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A Walk In the Clouds
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By A.J. ([email protected]
)


Author's Note: This is my first fic so I hope you like it! Just some pointers! The prom
thing never happened. Jack and Tobey have never met and they are all in
college.



Setting-Jack is by Jen's bed almost forcing her to get up.

Jack: Come on Jen get up I'm bored, single, and want to do something!

Jen: Jackers just leave me alone and let me sleep. Im tired. God what time
is it?

Jack: Eleven thirty. Isn't that your wake up call anyway?

Jen: Fine fine you win but what is the rush may I ask?

Jack:  We're going to the mall, now get moving!

Jen: {walking off and shaking her head} Men!

Jack: { standing there and shaking his head} Women!

We see Jack and Jen walking down the mall  when they walk into a music store and have been looking around for awhile when-

Employee- { to Jack} Hey I'm Tobey. Um I was just wondering if you needed help. Im good at since I work here. {giggles} so do you?

Jack:{in a little rude of a tone.} We really dont need help we're just browsing. But we'll ask if we do. {sort of half smiles}

Jen: {glares at Jack} But thanks anyway Tobey.

Tobey: No problem just  if you do need my help I'm right over there.{Smiles
at Jack}

Jack: Great.

and with that he walks off.

Jen: And you complain about being single!

Jack: What?!?!

Jen: Oh come on Jack that guy was totally flirting with you and you basicly turned the other cheek.

Jack: How do you know he was flirting with me? I mean he only asked a
simple question.

Jen: My god Jack you are so dense sometimes! You  really need to get your
self a "gaydar".

Jack: Would it make you feel better if  I go apoligize?

Jen: Thats one thing. The other thing is when you get back here you will
have his number!

Jack: Jen! I can't just go up to a guy and do that. It's it's it's......just not
right.

Jen:  Oh come on  Jack  everyone does it. Do it or else I'm leaving without
you.

Jack : Fine, fine I'll go.

As Jen is smirking Jack goes over to Tobey.

Tobey: Hey! So it looks like you needed my help after all.

Jack: Actually I wanted to apologize for being rude earliar. It was nice of
you to offer your help

We see Tobey's reaction he is touched.

Tobey: Wow um thankyou.

Jack: So do you have a phone or is you family from the Amish country?

Tobey: {smiles} It depends on your reason.

Jack: I thought I could call you sometime.

Tobey: Than yes I have a phone.

He jots down his work and home number and gives it to Jack.

Jack: Thanks I'll talk to you later.

Tobey: Yeah ok.

Jack leaves Tobey and goes to Jen outside.

Jen: Oh my gosh you actually have his number go Jack!

Jack: {smiles} Thanks Jen.

Jen: No problem. How do you feel?

Jack: Like I just took a walk in the clouds.

Jen smiles and they turn to go back home.

To be continued...
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