical abuse
...A. Color Purple
...B. Possessing the Secret of Joy

II. Psychological abuse
....A. Color Purple
....B. Possessing the Secret of Joy

III. Sexual abuse
.....A. Color Purple
.....B. Possessing the Secret of Joy


4. Read and Take Notes

With a package of 4x6 inch index cards, your 3x5 working bibliography cards, and your preliminary outline, you are now ready to take on the major job of reading and taking notes. Taking notes on cards is a great organizational tool. If you do it properly the actual writing of the paper will be much, much easier. I promise.
The notes you take should fall under one or another of the topics in your preliminary outline. At the top of each note card write the outline topic with which the notes on that card deal. This topic is called a "slug". Paraphrase, summarize and/or quote necessary information. Jot down the page number(s)where you got the information; you will need it later when you make the necessary citations in your final draft. When you start taking notes on another topic or slug, it is time to change cards, no matter how little you have written on the first card. At the top right corner of the note card, write the number of the source as you have indicated it on the working bibliography card. This will be very important when you cite your sources later because you will know exactly where you got the information that you have noted on the card.
USE SEPARATE CARDS EACH TIME YOU CHANGE TO A DIFFERENT SOURCE AND FOR EACH TOPIC AS INDICATED BY ITS SLUG.
There should never be more than one topic per source or more than one source for the topic on that card. Yes, you will waste space on a few cards, but it will make the task easier in the long run and remember you're worth it. Eventually, you will have a large stack of note cards having the different slugs from your outline and the source numbers from your bibliography cards


5. Assemble Note Cards and Write Final Outline

You now have a large stack of 4x6 note cards each labeled with a slug from the divisions and subdivisions of your outline, each numbered according to the source cards of your working bibliography. It is now time to put it all together. This part is easy. Arrange cards in stacks according to slug lines. All with the same slug go into the same pile regardless of source number. Put a rubber band around each pile. Now put the piles of cards in the order of your outline. Look at your outline now. Are there areas of information that you have added or eliminated due to a lack of information. Make the changes to your outline to reflect the direction your paper seems to be going now. You are making the rough draft of your final outline which you will type and include in the final paper.


6. Write or Type Your First Draft

With your outline as a guide and your notes arranged in the outline's order, you are finally ready to write. As you incorporate in your paper the ideas on your note cards, be very careful to indicate the source of quotations, paraphrasing or even summarizations in your own words. Use parenthetical citations to credit your sources when ever you use them. YOU MUST GIVE CREDIT TO THE SOURCE OF EVERY IDEA THAT YOU WRITE ABOUT THAT IS NOT YOUR OWN. To do otherwise is PLAGERISM, which is a very serious offence punishable by AUTOMATIC FAILURE. The only exception to this rule is when you are discussing points of general or common knowledge. For instance, it is not necessary, (even if you find the information in a book) to cite the source that said that the Earth is round.


7. Edit and Revise the Final Draft

Read over what you've written, but don't fall in love; it is only a draft and not ready for publication until you have typed, pruned, moved, added, cut and pasted those things that will make your paper a work of art. Prune those items that stray from your thesis. Move those items that may not be in the most appropriate section and which therefore cause the paper to lack coherence. Add details and facts that make your statement stronger. Use spell and grammar checker. Get another person to read your paper and listen to his/her suggestions. And then, make sure your research paper has the following:

  • an interesting opening that captures your reader's attention
  • a thesis statement that presents the focus of the paper and what your evidence will support
  • a series of body paragraphs that develop and support your thesis, cited approriately parenthetically
  • a clear and logical order for your ideas and information in order to maintain coherence
  • a conclusion that restates your main points and ends the paper
  • a works cited page that alphabetically lists all sources used in your paper

APPEARANCE COUNTS:
*Include a title page
*A final outline with page numbers to serve as a table of contents
*An introduction page with attention grabber, background information and a thesis
*7-8 body pages with MLA style parenthetical citations
*A conclusion page
*A works cited page
*One inch margins, Typed in Times New Roman font size 12, double spaced
*A cover.

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Guide to Grammar and Writing
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