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| One day it all began... | ||||||||||||||
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| ...on the Earth of a distant future: so worn out and crowded that mankind finally picked itself up and moved away. It is on this old planet that two friends start their journey. | ||||||||||||||
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| We started this story with the characters, Con and Ryan, in a "mini rpg". Y'all know what an RPG is, a role playing game. Their originial purpose was to be used in any major RPGs we ever joined later, but then we got caught up in their backstory and never did anything else with 'em. This was a version over a messenger, and the following links show the text pretty much how it went as we wrote it. Well, the versions on the left are the straight dialogue, and the ones on the right have some of our chat comments left in, as a sort of commentary. Warning, they are awfully long, having a lot of random side tracks about nothing. | ||||||||||||||
| Chapter One Con and Ryan banter, and decide to buy a space ship. Drunkeness ensues. |
Commentary One Remnants of the Lost Chapter(Ch.2) *notes on this Commentary Three Commentary Four |
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| Chapter Two Faced with a suddenly uncertain future, our boys flee to Pluto, where things get out of their control. Con learns something disturbing about Ryan.. |
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| Chapter Three The future still looks grim. Issues are faced but are they resolved? |
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