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LOOKING AT THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN    
      SHOWING VS TELLING 
 
                                    
  
TELLING
SHOWING (Describe the situation instead of using verbs like am, was, etc.)
1. The pizza was delicious.
Steam rising up off the melted cheese made my mouth water.  The first bite, my teeth sinking into the cheese through the tomato sauce and into the moist crust, made me chew and swallow rapidly.  Even the cheese and tomato sauce, sticking to my fingertips, begged to be licked.
2. The morning was beautiful.
Behind the mountains the sun peaked brightly ready to start a new day.  The blue sky remained silent yet showed signs of saddness.  The wind whispered through the trees as the cheerful sun rose.  The birds sang gently by my window as if they wanted to wake me up.
NOW TRY YOUR OWN....
The monster was really ugly.
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He is sick.
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The classroom was chaos.
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THe party was wild.
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