I use the blackboard (actually in my classroom it's a marker board) throughout this project, although I am trying to get my school to spring for the equipment that would allow me to use my laptop instead, projected onto a large screen. Either way works, but if you have the technology I think there are two advantages to using the computer-one for you and one for your students. For the students, the use of technology makes the project seem more important and more exciting. For the teacher, it saves time, particularly if you are teaching a number of different classes every day. Since I cannot just leave the material on the board from lesson to lesson, I must frantically type everything into my computer (of course writing it on paper would work too, but I type faster than I write) at the end of each class, to save it for next time. This is often a major pain because our school schedule does not include flex time in between periods, so I am generally faced with ushering one group in just as the last is leaving. Also, although I have no way to really test this theory, my students are always telling me (with appropriate sense of wonder) that I write "really, really fast" on the board. If it is true that I write measurably faster than most teachers, then I may have designed a lesson plan that works only for me, because I am constantly aware that the time it takes to write on the board is slowing me down. In any case, I think the project works perfectly well with a board, but if the technology is available to you, I heartily suggest you take advantage of it. In any case everything must eventually find its way into your computer if you are to print out the professional-looking script I like to end the project with.

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• Step One-Analysis

The first two lists are easy, but the third needs some explanation. With first-graders, for example, you can't just ask, "What are the events in the story?" If you get anything at all, it will probably not be a narrative list of plot points. What I do is to start by saying, "What is the FIRST THING THAT HAPPENS in our story?"" And I write it down. (Mother Pig tells the Three Pigs they have to move out.) "Okay, good. Now, WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?" At this point you will get a large variation of what I call "degrees of next." Some will say, "They don't want to go," (which I think is too specific-it's really part of the first event) while others will say, "They all build houses," (which I think is too general-it's really several events). I try to respect every response, while gently coaching the students to come up with responses of an appropriate order of magnitude. (There are an infinite number of "right" responses, naturally. One might be, "the first pig makes a house of straw.") I try not to have a specific idea of how the outline should go. In this example, for instance, it is up in the air whether the next event is the building of the second house or the destruction of the first. But a principle I hold is that just because there is no one "right" answer to a question does not mean that every answer is right. If we have agreed as a class that we're telling the story of The Three Little Pigs, I won't allow space aliens. (On the other hand, we could choose to do a story like that.) The point is that this project is about making a play from a story, not about making up the story. Throughout the project, once we have settled and agreed upon a detail as a class, I won't allow the group to change that detail. This may seem harsh, and some teachers might ignore it with great success, but I have found that, at least with my particular boys, it is important to keep moving forward if the project is going to come to a successful conclusion. (This is especially important if we are writing a play to be performed at an already scheduled assembly.) If I don't sit on them, the boys are perfectly capable of becoming mired forever in re-thinking and re-doing in the previous steps of the process, rather than focusing on the current one. HOWEVER, and this is paramount, I never disparage or belittle that impulse. I try to value it by saying something like, "You could write another version of the story yourself, and try out your idea, because it's a good one. It's just not what we agreed upon for this version."

Step one usually takes up a whole class period, and results in a list of characters, a list of settings (this one's not always necessary) and a rough outline of the plot. More importantly, though, it results in a class full of kids who have really thought about the mechanics of the story, often in ways they never have before.

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• Step Two-Improvising

I write on the board. Scene One: Mother Pig tells the Three Pigs they have to move out.

Then I choose the requisite number of students (in this case four) and ask them to act out the scene. I might do this several times with different groups, trying to involve as many students as possible.

Important note: the biggest problem I have at this stage is that students think that being asked to "play" a particular character in an improvisation somehow means they will "get" or "have" to play that character in the performance. I have to continually remind the class that what we are doing is WRITING A PLAY, and that it has nothing to do with the eventual performance of that play. I don't know if all groups will have that problem, but it's best to nip it in the bud.

As the groups perform, the whole class brainstorms ways to refine the plot. (At first you'll probably get a very short scene consisting of Mother Pig saying, "You have to move out," and the other three shuffling out in silence.) I coach the group with questions like, "Is she just going to come out with it like that?" "How do you think the pigs feel now?" "Do you think they should say anything?" When possible, I like to give students who are not currently "performing" first crack at questions like these. What is aimed for is a model in which the seated students are coaching the performers themselves.

It is important to note that while dialogue will surely result at this point, I don't write it down yet. This step in the process if for cataloging the fine points of the outline. What ends up on the board will be something like the following:

Scene One: Mother Pig tells the Three Pigs they have to move out
Mother Pig has the little pigs sit down.
She tells them that they're all grown up now, and they have to move out.
The first and second pig complain bitterly, but Mother Pig is firm.
The third pig is confident.
The three pigs leave to go make houses for themselves.

I repeat this process for each event in the outline. This can take several weeks if the story is long.

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• Step Three-Dialogue

Cast of Characters
Mother Pig
First Little Pig
Second Little Pig
Third Little Pig
Big Bad Wolf

                           (The forest, inside Mother pig's
                       house.  Mother Pig has called her three
                       children together.  They sit listening
                       to her.  She means to tell them it's
                       time they set out on their own.)

                            (Two of the Little Pigs really don't
                        want to go.)

                            (The Three Little Pigs leave the
                         house forever.)

There is no title yet, because I usually tell my students it is best to make up the title last, since that way you know exactly what it is naming. (In the same way a puppy's name is more likely to be appropriate if you wait until you actually see the puppy to name him.) The reason for the over-written stage directions will become apparent later.

I hand out the scripts and we read them together. I explain what is meant by "DIALOGUE"-a process that takes more or less effort depending on the sophistication of the students. (If they're fifth-graders I don't really need to explain.) I also take the opportunity at this point to make sure there are no errors or deletions in the names of the playwrights. That way when we're all finished, I can present the students with a finished script that will not have such errors.

Once again we take the scenes one at a time.

Each time we come to DIALOGUE, the class brainstorms who speaks and what, exactly, they should say. I coach them as much as necessary and as little as possible. All the dialogue is written on the board, and changed or adjusted as we fine-tune it. If we encounter a scene that is hard to write, we might ask a few students to act it out, and try out different lines, to see if we like them.

Always once we're "finished" with a scene, I have a few students act it out (in the style of a staged reading, with me reading the stage directions out loud) to make sure the lines work in context and "flow" well. Often further fine-tuning results.

We do this with every scene. It can take several weeks. Then we make up a title.

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• Stage Directions/Narrators

HOWEVER, I am frequently placed in a position of needing to give everyone an individual line. In public performances, when the audience consists largely of the parents of the class, this is a political necessity. Often I solve this problem by creating large numbers of NARRATORS. I would be considerably less comfortable doing this if the play were not written by the class, but I have found that I almost never run into hurt feelings, because of the ownership everyone takes in the project. (Also, of course, I take every available opportunity in production to give the students non-speaking action and to involve them in set-making, etc., but that's for a discussion of production.) Now you know why the stage directions above are overwritten. It makes them easier to turn into narration lines. Usually all I have to do is change the tense from present to past. (Naturally I could just write them that way to begin with, but when they are stage directions, I want them to be correctly expressed as stage directions.)

Cast of Characters
Mother Pig
First Little Pig
Second Little Pig
Third Little Pig
Big Bad Wolf

                             (The forest, inside Mother Pig's
                        house.  Mother Pig has called her three
                        children together.  They sit listening
                        to her.)

                              (Two of the Little Pigs really
                          don't want to go.)

                               (The Three Little Pigs leave the
                           house forever.)

Matt Buchanan

A GRADE 2 PLAY Click to see an example of a play written by a Second Grade class.
A GRADE 3 PLAY Click to see an example of a play written by a Third Grade class.

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