| Unit 2: Expansion through
Modification: Noun: Post-noun Modifier: Adjective Clauses
Objective: Identify the use of relative pronouns in adjective
clauses
Directions: Underline the relative pronoun in the following sentences.
1. Everyone whose age is eighteen or over should plan for retirement.
2. Most people will retire at age 62, the time when Social Security and
pensions kick in.
3. Most people who are not formally employed will have another thirty
years or more.
4. Many believe Congress who says pensions and Social Security benefits
will be adequate and go on forever.
5. Many do not make any effort to create a personal nest egg that will
add to any government or institutional benefits.
6. People whose beliefs include such ideas may have to work beyond age
62 because they don’t receive enough money from pensions and Social
Security.
7. The reality of inflation, which has averaged 5 percent over the last
sixty years, must be taken into account when planning for retirement.
8. The value of each dollar decreases an average of 5 percent a year,
which can hurt the balance sheet.
9. January’s dollar is worth only 95 cents in December, which means
it is worth only 50 cents in seven to ten years.
10. The personal nest egg that is created over many years of working will
outpace inflation and provide additional comforts during retirement.
Objective: Practice producing complex sentences using adjective
clauses
Directions: Read both sentences. Rewrite the sentences by embedding the
second sentence into the first, revising the second sentence as necessary.
1. Venice is located on the eastern coast of Italy.
It is located on the Adriatic Sea.
2. Venice is built on a series of islands.
Venice has many bridges.
3. Gondolas, water taxis, and water buses travel along the Grand Canal.
The Grand Canal is the main thoroughfare through the city.
4. Venice has no cars.
Venice is a city of roads made of water.
5. One of the main sites for tourists is along the Grand Canal.
This site is St. Mark’s Square.
6. St. Mark’s Square has raised wooden walkways in winter.
The paving stones are under two to three feet of water.
7. The city of Venice has been sinking about one inch every fifty years.
Many basements built in the fifteenth century are now filled with water.
8. Venice is a fascinating city to explore.
It must be explored on foot or by boat.
Objective: Use the proper relative pronoun to create an adjective clause
Directions: In the space provided, write the appropriate relative pronoun
to create an adjective clause.
1. A resume presents
information about your experience and skills _________ the employer needs
to decide if you are the right person for the job.
2. A resume __________ is sloppy or grammatically incorrect presents a
bad image.
3. You should start with your employment experience _________ is the first
thing the employer looks at.
4. Inventory all skills and abilities ________ you have acquired from
all your employment.
5. List your accomplishments during employment _________ are good selling
points as well.
6. The employer __________ has many resumes to sift through is looking
for any reason to throw away your resume.
7. Applicants _________ whose resumes or cover letters have spelling or
grammatical errors stand little chance of passing that initial screening
phase.
8. The applicant ________ has created a resume that is clear and concise
in content, correct and neat in appearance, will progress through the
hiring process more successfully.
9. The applicant _______ the employer chooses will have created a great
image on paper.
10. The applicant ________ who is hired for the position must continue
to present a good image to the existing employees _________ opinions might
force an early firing if the image doesn’t match the actual person
presented on paper or in the interview.
Objective: Use the
knowledge of adjective clauses to edit a grammatically incorrect paragraph
Directions: Read through
the following paragraph to see where you can revise to incorporate adjective
clauses into the paragraph. Some sentences may need punctuation. Rewrite
the paragraph on another piece of paper.
A functional resume
is one type of resume it focuses on accomplishments and skills. It doesn’t
matter when they were done. First, present the career objective it states
the position you are seeking. The functional resume lists the accomplishments
section this section has several subheadings these subheadings state your
categories of accomplishment and skill. These categories might include
Customer Service these categories might include Computer Skills these
categories might include Management and Supervisory these categories might
include Written Communication Skills. Under each category are listed specific
accomplishments these accomplishments should be bulleted. The applicant’s
resume lists many accomplishments in the appropriate categories for the
position this ensures a good chance of getting an interview, at the very
least.
Source: Pack and Henrickson.
1980. Sentence Construction Book 1. Massachusetts: Newbury House Publishers.
Unit 2: Expansion through Modification: Noun: Reduction of Adjective Clauses
Objective: Reduce different
kinds of adjective clauses into adjective phrases
Directions: Revise
the following sentences by reducing the adjective clauses to verbal phrases,
prepositional phrases, adjective phrases or noun phrases.
1. San Antonio, Texas,
which is the tenth largest cit in the United States, lies halfway between
the east and west coasts.
2. Covering food with
a salt solution, which was known in England as “corn, is one of
the oldest methods of preserving meat and fish.
3. The museum on our
campus recently acquired a painting by Cuno Amiet, who is one of Switzerland’s
most famous artists.
4. Some people believe
that the Loch Ness monster, who is known as Nessie, may have some relatives
who live in the lakes and coastal waters of British Columbia.
5. The International
Date Line, which is an imaginary line at 180 longitude, was fixed at the
location on earth that is exactly Greenwich, England.
6. People who are interested
in becoming astronauts should study science or engineering when they are
in college.
7. According to researchers
who work at the Boston University School of Medicine, men who are bald
have an increased risk of heart attack.
8. The statistics that
were reported on baldness do not apply to men who have receding hairlines.
9. People who are worried
about preservatives should not be concerned about the preservatives that
are added to bread to keep it fresher.
10. Children who are
left-handed have more accidents than those who are right-handed, according
to a group of pediatricians who conducted a study at the Arkansas Children’s
Hospital.
Source: Kolln, Martha
and Funk, Robert. 1998. Exercises for Understanding English Grammar. Massachusetts:
Allyn & Bacon.
Unit 2: Expansion through Modification: Noun: Restrictive versus Nonrestrictive
Clauses
Objective: Recognize
restrictive and nonrestrictive clauses
Directions: Identify the underlined clause as R (Restrictive) or NR (Nonrestrictive).
Insert commas where necessary.
1. Susan B. Anthony
who was born in N.Y. is famous for her work in getting women the right
to vote.
2. She was a schoolteacher who supported a woman’s right to vote.
3. Elizabeth Cady Stanton was the other founder of the National Woman
Suffrage Association which was instrumental in changing the laws about
women’s suffrage.
4. Elizabeth Blackwell was the first woman who graduated from a medical
school in the United States.
5. She was not accepted by her teachers and later she was rebuffed by
her friends who all ostracized her.
6. Eventually, she finished her coursework; she was the student who got
the highest grades in her class.
7. She opened a hospital in New York. The hospital which was run by women
later expanded to become a medical school.
8. When Shannon Faulkner applied in 1993 for acceptance to The Citadel
which is a state-supported military school in Charleston, South Carolina
she did not indicate that she was female.
9. The school which was all-male until 1995 did not ask if an applicant
was male or female at the time because only men were allowed in the school.
10. When the school realized she was female, it withdrew its offer and
Faulkner sued. She engaged in a legal battle that lasted several years
but she finally won in 1995. The Citadel is no longer an all-male school.
Objective: Recognize
the difference in the pronunciation pattern of the restrictive and that
of the nonrestrictive clauses
Directions: Listen
to the instructor and note the different pronunciation in each of the
following pair of sentences. Write your own conclusion of the difference.
Then answer the comprehension questions that follow.
1. a. My friends, who are from Canada, will be at the party.
b. My friends who are from Canada will be at the party.
In which sentence are all his friends from Canada?
2. a. The students, who were attentive in class, passed the test.
b. The students who were attentive in class passed the test.
Which sentence states that only some of the students were attentive?
3. a. The tennis players, who were women, won the tournament.
b. The tennis players who were women won the tournament.
Which sentence states that all of the players were women?
4. a. My boyfriend, who is from France, is sitting over there.
b. My boyfriend who is from France is sitting over there.
Which sentence implies that she has more than one boyfriend?
Source: Steer, M. Jocelyn
and Carlisi, A. Karen. 1998. The Advanced Grammar Book. Heinle & Heinle
Publishers.
Unit 2: Expansion through Modification: Noun: Review Exercise: Adjective
Clauses
Objective: Recognize
and correct errors in adjective clauses use
Directions: Correct
an error in each of the following sentences which use adjective clauses
as their modifier.
1. You wouldn’t
believe the test that we had it in our structure class last week!
2. John went to see a friend that his father is the president of his college.
3. My husband adores lumpia that is an Indonesian-style egg roll.
4. There is an old bridge crosses the river in my town.
5. The class schedule that I got it yesterday has many errors on it, which
I am going to complain to the administration.
6. My economics professor will let me take my final exam after vacation
for that I am very grateful.
7. In my house I have all kinds of paintings, most of them are from the
twentieth century.
8. This is the kind of plant that you usually have to fertilize it regularly.
9. I used to have this doctor that I’d never go back to her.
10. 96.5 F.M. is one radio station that I listen a lot.
11. I love Georgia O’Keeffe’s paintings that are all on exhibit
in Los Angeles now.
12. She left her textbook on the table in the kitchen that she needs for
class tomorrow.
13. I had an interesting talk with two students, both of them are from
Turkey.
14. For my birthday I got a beautiful piece of crystal, which I love crystal.
15. Montpelier that is the capital city of Vermont has six months of winter.
16. I would never marry a man that his religion is different from mine.
17. The movie that Loretta and Jack went yesterday was Rain Man, which
they loved.
18. The IPPONW, which was founded in 1980 by two Soviet and two United
States citizen.
19. The objective is to consolidate medical opinion against the danger
of nuclear arms which have bad effects on people whose mental and physical
are destroyed.
Source: Steer,
M. Jocelyn and Carlisi, A. Karen. 1998. The Advanced Grammar Book. Heinle
& Heinle Publishers.
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