To: [email protected]
Subject: Forgotten Thoughts!
Date: Tue, 4 Mar 2003 23:31:11 -0800
I just finished tha e-mail you sent. tha poem you wanted me to read it was more like a world you have actually experienced. your writing has really become powerful you describe things with such detail that anyone reading it can feel like they are there with you, seeing and touching everything you create. not that im some hot shot writer but even i know that once you can control your reader so by just reading a few sentences of your story they are pulled into your world, living and experiencing a life that you created you can do anything. if you are able to do that then there is nothing stopping you from taking a world you create, a poem that makes every single emotion come out, or tha tru thoughts from tha darkest and most twisted parts of your brain, from your small bedroom in kentucky to every bookstore throughout tha world.
well i wanted to tell you what i thought about your new writings by getting tha point across that you are getting better with each story or poem. and that i think you have that desire that i lacked to make it big, and no longer worry what any one person has to say. of course i think i messed it up and tripped over what i wanted to get across but hey it's late and im no longer tha writer so i'll just be blunt! you and your dark freaky mind are going to get everything that you want, just don't stop and don't let anyone let you think its not worth tha work. if you stop for just a second you'll never find it again, i say this speaking from experience i dropped it cause i started to think like an adult - that writing is for fun something you do in your free time but its not. it can help release your mind when your body is trapped. it can help you relate to that special someone with a written word instead of speaking and not saying what you really feel. and it can without a doubt drive fear into tha strongest person just by revealing tha hideous monster you keep trapped inside your mind. and i can tell with time your going to unleash monsters into this world through your writing that no one will ever come close to truly understanding and if any are brave enough to finish your stories or follow through one of your poems of twisted love, or heartbreak that could destroy tha gods they will never be thay same.
feel free to send me more if you want, i will try to read and reply to them as fast as possible, but i must be going gotta work tomorrow got a fuel center to run and a staff of slaves to fuck with :0) oh one last thing everytime i see a video by avril lavinge i think about you, i think she looks just like you when you had a little bit longer hair. and in her videos she is always wild and violent and that is definitely a quality of yours
Thank you PJ... My dearest Brother
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