| Basically my first real story, and the thing that really turned me onto writing, so therefore it's monumental thing indeed. What is it is basically a fanfic type thing I wrote for a message board that I was really into at the time.. only, it has absolutely nothing to do with the game that the board was about (Harvest Moon 64 :P). Just to explain the weird names, they're names of people from the board. The characters really could be named anything, but that's just the way it went.
It's certainly nothing life-altering or phenomenal, but I really like it because I wrote it my Freshman year and I devoted a huge chunk of my time to it. I had a ton of fun writing it and it really got me into writing, I think. I also wrote it remarkably quickly and made it up as I went, typing it directly into the message box on the board. There's something loveable about it, I think, even though it's essentially like another classic D&D ripoff fic. :) It's the longest one I've written so far, and there are some pretty good parts, I think. All the corny and lame parts, too, but hey, it's sort of a package deal kind of thing. I read it from time to time and appreciate the way my young and tender mind worked, and yearn for my youth again. Then I come to my senses. But really, please enjoy it.
Mystic's Quest - Chapters 5 through 8 Mystic's Quest - Chapters 9 through 13 |
Beneath a blood red sky lay an enormous, dark fortress. Inside this sinister place, a source of pure evil dwelled. This being's unrestrained evil had destroyed all that had once lived around him. The land was barren and cracked, for the earth itself had perished as a result of this evil. He who dwelled in this sinister place was only known to exist in stories, the ones people told to frighten young children. Many believed him to have died long ago, but they did not know the truth. Emthane still lived on! "Asiiia..." a deep, growling voice rumbled. A young woman stepped forward with trepidation. She put on her bravest face and replied, "Yes, Master. I am here." "I have a mission for you..." the voice said from behind the large jeweled throne in which the evil one sat. "I am ready to do your bidding, O wise Master," she said. "Come closer, then, I will tell you what you must do." Asia stepped forward hesitantly. She bent lower so that she could hear the whispered words from the demon-like mouth. She could barely make out what her master was saying, but she understood well enough. The assignment was horrifying; it involved Cricket, the girl from Asia's village who had been her best friend. Cricket still believed they were friends, and Asia did nothing to stop that image. Cricket knew nothing of Asia's new life. Asia had turned to Emthane because she realized his unstoppable power. She knew he would never be defeated. Still, the job was blood-curdling. But, Asia knew that defiance would be her death. She nodded grimly and bowed to Emthane. "I will do your bidding, Master." She set out for her small village, fearful of what she must do to keep her life.
Faster and faster, Cricket urged the horse forward. She could feel the horse tiring, but she knew they had to get back as fast as possible. She channeled some of her own power to the horse to give it strength. The horse perked up and ran faster. Strator clung to her, fearing what had happened, because Cricket told him what happened on the way back. Cricket's face was set. She would get back. Now. At last they came to the road that led to the village. Cricket's fear was building. They thundered down the road, oblivious to all that surrounded them. The countryside whizzed by as they hurdled down the dirt road, the dust smoking up behind them. The village came in to view at last. Cricket's worst fears had come true. Where the village and all her friends had once lived, there was only a pile of smoldering ashes and rubble. She hurled herself to the ground. She knelt there, among the ruins of her peaceful home. Strator hung back a ways, letting Cricket be. He felt awful, though he had never seen what the village had looked like before its destruction. Cricket rose slowly to her feet. She walked to where her home had once stood. Then she saw something that made her cry out. A charred skeleton, perhaps a child's, lay amidst her burned house. She fell to her knees. Her sorrow was beyond tears; her grief was beyond speaking. She sat there miserably, her face drawn and solemn. Strator came forward to her. He put a hand on her shoulder. Cricket turned her face up to look at him. "Why? Why would someone do this?"Strator's face was as solemn as hers. "I don't know, but I am so sorry." A tear dripped down Cricket's face. The realization of what must have happened hit her. The tears came in full force, and Strator said nothing. He just hugged her and let her cry. He knew she was distraught. Any talking from him would send her into a rage of fury. She wept on his shoulder for a long time, and he held her.
Cricket, Strator, and Kou had set out again. As they walked along, they talked about little things. Kou and Strator were trying to find out what exactly Cricket could do with her powers. She explained it to them as best she could. "Well, I can communicate with people without speaking, like this..." Hey you two! Strator and Kou heard a voice in their heads. If you want to say something back, just think it to me and I'll hear it. Strator replied. Ok, I've got it I think. Me too! said Kou. "Ok, good. I can also read people's minds." "What?!" exclaimed Kou and Strator indignantly. "You mean you can hear what we are thinking?" Strator was worried. "Haha... Ooh, Strator's in trouble..." said Kou. "Well, I could if I wanted to, but I... I don't know. I guess it's like intruding on people. I don't like doing it without permission," she told them. Strator and Kou looked relieved. Cricket continued on with her speech. "Also, I can do minor psychic things, like putting a defensive spell on someone, or channeling my power to something, or taking something's power and using it for myself." "In other words, we don't want to mess with you," said Kou jokingly. "Do you doubt me, Kou? Here, think about something, and I'll tell you what it is then." Cricket closed her eyes. She opened them and said, "You're thinking about how you don�t believe me and how much you want some food." Kou's jaw dropped. He stammered, "Wow, you can do it!" "Yep," was Cricket's reply. As they neared a clearing, they could hear laughing and movement. Kou and Strator grabbed their weapons from their backs. They tiptoed off stealthily to the clearing. Cricket heard them calling her name a few seconds later. "Cricket, come here, it's ok!" Cricket ran into the clearing. She looked around her. There were about twelve other people in the space with Strator and Kou. There was a large cart sitting there also, so Cricket figured they must be some sort of performing troop. "Cricket, these are all of the Mystic Troupe of Performers. This is Link, their leader," said Strator. A short, dark haired girl of about Cricket's age stepped forward. Her long lashes batted furiously at Kou. He blushed. "Pleased to meet you all," she practically purred at them, especially Kou. He coughed and looked away. "So, Link," Cricket said, "who are the rest of these people?" Link called over two tough looking men. "This is Hlao, and this is Chris. They do a strength type of show for the Troupe."
Hlao had a large club in his hand. He thwacked it against his hand. Chris had a sword in his hand. Chris spoke to them first. "How day do," he said, bowing low in a theatrical manner. " Ah, fair lady, it is my pleasure," he addressed Cricket and kissed her hand. Hlao nodded to the three travelers with satisfaction. "Yes, I am Hlao. They call me The Mace Wielder." After they had met the rest of the troop, they sat down to dinner with them. "Ha, we're coming up on a big performance in Goldenlake. You guys are welcome to come along," said Link. Goldenlake was the kingdom not far from where they were camped now. The king and his daughter, Princess Garnet, were known throughout the land for their wealth. "Sure, we'd be happy to," said Strator before Cricket or Kou could object. Cricket looked a little mad. What are you doing?! she asked indignantly. Oh, you could use a good time, fair lady. He chuckled. Cricket sighed. She knew she would regret this. "Well, I suppose..." she said reluctantly. "Great!" said Link. "We're due to give a top-notch performance for his majesty tomorrow's eve. Best get some sleep, we have to get an early start," Link said cheerily. Kou groaned. He was definitely not a morning person. So, with their new friends by their sides, they bedded down for the night.
Cricket could feel the heat from the burning wood. She and her friends ran through the woods, trying to escape the fiery hell behind them. She knew they could not keep this up for long. Turn around, everyone! Get ready to battle! Remember, these are not normal people we are dealing with here. Be careful. She nodded, and they all spun around. They leaped through the fire. Hlao hung back in the woods a ways, on the other side where it was not burning. Strator leapt at Cliff. Cliff disappeared, and Strator fell into thin air. Cricket whirled around, and seeing that Cliff was right behind her, she aimed a punch at his face. The blow connected, and he staggered. Then he was up again, coming at her. She tried to punch again, but he was ready this time. He held up his dagger, and sliced at her hand. Her hand spattered blood. She was shocked. He grabbed her hand, placed it against a tree, and chopped. He had cut off her hand! Cricket looked at her bloodied stump in anguish. The pain was intense. She blinked back the howling pain inside her, and took cover behind a tree. Link saw Cricket roll off behind the tree. She ran to her. "Cricket! Give me your arm!" she had an urgent tone in her voice. Cricket raised her arm to Link. She was losing blood fast, and she was going unconscious. The poison from the dagger was taking effect. Link had to act.
Link took a deep breath. She raised Cricket's arm, and she kissed it. Cricket's eyes snapped open again. She stared in wonder as her hand sprouted from the stump. Her fingers grew. Her hand was back! She looked up at Link. "What? How did you? Tell me!" she wanted answers. Now. "I'll explain later," said Link, and promptly collapsed on the ground. Cricket looked around frantically. Kou she said. Come take Link somewhere safe! She's hurt! Kou released his arrow. It pierced Lance in the leg. I'm coming! He burst over to where Link and Cricket were. He lifted Link up, slung her over his shoulder, and took off into the woods. Chris was watching... watching from the woods... watching. He watched Lance. He drew his sword. Lance came closer... he lunged! Out from the trees! He stabbed, again and again. Lance staggered, and he fell to the ground. Chris wiped his sword off on the grass. Strator and Cliff were still engaged in battle. Strator hurled himself at Cliff, but Cliff was gone again. "Your friend is dead," said Strator cockily. "Bring his body back to your master." Cliff appeared from the trees. He knelt and lifted Lance. Them he disappeared, Lance and all. Strator, Hlao, Cricket, and Chris stood in the clearing. Scorched bodies lay strewn about. Cricket wiped a tear from her eye. Strator came over to her. "Where did Link and Kou go?" he asked gently. "I... I sent them into the woods. Link was hurt," she replied. Link... Kou... can you hear me? she called to them. Back came the reply. Yes, and we found a good spot to camp tonight. said Kou. Tell us where you are said Cricket. About 200 yards east from where you are. And we are very close to GoldenLake now. noted Kou. The survivors took off into the wood, to the east. After a short while, they came into another clearing, in which Kou was sitting and Link was laying. Cricket rushed to Link. "Is she ok? What's happening to her?" she flooded Kou with questions. "Why don't you tell us?" said Kou. She looked around at the rest of the men. She took a deep breath. "Link... she saved me. I don't know how. Cliff cut off my hand with his dagger, and she came to me and kissed my arm. The hand regrew. See, look!" She held out her arm. They all leaned in to look. They could see the scar of where the hand had been severed. It was a ring around her wrist. After a long silence, Strator spoke. "We'd better get some sleep if we are going to make it to GoldenLake tomorrow," he said reluctantly. He wanted to talk to Cricket alone, but he could tell she was not in the mood to talk to anyone right now. Six weary travelers lay down for a much-deserved sleep.
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