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| The timing is erratic, and the rhyming is none to good.
The handwriting is shoddy, and the phrasing�s a little odd. The spelling is just bad, the grammar�s really bad too. There is no structure, there is no plan. They don�t know what to do. At one stage it�s a simile, a metaphor another. They keep changing back and forth, from one to the other. There�s no alliteration, no use of links or ties. It�s a bad concept, and a new subject. It could even all be lies. ���������������������������������� �������������������������������� It�s not even original, there�s some Shakespeare in there. Something from Macbeth, about life and death. Well, he probably wouldn�t care. |
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