Nick Scipio's Summer Camp — Franz Kafka's Ad-hoc critiques

FranzKafka's Ad-hoc-critiques — How it works.

In this column are links to the discussed chapter and, in some cases links to earlier chapters, eventually to the concerning subchapter.

Above we see a direct link to the discussed chapter on Nick's site.

The middle column takes the text of my ad-hoc-critiques. It remained unchanged — except for editing spelling and grammar errors. No other changes were made. That means, that the text shows the knowledge I had in the moment, when the chapter was new.

The main reason for doing my ad-hoc-critiques was the urge to react on events in the story. I wanted to avoid multi-message-posting for each chapter, so I started with my "Thoughts on chapter..." — writing them down, while I read the story, switching between the browser's and text editor's windows every few seconds.

Quotes from "Summer Camp" can be recognised in this HTML version through the background color:

The right column may contain links, corrections, or remarks by others. They've not been in the original.
Links to forum messages work only if you're logged in at groups.yahoo.com and have subscribed to Scipio's Forum.

If Nick made a comment to my Thoughts, it's here with a green background.

"Mom's fine," I reassured her. "She was calling to tell me that a friend had died."

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Other Forum member's may have made remarks after the initial posting of the Thoughts. Some of them I quote in the left or right column. They can be recognised by a blue background.

I retain original italics or bolds. If I felt to point out a special part of a quote, I made it red in this HTML version.

I hope you'll enjoy this.

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Above is an example, how the chapter from which the quote was taken is denoted, e.g. Book 1, Chapter 1 (Only given if different from the discussed chapter.)

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