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| Starting Date: 1/03/06 Ending Date: 1/20/06 This, idea was first brought up by Aisha and Seripa. Well, this is the image. Your, job is to write a story on how Washu managed to get Tenchi in such a vulnreable position. Of, course I guess you could explain that in a few sentences before writing a lemon scene about this. Personally, I'm not worried about what type of story you write. I'm more worried about how you write it. If, you convey the story poorly then I won't like it. I can usually tell if I like a story or not with the first few sentences as well. So, make sure you grab my attention from the very get go and don't let go of it. What, it means to convey a story poorly. When, I say convey the story poorly I mean you write down sentences like the example below. Washu walked into the room and captured Tenchi with some odd device. Well, there are several problems with this sentence. 1) Its, in past tense. 2) It lacks a lot of details. - What sort of device? - What, was Washu's facial expression? - How, did the device work? - How, did Tenchi react to be caught? - How, did Washu respond to catching Tenchi? - Was anyone else in the room with Tenchi at the time? - What, was the name of the device? Washu, annoucnes the names of all of her gadgets before using them for the most part. So, if you are going to have her use one then you need to name it. Now, obvioiusly you can't stuff all of that stuff into one sentence. Though, answering those sorts of questions will defnitely help you better develop the story and make it more interesting. Also, a catchy device name is also a nice thing as well. |
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| This, is where the prizes for the fanfiction contest will be displayed. The, winners will be displayed when the contest is complete. 1st Place Prize: 10,000 zennie Winner: ? 2nd Place Prize: 7,500 zennie Winner: ? 3rd Place Prize: 5,000 zennie Winner: ? |
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