| Gentryfey 2003-10-07 So, was the book Rogue read about the soulmates Obsidian Butterfly by Lauell K Hamilton? This is a great story. I love the way you've written it. Its done very well. Can't wait for some more. DBZpunkchick 2003-10-07 cool...update soon LizE 2003-10-06 This is a really good story. Very original (though I haven't read every fanfic ever written) I like the maturity your giving to Rogue and I also like the way your handling the Remy/Rogue romance. keep it up. ishandahalf 2003-10-06 ooh! OOH! i'm SO glad that you continued this, cuz it's AMAZING! i LOVE it, i really do! it's so cool to see rogue with all this independence. i can totally see her doing what she is. and i just LOVE how you've made logan and rogue so close. aww, he visits her? how sweet? but of course, my favourite is the remy factor! ahh, the emails and phone calls are just ADORABLE! i really want more romy! could you PLEASE bring some on? will he come and visit her? or will she ever go back home? and how does he feel about her? ahh, so many question! so keep it coming, quick like a bunny on crack! Mary 2003-10-05 Please write more this story is really super cool! please write more soon! dragonmage 2003-10-05 Let me just start by saying that this is a really awesome story. I really can't wait to see what happens next! I like the way you're writing this so far with Rogue reminiscing on what's happened so far. It compresses something that would have taken a long time to write with dialouge into a smaller area and it's easier to read. I hope Remy comes to visit Rogue soon though. So, all in all, this story definitely DOESN'T suck. And don't leave us all in suspense here! I at least want a quick update! :) dragonmage Rogue4787 ([email protected]) 2003-10-05 I love how this chapter was just narration and not dialoge. At first I thought that was kind of strange and I wasn't sure if I would like it, but I did. It made me think of the story as if it were a movie. THis chapter sounded like one of those scenes in the movies when the main character is going about their everyday life and there is music playing in the background and you can see people talking, but you can't hear what they are saying because it's the image that's important and not the words. You proabably have no idea what I'm talking about, but it is a good, thing I swear. I love the last line about the ice cream. Everything was so deep and serious and then all of a sudden I just burst out laughing because that wasn't what I expected to read at all. I hope that ther is some more dialoge in the next part and that it is posted soon. You are a great writer. Yumiko 2003-10-05 Aww, itsn't that sweet. Update soon please. I like the plot idea. Loup Garou42 2003-10-05 Loving this story. It's okay that it doesn't follow the show. What fic ever really does? By the way, the book with the soul mates thing, was it Obsidian Butterfly by Laurill K Hamilton? Caliente 2003-10-05 Wow, you managed to cover the span of 3 1/2 years in a chapter. But it was done gracefully and I am very impressed. Lord only knows I can't do that!! Anyway, love the chappy. Love the story. Update soon plz!! Adios. |
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