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"Almost" is one of the most incredibly real poetic works I've ever read. God has given you an' awesome gift to spit Righteous Truth with a subtle ironic twist that�s powerful. Stanley J. Dyl- Host of the Hip-Hop �This is powerful!� Cheryl Harris- Provident Music Group You conveyed visions foreign to me in such a way that I understood them. Good job, Cyn Our world is a pockmarked beauty. You have joined some of the dots... Hasta, K I love it, the articulate flow that rolls of the tongue as though readers already know what comes next, yet not tiresome nor predicted in any way. Unique poetry Gem You have an eloquent way of delivering your message-abckid This is very rich poetry You have an indirect approach that is very subtle, yet powerful You have style my friend...Outstanding stuff-Myx You are much to wise beyond your years. Racing chick Wow, this is great. The subject is so real. I love your style, and the titles that you pick. AbstuseIllusions Wow, this is really unexpected, I definitely prefer your poetry- Learah The phrase "sleeping on borrowed time" is awesome. This poem is excellent. It really stirred me- Seiraryu The marking of time is a universal endeavor that we all entertain while we wait the coming of bigger and much more brilliant lights. This was very well put and I commend you. GOBALATA This was very moving to me. The "tick-tock of eternity" is a scary thing to me. Unfathomable. It's like you know that He will come for you, so you can fall, exhausted, into that sleep. I like reading poems that refer to God, because to me, He is the ultimate muse for everyone. He is the final resting place for us all. Not everyone believes, but that's okay. It's my truth, and it seems to be yours, too-wizard off odd Well, needless to say, I am writing this through tears. That was sooo beautiful. I am looking forward to reading more of your poems. GREAT JOB!!-Steptoe You brought tears to my eyes. I absolutely love. This is a beautiful tribute, a beautiful sentiment, and a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Cyn I love the simplicity of your poetry! It's so refreshing! -Casper This is the most perfect tribute to a mother I have ever read. -Learah Your writing is so refreshing the wording makes for such an endearing piece. Sweet Adeline Sentences of your poem have got nice melody, rhymes are light, not too aggressive, and you use fine metaphors as well. Technically - it's beyond reproach. The content-related side - you took an idea and developed it very well, consequently to the end. I also find it as a kind of poetical essay with personal conclusions in the end. Very good piece - shows professionalism -Nightraven This piece was compelling and it really kept my attention. It was also disturbing in a sense. But u expressed the story so vividly and with so much empathy. You are truly a natural writer! Krypton3 Very moving and honest, powerful the descriptions were done well and the feelings were well taken into consideration this piece really moved me -thekiller Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece of work great flow with the wording you used and had a balanced structure- unknown I love it. It�s an original. I�ve never read anything like it. You imply so much with the use of so few words. After reading some of your other poems I�ve come to this conclusion: you�re not a writer, you�re an artist. Keep it up. �Che Reading through your poems, I get nothing -but- imagery. It's beautiful, and it speaks not only visuals, but also a language only those who have lived it can understand. SugarlessC The heart of your poems/poetry is beautiful- Vibrant Ohh, but it is so strong. It kept me enthralled all the way through and I was *riveted*. It's feisty, and from the heart-Learah I can relate to this piece.... I wish I could have written this one, because I feel like this daily. Great write. Your others are great as well, but this one really reached me. You just have such an amazing style. ~Anchiale~ This poem really made me think about the tensions and hostilities between people of different skin colors. The world just needs to forget all differences and get along. You did a great job of making people think. Good job 3shadesofgrey Your poems are so wonderful. It feels like sitting upon a tree and admiring the sunlight in some spots. And also liking the shaded areas, and everything else that is.... I enjoyed reading your poems! -Vibrant This was. unexpected. Didn't think you were the kind to write angry poetry but now I'm so glad I read this. You're right. Prejudice is prejudice whatever way you look at it. Sugar coating sour words with empty platitudes or patronizing pretentiousness doesn't work when YOU know the true meanings. Right on, girl. -Learah |
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