This definately is the most overall entertaining story that I have come up with. It didn't come out nearly as absurdly depressing or morbid as Psychopath's Dream, and in general is just a good alternatingly humorous and sometimes intriguing story which is more or less based on a dysfunctional game of Dungeons and Dragons where all of us were playing it for the first time. Hilarity ensured, devious plans schemed, and a very baffled game master ultimately decided weeks later that his time would be spent elsewhere.
For any of you who ever somehow came to this site before (which I doubt many did considering the fact that I don't get this site advertised much at all) I'm definately NOT going to neglect this site like I have before. I've been working some of the first chapter and by the end of this week I'm going to have the basic charachter bios down.
Comments and constructive criticism are always allowed.