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by Mako
NC-17
http://www.geocities.com/jaya1715/makostaminachallange1.html
and part two:
http://www.geocities.com/jaya1715/makostaminachallange2.html
SYNOPSIS:
| Another lemon by the shark freak. I've always wondered which one of the boys could go the distance. This fic is my take on who's the master of the bedroom among the boys. |
MISH:
| Ohmigod, ohmigod, ohmigod... *hyperventilating* Eep! Poor Zippy ran out of ink! What�d you do, turn your spell check off? |
MAKO:
| I've got one word for you... VICADEN! If a certain grammar freak can recall, I'd gone skiing and blew out my knee. HMMM? Ring any bells? |
MISH:
| Only the bells that chimed at poor Zippy's funeral. |
MAKO:
| Ah, how soon they forget! Anyway, you can thank vicaden for inspiring the fic in the first place. As for Zippy, weellll, he and I had a little tiff about monopolizing "someone's" time. Zippy Jr., on the other hand, is nice to me. |
MISH:
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Wait till Zippy Jr. gets a hold of your latest fics.
Despite Mako�s claim that this fic is a PWP, there is a reason for the madness that ensues.
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MISH:
| Ah, the motivation behind many a shag... competition! Anyway, this sets up the plot of the story: Rowen and Kento attempt to see who would tire first, Sage or "Typhoon Sai." This story, being the stamina challenge that it is, leads its readers into one of the juiciest citrus fics I�ve ever read. |
MAKO:
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I wrote it for the sex! End of story! I wanted to see a real good all around shag fest! Is that so wrong?
excerpt: A scream of release from upstairs cut him off. He turned to look from wence it came and then turned his gaze back to the couch as Kento casually asked Rowen what number that was. "Hell if I know. I lost count hours ago." "HOURS! H-H-How long have they been up there?" Ryo couldn't beleive what he was hearing. "Since about noon." Rowen shrugged. Ryo glanced at his watch, >7:23pm he shook his head in amazement. |
MAKO:
| *dopey grin directed towards the shower* |
MISH:
| The pacing throughout both parts of the story is much better than it is in "The Goddess;" but, of course, that could have been the result of my having to read orgy scenes slower than others. Otherwise, I lose track of who�s doing what to whom. |
MAKO:
| Of course the pacing is smoother, all anybody really does in the fic is make out! |
MISH:
| That's an understatement. |
MISH:
| I'll give this fic a 7. The plot was original, to say the least, but the spelling and grammar really did get to me. Poor Zippy. Rest in peace, my friend. |
MAKO:
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I also give it a 7. Mainly because of the butchering it got before it was ever sent. (I actually cut a sex scene out!) But I have to admit, I can't think of anything more lemony.
Fic reviewed on April 4, 2000 |