Ruth Padel Reviews Impediments
Adrian Rice
Abbey Press
30 pp. �3.00


This is a tough book for an outsider brought up in London and Greece, whose Celtic heritage consists of one grandmother from the island of Bute, to review in responsible depth.  As a poet, you register the artful but plain language.  If Rice were a carpenter, he would keep to homegrown timbers.  No veneer: everything well planed, dove-tailed, squared off underneath.  Technically, the vowel-patterns, the organic way lines mesh into each other, the play and balance of words within a lone, and the movement through a poem, is solid and convincing; and lightening, sometimes surreal, self-subversive jokiness runs through the craft.  In one poem the poet entrusts himself to a deaf barber who must "deliver a 'cut-above-the-rest' " or people gossip about him "at a club for the deaf".  The barber explains this "in ear-splitting whispers":  Rice is getting at the idea of sinisterly silent control in a social landscape, by mixing joky paradoxes of deafness and gossip with images of razors.

But technique is technique:  it's what you do with it that counts.  Impediments uses art to spotlight and question the poet's Protestant background.  Poetically and politically, this must be a daring step into untrodden territory.  "Look in thy heart and write" is fine advice for an individual:  but what if your heart is teeming with angst about a community that doesn't want to be written about?

A central poem is "Handing Over the Reins":  a Browningesque monologue by an evangelical pastor briefing someone to take over his church, and cagey about the Catholic converts:

      Be all things to all men to win some,
      But don't pander to cultural quirks or remnants
      Of prejudice lingering amongst adopted brethren.

This is a deeply upsetting poem:

      The rigmarole of religion clings to them
      In spite of the bloodmark on their hearts.

Through it, the poet questions the way politics tangle with faith:

                               the Redeemed
      Will recognize Her Majesty the Queen.

"We are", says the pastor, "Protestant Christians from Ulster" -
and nuance is forbidden:

      Make clear what we stand for in these dark days -
      Black and white, not grey, in doctrine and practice.

The voice gets fragmented and repetitive towards the end, as if
Its belief in itself is running down:

      Our inheritance is Protestant � is scriptural �
      Is Protestant � is straightforward and simple.
      We've run over time.  I take it that's ample?

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