Interactive Poetry 1999
Page Two

Beginning again in March 1999 and in conjunction with the inaugeration of our monthly newsletter, the Interactive Poem developed a better set of guidelines as pertains to deadline for entries on the current exercise and the commencement of a new poem. That is: the exercise became monthly with new poems beginning on or about the 20th of the month previous and concluding on or about the 18th of the month current.

Poems on this page represent the following months:

March

     

April

     

May

June

     

July

     

August

September

                       




Interactive Poem Three (March, 1999):

The poem began with the lines:

Deep in the Winter of my waning youth
My heart was frozen in time...
(Mgonzalez01)

It concluded on March 29, 1999 with the following work:

Legacy

Deep in the Winter of my waning youth
My heart was frozen in time...
    (Mgonzalez01)

 

Pain grasped with icey fingers and
held me captive turning my sunshine smile to stone...
   (RobinMin)

 

and dashing the mirror promise of inheritance
of my mother's and my mother's mother's face
upon that unfeeling rocky place
the cold hope lost recast my countenance.
   (AngelPie_Mouse)

 

And Assessing Time's handiwork with care
My eyes have been deceived all these years
For my soul until this moment did not register
These deep lines and markings and so I fear.
   (Mgonzalez01)

 

Who am I in this making?
Who am I in this unmaking?
Who am I in this taking?
Who am I in this untaking?
What will I become?
and what leave behind?
What whispers do I hear
down the long corridor of mothers?
Were there answers to questions,
the universe would be known in full;
but there are no answers only a forward pull
to a mirror ripe with suggestions.
   (AngelPie_Mouse)

 

Perplexity gazes back adjacent
to this sudden clue. Standing
and pondering as my waning youth
passes before me..I moved from
the mirror with its poignant
views, and lived life.
   (Robinmin)



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Interactive Poem Four (April, 1999):

The poem began with the lines:

Down the long grey sky of season's daybreak
A hand streaks clouds to riot, merging.
(Angel-Pie)

It concluded on April 30, 1999 with the following work:

Earth song

Down the long grey sky of season's daybreak
A hand streaks clouds to riot, merging
   (AngelPie_Mouse)

 

The moon rises and casts its reflection upon the gentle lake
As dusk is approaching....
   (mgonzalez01)

 

O' such a wondrous sight it is,
a moment when life is beginning,
breaking to be free and wild,
touched,
and pushed from above,
yet, another brilliance giving truth...
   (EnchantedWords)

 

Not merely God in the clockwork of the universe,
but God in the single blade of grass,
God in the bud of a tree leafing,
God in the earth.   
(AngelPie_Mouse)

 

The whole Universe reeks of the Creator's pressence
The air is His breath...
The rain, His gentle tears that pours upon us
We, ungrateful children, do not appreciate much
That God in his infinate mercy and love
Has given us a wonderous inheritance!   
(Mgonzalez01)

 

Though we still aspire for His love,
a touch within dream,
meaning for our life,
a truth,
and standing upon this cliff,
looking out to sea,
tells of no more than how it is.   
(Enchanted Words)



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Interactive Poem Five (May 1999):

The poem began with the lines:

He was just a tiny lad
Only turned thirteen this day
He reeked of aftershave like his dad
He looked up to him in everyway
Putting on his Kalvin kline jeans
He stuck the 9mm Walther PPK in his pocket
planning to shoot someone to smithereens....
(Mary Gonzalez)

It concluded with the following:


The Kid

     

He was just a tiny lad
Only turned thirteen this day
He reeked of aftershave like his dad
He looked up to him in everyway
Putting on his Kalvin kline jeans
He stuck the 9mm Walther PPK in his pocket
planning to shoot someone to smithereens....
      (Mary Gonzalez)

 

One last look into mirror,
a reflection was born,
"The Kid" stands tall,
lanky, and the gun hanging there,
screaming to come alive.

 

Three jumps down the stairs,
quickly looking from room to room,
before exiting the front door,
a last look he knowing to become seen,
only in a dream.

 

One thought came to mind,
as passing the cars, people, and homes,
why?
      (EnchantedWords)

 

Why? a realized excuse for intimacy,
briefly experienced and set aside, forgotten.
He was as relevent an outcome
as their feelings for each other,
Squandered years ago and never renewed.
He was tangible
only in the sense of liability--
So much for designer label jeans,
So much for atheletic shoes,
books on the stairs,
a bicycle in the front yard,
a penciled note for a dentist appointment
held fast on the refrigerator door
with plastic daisy covered magnet.
In all else he was invisible.
Had he had more wit about him,
he would have worn it like a cloak of invulnerability.
Nothing would have touched him
as he touched nothing,
had never touched anything,
had never learned how to touch.

 

The gun would change all that.
He was learning how to touch now.
      (AngelPie_Mouse)

 

The kid felt the cold steel
Against his skin
Knowing, just knowing what a bullet must feel
Penetrating an enemy's skin and sinew; what a sin!
But what a rush of adrenalin!
And this gave the Kid more power too
It awakened in him a desire for blood and violence
That it scared him at the same time

and he was mesmorized and left without a clue
As to this renewed sense of prowess
that took over his entire self...      (Mgonzalez01)
 

Voices, those voices keep coming,
saying this is wrong,
there is that thought again,
telling me it can be done so easily,
devouring all of what conscience I have,
"The Kid" will be thy self given a mortality,
sensing there need a turn ahead,
the corner as passing,
gives a look down the street to the big double doors,
a grand entrance to the church,
and he keeps on walking...
(Enchanted Words)

 

Mr. C set down his newspaper
at the breakfast table
looking up at the slip of slate sky
through the kitchen window
he shook his head
lips pressed in a thin line
and forehead bunched in
a momentary expression of concern
"Conspiracy Suspected at Columbine"
Who bought the guns?
Who put them into the hands of the children?
He turned from the black letter headline
to the business section
and shrugged.

 

And in the street outside,
The Kid turned the corner,
Elm Avenue to Main Boulevard.
7:46 a.m.
      (AngelPie_Mouse)


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Interactive Poem Six (June 1999):

The topic for this month as set by NALewis is "freedom of speech." The poem began with the lines:

These be words, beliefs
Why I say "I ain't got none right now"
Improper!
The reason I praise Jesus at most
Atheist conventions
      (NALewis, 943 - 990519)


It concluded with the following poem:


Voice

These be words, beliefs
Why I say "I ain't got none right now"
Improper!
The reason I praise Jesus at most
Atheist conventions
     (NALewis)

 

Don't let fear paralyze
Your vocal chords, my freind
It is our God given rights, you must realize
And this the Constitution does deffend
Freedom to speek what's on your mind
Freedom, beautiful freedom to blurt out what you feel...
To render your opinion and leaving fear behind...
     (Mary Gonzalez)

 

The timid will answer
"but we must be politically correct.
We must avoid any chance to offend."
Or, is that reserved for only "them?"
A new form of prejudice
Or, perhaps, an old in new clothes.
It is difficult to tell in silence
--who and why and how condemn.
     (AngelPie_Mouse)

 

Let us with One voice spread the word

 

Like wildfire, and in unison, let us voice together
And for once as a whole be heard!
And spread our message with One Voice...
This is our Constitutional Rights! It will always be forever!
With confidence, we do have a choice...
We can open our mouths together and express our opinions
Whatever they may be....
Be respected for what we say...
And still retain our dignity...
This is the American Way!!!!
     (Mary Gonzalez)

 

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Interactive Poem Seven (July 1999):

The topic for this month as set by MGonzalez01 is "images of summer." The poem began with the lines:

Summertime!!! The heat is on!!
Blue skies above,
With a raging, orange sun
And the pulsating heat of a summer love!!!
Barbacues flaring
The smell of smoldering coals
The aroma of hot dogs in the park
As children play ball
And the dogs bark...
     (mgonzalez01)


It concluded with the following poem:


Images of Summer

Summertime!!! The heat is on!!
Blue skies above,
With a raging, orange sun
And the pulsating heat of a summer love!!!
Barbacues flaring
The smell of smoldering coals
The aroma of hot dogs in the park
As children play ball
And the dogs bark...
     (mgonzalez01)

 

I would reach for you.
A smothering blanket
weighs down the arms
presses the body
drapes the head and shoulders
lies scoldingly on bare knees.
Too hot, the sun
where no breeze comes to lend relief
and no shade is born.
But in its ardent blister
all things whither.
     (AngelPie_Mouse)

 

From somewhere in mind,
the thought carries unto past,
when time was not meant to be,
when summer was fun
through the eyes of a child.
Whence the moment of heat,
this day brings,
and shall be forgiven into night's
calm and soothing comfort of coolness,
time again will not be of importance,
The child that lie in sleep,
is all that matters.
     (crowstouch)

 

Summertime, Oh, sweet, sweet Summertime!
You come forth with a lifeforce of your own!
A burning, incandescent radiance that at this time..
The season, short as it may be and short outgrown..
Pulsates with the fire of your soul
And covers us with rays of sunshine
Which engulfs us all...
     (mgonzalez01)

 

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Interactive Poem Eight (August 1999):

The topic for this month as set by AngelPie_Mouse is "August." The poem began with the lines:

August morning, 7 a.m. in the city...
Odors of hot tar and asphalt
mingle with car exhaust,
steamy coffee smells from nearby cafes,
and greasy donuts from carts on the avenue.
Horse patrols ride by the intersection.
The cobbled alleys give up the stench
of winos cleared out before dawn.
Glass and steel glistening, too hot to sweat.
Phones ring unanswered in offices not yet open
and the passage of pedestrians
leaves footprints in the street.
     (AngelPie_Mouse)


It concluded with the following poem:


Summer in the City

August morning, 7 a.m. in the city...
Odors of hot tar and asphalt
mingle with car exhaust,
steamy coffee smells from nearby cafes,
and greasy donuts from carts on the avenue.
Horse patrols ride by the intersection.
The cobbled alleys give up the stench
of winos cleared out before dawn.
Glass and steel glistening, too hot to sweat.
Phones ring unanswered in offices not yet open
and the passage of pedestrians
leaves footprints in the street.
     (AngelPie_Mouse)

 

The heart of a city never dies,
for it lives even as we sleep.
Never stopping time for one person
and forever swallowing another into its night.
This is the tragedy before the rushing, crushing,
and pushing of cattle when the bell rings.
Is this all we have to offer?
     (Isitis)

 

Is it the city which has life indeed,
or is it the cumulative personality
of men and women and machines
blending into a single personae
sightless, mindless.
A Greek chorus of faces and voices
watching the blinding of Oedipus unfold,
nodding.
There is nothing so pleasant
as the fall of kings
to assure us of our superiority.
     (AngelPie_Mouse)

 

The city never sleeps, indeed!
But men and women ponder
In their aching need
To slow down the pace of urban living, they often wonder...
How our ancestors managed under the hot August skies...
Sitting on their porches, rocking slowly
Whilst inhaling the sweet smell of apple pies
Cooling in the breeze.
Sipping lemonade
As grandmother knitted in perfect ease...
Did they suffer from stress
As we city people do?
Did they suffer high blood pressure,
I must try to guess;
How did they ever handle

the heat and humidity that dried the summer
morning's dew...
     (mgonzalez01)
 

The heat...
How do we fight something that is so out of our control?
Something we craved, something we need,
And yet something so amazing that it can give life and take it away
. How can we acquire the wisdom that slip so easily

from our hands that our ancestors hold so dear?
We are only human as a lily is only a plant.
We can only do what our minds restrict us to.
So let go of the rush, the pain, and the worry.
See the sky, the clouds, and the flowers.
Drink the sun-kissed golden medicine down
to the tunnel of your soul.
Let the wind tickle your ears
and the birds sing you a lullaby.
Let nature to you its story.
Let the magic of the season ignite all your senses.
Don't let the spirit of August fade away.
     (Isitis)
 

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Interactive Poem Nine (September 1999):

Every month there is a new Group Poem at the CyberPoet�s Niche Club. It begins on the 20th of the previous month, with this newsletter, and concludes a few days before (so we can go to press with it). This work is a special poem woven by each of the members of the CyberPoet�s Niche (that is: all members are welcome to contribute in open forum). This month, for the month of September, the topic was "autumn" and it began with a contribution by OldCusser which read::

The first leaves fall from the oaks in the lane
Autumn is happening again ...
(OldCusser)


This was followed by a complaint from AngelPie_Mouse (me) that the single couplet start had forced her to write her entry in couplets. That message somehow got carried forward for several posts unheeded, which means that the couplets were not adhered to by all adding to the poem. Eventually, when AngelPie_Mouse got control again, she was able to delete the complaint.

The resulting poem follows:


Autumn

The first leaves fall from the oaks in the lane
Autumn is happening again ...
    (OldCusser)

 

Russet and gold, the color of blood
the maple tree, the alder, the elm join the flood
A cascade of color bright in their hue
Falling to earth, the harvest is due.
     (AngelPie_Mouse)

 

The mingling colors old friends which meet
After days and months of hiding complete
Behind green cloaks, now the maples come out
In their finest array and the wind blows about
Their beautiful clothes in earnest display
And sends to the ground their majestic array.
     (poetry_gal)

 

And in the woods a lady dressed in a golden gown
Holds out her arms extended in a sweet embrace
With curls of amber and a golden crown
To welcome the new babe, Autumn and kiss her face!
     (mgonzalez01)

 

As the leaves fall,
the smell of autumn fastly approaches us.
The squirrels are collecting their supplies
to prepare for what's ahead.
The lands seem to go into relax mode,
to settle in for the long haul.
Soon the gray sky's will take over, and the
silky blanket of white will take over the land.
     (rick)

 

And thus, the cycle is complete.
Like a silver ring with no beginning and no ending..
Life does spin
In an orbit of change.
Nothing remains the same forever
But all creatures must embrace
The metamorphosis of nature...
     (mgonzalez01)

 

Change and change again.
The whirl and swirl of bright ornaments
A day clock mechanism,
spiraling to dazzle the senses.
We watch in rapt fascination--
Not wholly within, not wholly without--
A paradox between
yet still beneath the glass dome of wonder.
     (AngelPie_Mouse)

 

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