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OK ppl. I fnshed part o part 1. i no thats stupid but ya. Its not done, but if you want to read the icky crappy no good i need to fix alot version be my geust. The link is just below. C&C are welcome, along with any flames, but you need to remember this is my FIRST fanfic. By the way for those of you who are obbsessed with hentai fics, I'll be adding one of those soon too. If you have any suggestions for a new fic email me!