| The following are papers written by students in my classes. The comments in red are meant to show you the positive and negative qualities that each essay exhibits. Use these examples to stylize your own papers. Remember each genre of writing has different expectations, so be sure to note the type of essay I am commenting on. |
| 10th Grade |
| 11th Grade |
| Christina Titford Lit Analysis |
| Chris Alberg Lit Analysis |
| Chris Feehan Lit Analysis |
| Shannon Lit Analysis |
| Jay Chaudhari Lit Analysis |