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Life Is An Elaborate Game Of Chess
The timing is erratic, and the rhyming is none to good.
The handwriting is shoddy, and the phrasing�s a little odd.
The spelling is just bad, the grammar�s really bad too.
There is no structure, there is no plan.
They don�t know what to do.

At one stage it�s a simile, a metaphor another.
They keep changing back and forth, from one to the other.
There�s no alliteration, no use of links or ties.
It�s a bad concept, and a new subject.
It could even all be lies.

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It�s not even original, there�s some Shakespeare in there.
Something from Macbeth, about life and death.
Well, he probably wouldn�t care.
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