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Story - The Matchmaker     Author: Sara     Reviewed by: Chelsea
This was one of the very first story that I posted on this site and continues to be  among one of my personal favorites.  The idea behind the story is simple, but it's a lot of fun to read.  Sara draws you in and keeps you there.  The story is funny and engaging.  If you haven't read it yet, you should.

Story - The Matchmaker      Author: Sara    Reviewed by: Smenzer
This is one of my favorite stories.  It's also one of the very first Xena fan fics I ever read.  It's very well written and the dialog pulls you in right away.  I love how Gabrielle never figures out what Ares goal is.  It's funny.  If you love Ares/Gabrielle stories, you have to read this one.

Story - I Am Not Amused   Author:  Lady Leonie   Reviewed by: Chelsea
This is the third installment of the storyline which Lady Leonie started with
Just Rewards.  The whole story continues from one part to the next, so you really should read the other parts first in order to fully understand and appreciate the story. The entire story so far has been great, very well written, and is still continuing.  I've chosen part 3 of the story simply because I found this part to be hilarious.  I remember reading it and couldn't stop laughing.  I was still laughing the next day when the name 'Porkus' ran across my mind.

Story - The Wish    Author: Lady Leonie   Reviewed by: Tracy
I just read this story and had to review it.  I've read a lot of stories, as you all have, and I must say that this one is among the best.  By comparison, it is short, but the content is full of the imagery that makes a good story great.  This is a definite read.

Story - The Wish   Author: Lady Leonie Reviewed by: Sierra
This is a wonderful holiday piece of fiction.  Although it doesn't have any intricate plot lines or big action scenes, it makes me feel tranquil and mellow.  Sometimes you read a story and it just makes you feel good.  This story did that for me.  Lady Leonie did a super job of depicting the story.  I could actually 'see' it just by reading the written words.

Story - The Long Way Home   Author: Chelsea   Reviewed by: Sierra
Well, first of all, this story was written as a favor to me, and as usual, Chelsea came through with flying colors.  She said it was 'mushy', well, I think it's just pure romantic.  I love how she could take the readers into the minds of her characters.  I felt every emotions of Ares and Gabrielle the whole time that I was sitting there reading this.

Story - Moth to the Flame   Author: Leonie Kelley      Reviewed by: Sara
I'm totally clueless when it comes to poetry, but I love them all the same.  I think Leonie out done herself with the story and the poems.  

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The Truth Shall Set You Free    Author: Amber   Reviewed by: Chelsea
This is definitely a comedy.  The idea of Joxer & Xena might take a little convincing, but why not?  It's a great story with a lot of interesting developments.

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Losing a Daughter    Author: Angel    Reviewed by: Chelsea
One of the biggest problem I had with the Hope story line was that the show never showed us how Gabrielle really felt about her daughter.  It was mentioned in 'The Abyss', but it was never really addressed.  Angel gave us a little insight in this story.

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Between Dream and Reality    Author: Chelsea   Reviewed by: Sara
Okay, I don't know how Chelsea does it, but she wrote a story more erotic than most that I've read, and yet there was nothing graphic about it.  It was all about the emotions.  I love that last conversation between Gabrielle and Ares, that was so typical of Gabrielle.

Story - If Tomorrow Comes        Author: Chelsea    Reviewed by: Magdalena
I loved this story.  But then I love all of Chelsea's stories.  But this was truly beautiful.  I only wish that those that write Xena episodes would understand how good Ares and Gabrielle match.  But thank Zeus for fanfiction.  Ops, it was a review I would write not a complain.)  Anyway read this on and also read the story it was based on: Past All Forgiven!!  Write on!!!!

Story - A Feather for Gabrielle   Author:  Smenzer     Reviewed by:  Magdalena
You know this story just keep getting better and better, it's rare to find a story that is both hilarious and romantic, at least I think so, but this one, wow it's great.  I really don't want to reveal anything of the story to spoil the surprise, instead follow my advice:  READ IT!!!

Story - Hurting & Loving      Author:  Krissiana       Reviewed by:  Marilou
It's really a wonderful story.  Each part brings its own flavor.  Sometimes I'm almost crying and other time I'm laughing so hard I can't stop.  Having Gabrielle choosing into which temples to live is a great idea.  I'm waiting for a new story anytime soon.

Story - A Midsummer's Nightmare    Author:  Chelsea     Reviewed by:  Emerald
Okay, this was great.  Looking past the grammar, this was splendid.  It was light-hearted and funny.  This respresnted, to me, the missing scenes in all of the episode in which Ares and Gabrielle are casted.  They should spend some more alone time, and she should be more Gabby around him.  This story was just like that.  She wasn't a bitch, and she wasn't overly obsessed with him, she was just light-heartedly funny and sarcastic.  This was an amazingly fitting story for their relationship.

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Switching Places     Author: Chlesea    Reviewed by: Magdalena
I was very happy when I found this little story.  Mostly because I love BTVS and XWP, and a story  mixed with Willow, Spike, Ares and Gabrielle is just perfect!  I loved the story, its is very well written and funny.  Chelsea's stories is always good, but this time she has truly made a hit, at least in my opinon.
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