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Honestly, no one knows. What happened to the file, the copied chat, I mean. I swear we played it all out, and obviously I tried to save it, but it ended up cutting off *right* when we started rping. This loss was discovered...when we started up the next chapter. We said, so, what happened last time? And then said, hey, where did it go? Should we do it again? All I can remember is that it was awfully fun and a good detailed section, with another skillfull guest-play by Con. But, alas, we decided to leave it be, and continue on without it.
As for what happened in the chapter, it went something like this: Con and Ryan park in front of a bar, after moving into the ship, deciding that to celebrate, they will attempt to find someone to buy them drinks. They go in and are luckily waved over to a corner table by a man who apparently is willing to do just that. Drunkenness ensues. The trio have a great time, chattin' and laughin' and drinkin'. Things are pretty funny. Their host drunkenly says that it's nice to see such brave boys today, and that even though he's married now, even he was known to "experiment in college". He proceeds to remark that our boys make a good couple, Con falls over laughing, Ryan angrily shoots the man in defense of his straight-ness, and then falls back laughing from the recoil. Con pulls himself back together, figures out the whole mess, and drags an equally drunk Ryan out of the bar and into the ship. I believe there may had been a "I'm not leaving you behind" scene written in there, but I think officially that's been scrapped and happens in the Chapter Two as you can see it on the site.
So just for chronology/history or whatever, that's the way that Ryan killed Ardissoni. Just neither of them really remember it. Although I think Ryan secretly remembers the power of the moment, hence the revelation in Chapter Three.
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